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I love the scenery of my hometown, and I describe and evaluate my composition.
1. Write a composition about the beautiful scenery of my hometown _ 1: My hometown is in Bengbu, Anhui. Although there is no prosperity in Beijing, no high-rise buildings in Shanghai and no blue waves in Qingdao, I like the Huaihe Cultural Square in my hometown best.

The beautiful Huaihe Cultural Square is located on Sports Road in Bengbu City. The roadside facilities are complete and the scenery is beautiful.

There are spectacular theaters, beautiful Wanda cinemas and tall concert halls. The most interesting thing is the music fountain. Whenever night falls and music rings, the surrounding lampposts will emit colorful light, and the stone ball in the middle will spray a water column more than ten meters high and fly into the sky like a white dragon.

At this time, beautiful music accompanied it, and the surrounding small fountains danced for it. At this time, naughty children always rush into the fountain to play. They don't care even if they are soaked. They giggled twice and then rushed into the water curtain to continue their enjoyment.

People can't help dancing and singing at this time. Singing and laughter echoed over the square for a long time.

The cultural square in my hometown is like a bright pearl, embedded at the foot of Yanshan Mountain with flowers and birds. It is a good place for people to have fun! Hometown Beauty Composition _ 2: Lush and indispensable; Let a hundred flowers blossom and be indispensable-my hometown. Although it has no mighty Yellow River or crystal clear Lijiang River; Although it does not have the majestic Mount Tai or the fragrant Xiangshan with red leaves, it has a simple and unique beauty.

Friends, please follow our footsteps and enjoy the flowers, grass, trees and trees in your hometown. The sky in my hometown is bluer and more beautiful than that in other places. The blue sky is Wan Li.

White clouds float comfortably, the sun shines excitedly, and occasionally handsome birds pass by like arrows, which is really poetic. Stop at the end of the road and look into the distance. There are many buildings in my hometown, including red bricks and white tiles. Some point to the sky, some are simple and simple; There are China houses worthy of the name, as well as foreign buildings that have sprung up everywhere.

They are tall and short, big and small, and some are like generals with a tiger's back and a bear's back, unswervingly defending their hometown; Some are like small and exquisite jade, embedded in it, which means nothing. One by one, sweating figures shuttled through it, and one by one, laughter and laughter came into my ears, which made people unable to help but speed up their steps, open their eyes and have a good look.

Walking happily all the way, I suddenly felt that there were colorful things swaying in the wind on both sides, just like fairies, welcoming the faint fragrance secreted into people's spleen from time to time. I can't help but turn my head away. I saw a bunch of red flowers, a bunch of yellow flowers, a bunch of white flowers and a bunch of purple flowers beside me. I leaned over her, bent down and lowered my head, as if to meet her in the aisle.

They bathe in the spring, let the breeze stroke their faces, stretch the green leaves like umbrellas, and compete to show their most beautiful and charming side. I am intoxicated in this sea of flowers, like a boat, floating, enjoying and tasting. It can really be described as "seeing the red and wet place, the flowers in Jinguancheng are heavy"! I can't help my curiosity. Just after two steps, the scenery in front of me suddenly changed: a jade pond came into view, and the water waves swung open, as if to embrace the sun and reflect dazzling golden light.

The weeping willows are reflected in the clear water, green; The blue sky is reflected in clear water, blue; White clouds are reflected in clear water, white. Take a closer look, underwater is a paradise for fish! (Please don't take offense at the graffiti below) A large group, a small group, a large group; Black group, white group, black and white group.

They swim around in the water, running around, sometimes jumping on the dragon gate, sometimes playing games, carefree, which really makes people envy. Before I came to my senses, the naughty little guy jumped out of the water and splashed like a fairy with a bang.

Next to the charming pond is a carpet of rice fields. Rice seedlings and wheat in the field, like newborn babies, look around curiously and explore the world where grass grows and warblers fly.

Of course, there are also unknown scalpers and sweaty farmers. How much effort and sweat they have paid for the bumper harvest! It is they who wrote a loud song of life! Look at that mountain again, wearing a green robe, standing guard for his hometown, standing guard for his hometown, what a selfless giant! ..... all these are beautiful scenery? If I were a painter, I would paint my hometown with my colored brush. If I were a poet, I would praise my hometown with my black and white pen; If I were a singer, I would praise my hometown with my sweet singing voice! Friends, what you hear is false, but what you see is true. Please come to my hometown to see her scenery! Hometown Beauty Composition _ 3: In spring, whenever we get up, we will smell a faint fragrance. In the neighbor's small flower bed, there are many flowers and peach blossoms in full bloom.

Spring Festival is also smiling and doing morning exercises! And on the tall green camphor tree, swallows are chirping and singing, and the song is very crisp. Peach blossoms in spring are more dazzling than each other, and they are more beautiful against the green leaves. Every drop of dew in the morning washes the rosy face of peach blossom.

Winter jasmine is also the messenger of spring. Flowers always attract some colorful flowers. Hu Die, butterflies and Yingchun blend together to form a beautiful picture. In the sunny season, the trees in my hometown will grow luxuriantly. I enjoy the cool in the shade, and there will be some mottled and fine shadows in the shade.

Sometimes I go to my river to play with water. Under the sunlight, there will be sparkling little stars on the water. The water is very cold, and there will be many small fish playing freely under the water. Sometimes I will enjoy delicious grapes and cool air on the vines.

In a season full of fruits, farmers' uncles are busy in the endless golden wheat fields. Although it was hard at that time, it still smelled of labor. At this time, half yellow and half green red maple leaves, yellow leaves and Ye Er fell together and danced in the air like butterflies. In this way, the ground was immediately covered with a soft carpet of leaves, which could be woven into beautiful leaf rings.

In winter, it snows heavily, and every snowflake is so beautiful. It seems that the Snow Fairy specially cut it for us. Just put it in your mouth and taste it.

2. Write a composition about the beautiful scenery of my hometown _ 1: My hometown is in Bengbu, Anhui. Although it is not as prosperous and rich as Beijing, as many high-rise buildings as Shanghai and as blue as Qingdao, I like Huaihe Cultural Square in my hometown best.

The beautiful Huaihe Cultural Square is located on Sports Road in Bengbu City. The roadside facilities are complete and the scenery is beautiful.

There are spectacular theaters, beautiful Wanda cinemas and tall concert halls. The most interesting thing is the music fountain. Whenever night falls and music rings, the surrounding lampposts will emit colorful light, and the stone ball in the middle will spray a water column more than ten meters high and fly into the sky like a white dragon.

At this time, beautiful music accompanied it, and the surrounding small fountains danced for it. At this time, naughty children always rush into the fountain to play. They don't care even if they are soaked. They giggled twice and then rushed into the water curtain to continue their enjoyment.

People can't help dancing and singing at this time. Singing and laughter echoed over the square for a long time.

The cultural square in my hometown is like a bright pearl, embedded at the foot of Yanshan Mountain with flowers and birds. It is a good place for people to have fun! Hometown Beauty Composition _ 2: Lush and indispensable; Let a hundred flowers blossom and be indispensable-my hometown. Although it has no mighty Yellow River or crystal clear Lijiang River; Although it does not have the majestic Mount Tai or the fragrant Xiangshan with red leaves, it has a simple and unique beauty.

Friends, please follow our footsteps and enjoy the flowers, grass, trees and trees in your hometown. The sky in my hometown is bluer and more beautiful than that in other places. The blue sky is Wan Li.

White clouds float comfortably, the sun shines excitedly, and occasionally handsome birds pass by like arrows, which is really poetic. Stop at the end of the road and look into the distance. There are many buildings in my hometown, including red bricks and white tiles. Some point to the sky, some are simple and simple; There are China houses worthy of the name, as well as foreign buildings that have sprung up everywhere.

They are tall and short, big and small, and some are like generals with a tiger's back and a bear's back, unswervingly defending their hometown; Some are like small and exquisite jade, embedded in it, which means nothing. One by one, sweating figures shuttled through it, and one by one, laughter and laughter came into my ears, which made people unable to help but speed up their steps, open their eyes and have a good look.

Walking happily all the way, I suddenly felt that there were colorful things swaying in the wind on both sides, just like fairies, welcoming the faint fragrance secreted into people's spleen from time to time. I can't help but turn my head away. I saw a bunch of red flowers, a bunch of yellow flowers, a bunch of white flowers and a bunch of purple flowers beside me. I leaned over her, bent down and lowered my head, as if to meet her in the aisle.

They bathe in the spring, let the breeze stroke their faces, stretch the green leaves like umbrellas, and compete to show their most beautiful and charming side. I am intoxicated in this sea of flowers, like a boat, floating, enjoying and tasting. It can really be described as "seeing the red and wet place, the flowers in Jinguancheng are heavy"! I can't help my curiosity. Just after two steps, the scenery in front of me suddenly changed: a jade pond came into view, and the water waves swung open, as if to embrace the sun and reflect dazzling golden light.

The weeping willows are reflected in the clear water, green; The blue sky is reflected in clear water, blue; White clouds are reflected in clear water, white. Take a closer look, underwater is a paradise for fish! (Please don't take offense at the graffiti below) A large group, a small group, a large group; Black group, white group, black and white group.

They swim around in the water, running around, sometimes jumping on the dragon gate, sometimes playing games, carefree, which really makes people envy. Before I came to my senses, the naughty little guy jumped out of the water and splashed like a fairy with a bang.

Next to the charming pond is a carpet of rice fields. Rice seedlings and wheat in the field, like newborn babies, look around curiously and explore the world where grass grows and warblers fly.

Of course, there are also unknown scalpers and sweaty farmers. How much effort and sweat they have paid for the bumper harvest! It is they who wrote a loud song of life! Look at that mountain again, wearing a green robe, standing guard for his hometown, standing guard for his hometown, what a selfless giant! ..... all these are beautiful scenery? If I were a painter, I would paint my hometown with my colored brush. If I were a poet, I would praise my hometown with my black and white pen; If I were a singer, I would praise my hometown with my sweet singing voice! Friends, what you hear is false, but what you see is true. Please come to my hometown to see her scenery! Hometown Beauty Composition _ 3: In spring, whenever we get up, we will smell a faint fragrance. In the neighbor's small flower bed, there are many flowers and peach blossoms in full bloom.

Spring Festival is also smiling and doing morning exercises! And on the tall green camphor tree, swallows are chirping and singing, and the song is very crisp. Peach blossoms in spring are more dazzling than each other, and they are more beautiful against the green leaves. Every drop of dew in the morning washes the rosy face of peach blossom.

Winter jasmine is also the messenger of spring. Flowers always attract some colorful flowers. Hu Die, butterflies and winter jasmine blend together to form a beautiful picture. In the sunny season, the trees in my hometown will grow luxuriantly. I enjoy the cool in the shade, and there will be some mottled and fine shadows in the shade.

Sometimes I go to my river to play with water. Under the sunlight, there will be sparkling little stars on the water. The water is very cold, and there will be many small fish playing freely under the water. Sometimes I will enjoy delicious grapes and cool air on the vines.

In a season full of fruits, farmers' uncles are busy in the endless golden wheat fields. Although it was hard at that time, it still smelled of labor. At this time, half yellow and half green red maple leaves, yellow leaves and Ye Er fell together and danced in the air like butterflies. In this way, the ground was immediately covered with a soft carpet of leaves, which could be woven into beautiful leaf rings.

In winter, it snows heavily, and every snowflake is so beautiful. It seems that the Snow Fairy specially cut it for us. Just put it in your mouth and taste it.

3. Beautiful scenery of my hometown My hometown is beautiful, just like the beautiful scenery in the sky. My hometown is full of vitality, with leaves of big trees and grass everywhere.

In the morning, farmers get up early and go to work in the fields. The scenery in the morning is beautiful, and the fog all over the sky seems to blend with the continuous mountains, showing a beautiful picture of a fairyland in the fog. In the afternoon, I was lying on the roof alone. Looking down, the green grass stretches for six or seven miles, like a green carpet, which makes people feel very comfortable. Looking from a distance, there is a crystal clear stream. Whenever the children are out of school, this stream will be very lively. Many children threw their schoolbags by the stream, took off their shoes and socks and ran to the stream to play. Some are swimming, some are having a water fight, some are catching crabs, some are picking up stones ... Walking by the roadside at night, I saw a large group of people enjoying the cool under the banyan tree, some were joking, and some were taking out meals ... At night, silence enveloped my hometown and my hometown fell asleep. ...

Although my hometown is not as prosperous as the city and there are no high-rise buildings, my hometown has beautiful scenery, fresh air and simple people. My hometown has many characteristics that many cities don't have. If I had to choose where to live, I would definitely choose to live in my hometown. My hometown, how beautiful you are! ! !

I like the four seasons in my hometown. Since ancient times, people have deep feelings for my hometown. In my mind, the four seasons in my hometown are the most beautiful.

In spring, the melting ice water awakens the river. "Ding-dong, Ding-dong" is like a magical singer in nature, singing crisp and sweet songs and flowing forward. Look, the willows are spreading their branches and blowing gently in the slight spring breeze, just like groups of fairies dressed in green are dancing. Peach trees sandwiched between willows also have bright flowers, green Liuhonghua, which is really beautiful! The warm spring breeze is like a gentle little hand stroking our faces, and it is like a cleaner, sweeping away the dust with his magical broom, making the decoration of the city beautiful and clean.

In summer, the trees are lush and cicadas are barking, so the neighbor's puppy "Black" has to stick out its pink tongue. The lotus flowers in the park are fragrant and colorful. The water drops on the lotus leaf fell to the ground, splashing a series of blisters, as if kissing Mother Earth. After the rain, the air was fresher, and Dad Sun came out smiling again.

In autumn, flowers wither and yellow leaves fly all over the sky, as if to turn the earth into golden yellow. The fruit in autumn is sweet. Red apples, pears in Huang Chengcheng, oranges like lanterns, and grinning pomegranates are so cute. That juicy bunch of grapes makes people drool. I really want to become a big fruit bowl full of autumn fruits. People in autumn are more hardworking. People are busy picking fruits and harvesting rice, and their faces are filled with the joy of harvest.

In winter, goose feather-like snowflakes fall from the sky. At this time, naughty children are playing in the snow. The snow is getting heavier and heavier, and the snowflake falls on your skirt and shoes ... When you wipe off this naughty little snowflake, it becomes a small water drop.

Look how beautiful my hometown is! I love my hometown, especially its four seasons.

5. I love my hometown's four seasons homework teacher's comments [I love my hometown's four seasons]

My home is Suihua, a small city, but it has beautiful scenery all year round. I love my hometown and I love its four seasons.

In spring, flowers bloom with smiling faces, emitting charming fragrance, and grass also emerges from the earth, bringing vitality to spring. Willow quietly changed into green clothes, swaying soft branches in the breeze, as if combing its beautiful long hair. In spring, lovely flowers, grass, trees, trees, birds, animals, insects and fish wake up from the cold winter, which brings the earth back to life, middle school students.

The starry sky in summer is charming. Looking at the stars coldly seems chaotic, but as long as you look closely, you will find that they have formed various interesting patterns in various positions in the sky. Looking at Orion in the northern sky, it is more like a hunter, holding a stick, bending his legs and leaning forward, leading fierce hounds to fight Taurus. You see, the starry sky in summer is so charming.

Autumn comes quietly, the riverside and roadside are full of fallen leaves, and which team of swallows are flying to the warm south in the sky. In the golden rice fields, hardworking farmers are harvesting rice hard, hoping for a good harvest next year.

Winter is coming, but in this cold winter, there is a kind of flower blooming in the wind, that is frost flower. This frosted flower has various postures, like a painting. There is a forest with all kinds of trees, the ground is full of wild flowers, and a little rabbit is picking mushrooms. Look! What a beautiful bird!

I love spring, cool summer, colorful autumn, pink winter and four seasons in my hometown!

6. It's spring to write and comment on the scenery!

Warm air, ice-breaking running water, green willow branches and budding buds, these messengers of spring disperse the cold wind and bring a warm breath! In the spring surrounded by the wind, the sun is warm, everything is full of vitality, the spring rain is moist, and the fragrance is fragrant. "The branches of red apricots are full of spring", and the elves in nature are naturally unwilling to be lonely, showing the quiet and rich spring as vigorously as sound. March, such a lively annual ring, the month when everything recovers, is also a more wonderful way to interpret spring.

The drizzle in March is like silk and fog, which can only be vaguely felt. It is like a gentle world, shrouded in it, like a dreamlike dream. Walking in the drizzle, you can feel the beauty and romance of "light rain and fine wind" Listening to the splash under your feet and touching the soft rain is really a rare comfort and leisure.

Spring in March is the breeding season, and everything is in the bud. The wicker swayed gently, and the tip of the wicker touched the water slightly, causing general ripples. "Poplar smoke is lighter than that in Han Xiao", willows curl up, and endless light green is everywhere, feeling the refreshing gentle touch. I believe that at the end of spring, accompanied by flying catkins, it is another touching beauty!

Spring has come, and the willows are falling and green as the sea. In spring, the grass grows and the warblers fly, and the silk tapestries blow on the embankment, filled with warm breath everywhere, playing a harmonious melody and interpreting a moving picture! Spring has come, and the things in March are silent and audible. In the singing of orioles, in the budding spring flowers, in the lingering spring rain silk, and in the fluttering wicker, spring is calling everywhere! Wandering in the warm wind of March, strolling in the small garden, enjoying yourself, spring is coming.

The colors of spring are really colorful, the sun is red, the sky is blue, the treetops are light green, and the winter jasmine is delicate yellow ... No wonder poets love to sing praises to spring, and painters love to describe it, because spring is the fusion of all the beautiful things in the world and the meeting of all colors. I wonder why these colorful colors choose spring to come to the earth.

The spring rain is continuous and gentle. It moistens the earth, caresses it and whispers to it. When people are unconscious, they quietly merge into a river and accumulate into a deep pool. Ah, it is the spring rain that brings green life to the pool.

Wind and rain always come together. In early spring, the cold wind awakened everything. The treetops are green, the earth is green, and even the platforms of towering buildings are green. Wang Anshi of the Song Dynasty wrote a poem: "Spring breeze is green in Jiang Nanan." How well you speak! But is it more than "green"?

Under the blowing of the wind, the wild flowers all over the mountains opened their eyes, one, two, one cluster, two clusters ... even joined together and merged into the sea. People face this ocean of blue, red and yellow ... gorgeous colors, and their troubles are gone, and their listlessness is gone. Thank the color of spring for giving us upward strength and confidence.

Look at the sky in spring. Why is the sky colorful and dazzling? Ah, that's a kite flown by children. Under the blue sky and white clouds, kites of various shapes are flying freely. What a refreshing sight! Spring belongs to children, and the sky belongs to children, but aren't they also trying to dress up spring and add the color of spring?

However, if you lean down and look closely, you will find that there are scattered yellow in the pleasing colors, which is the trace left by last winter. You may sigh: "A fly in the ointment!" Yes, who will be in a good mood when looking at those few broken limbs and flagging grasses? However, you might as well cut off the yellow winter clothes, and you will find something more novel. It's green inside! It turns out that yellow grass is also gestating, gestating a better spring.

I finally understand why the colors in spring are so rich: it is the colored pens in the hands of Miss Chun who are waving diligently; It is naive children who dress naive; It is a grass that is silently bred and ignored by people. People who enjoy the color of spring, what have you contributed to the color of spring?

7. What comments are there to correct the landscape composition? My hometown is in Henan, where the trees are shaded, the air is fresh and the scenery is different in four seasons.

In spring, the tree grows new leaves, which gives birth to new life. The melting river lifted the river and began to flow happily again. The hibernating frog began to play again, singing the cheerful and rhythmic song "Quack ………" … This is the spring when everything recovers.

Summer is a hot season, so my brother and I took swimming rings (actually old tires) to swim on the river bank. The water in the river bank is very clear, and we can see the sand and stones at the bottom. We played until sunset. When I get home, I eat ice cream while watching TV. When the fan is turned on, it keeps pace with the air conditioner.

This is a happy summer.

Autumn is a harvest season, and hardworking people start to work. As for me, I just wanted to find something to do when I heard my grandmother shouting, "Longlong, come on, let's go to the fields to collect vegetables!" " "I happily picked up the basket and grandma came to the vegetable garden. I saw colorful vegetable gardens, sharp peppers, pumpkins in Huang Cancan, beans as long as pigtails ... I happily took the basket and began to collect vegetables.

This is the harvest season.

In winter, it snowed, and the thick snow covered the crops with a white quilt. There was a pile of snow on the ground, and the children began to have snowball fights and make snowmen, having a good time.

This is a snowy winter.

This is my hometown.

8. Evaluation of primary school students' writing [Evaluation of primary school students' writing] 1, and the effort will eventually pay off; 2. Persistence is victory; 3, you are a smart boy, as long as you refuel, you can succeed; That metaphor is very subtle, even better than the idea of a clever fox; A layer of dry skin, peeled off, no blood and no meat. Why don't others feel bad when they see it? 6 young people who don't work hard are sad; 7. The topic is marked with ellipsis, vivid and fresh, like a green leaf. Evaluation of primary school students' writing.

Your article is like a withered flower, with no fragrance at all. Think about how to make flowers smell sweet again; 9. The content is specific, but unfortunately there are too few natural paragraphs. Are you afraid of spending money and reluctant to divide more paragraphs? 10, there is a sentence in the composition that I don't understand, just like you told me to breathe with my ears, which makes me feel puzzled.

1 1, some things seem to be made up by you, which is not true, so when I read them, I couldn't help but put a question mark in my heart. 12, your exercise is no longer like boiled water, but now it has a little sweetness. Keep working hard and I will cheer for you! 13, the sentence is not smooth, like my cousin's face is covered with small pimples, reading makes me uncomfortable.

14, the focus is not very prominent, just like a water fight, the water splashed everywhere, but the target of the attack could not be found. 15, when the dragon and phoenix dance, the handwriting flies. Maybe you want to be a cursive calligrapher? 16, there are too many typos, like sesame seeds on sesame cakes. Can we try to photograph the sesame seeds on the sesame cake? 17, the handwriting is very crowded, aren't you afraid of burning? 18, the phenomenon of losing words is serious. I wonder if you often break your umbrella in rainy days? 19, the content is as dry as dead leaves in autumn, how can people be willing to watch it? Read more extracurricular books to ensure that the dead leaves turn green again next spring.

20. There are so many typos as a hornet's nest ... I'm a fourth-grade student. How to use pinyin instead of words that can't be written? Is your dictionary sleeping? 2 1, the content of this article is vivid, and it feels like just eating a piece of fresh milk cake, with endless aftertaste. Pupils wrote "Pupils Write Essays to Comment on Scenery". 22, the action is written very little, like the branches in autumn, there is not a leaf.

23. Your sentence is a dead goldfish in a jar, not alive at all. Punctuation is well-behaved, like a smooth floor tile.

25. The handwriting is scrawled like grass on the ground, wobbly and stiff. Although the article is short, it is very vivid.

Delicate description, strong flavor of life, accurate wording and sentences. At the end of the article, it is revealed that the central sentence is really a clear stroke, and the summary is short and powerful.

The music is beautiful, so is the language of this article. Poetic language and fantastic imagination, how beautiful! The reading of the article is closely related to feelings. Examples describe actions, which touch people's hearts at the beginning and have real feelings.

The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful and hit the floor, which makes people excited and excited.

Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, and it is interesting to read. A large number of spoken English in life is used to make the article more natural and close to the people.

The ending is clear and meaningful. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language.

There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines. Blessing online articles describe things in the order of development, with fluent language and clear levels, which makes them feel very happy from beginning to end.

The article is full of respect and gratitude from beginning to end, affectionate and touching, which is the shocking force of this article. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, full of fun, which makes people fondle it.

The author is ingenious in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing. The language is lively and interesting.

Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.

The examples are vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life.

The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and well written. The full text is fluent in language and free and easy in writing, which can be called a relatively successful work.

Composition evaluation: What is failure? Nothing, just a step closer to success; What is success? That is, after all the roads leading to failure, there is only one road left, and that is the road to success. .

9. 600 words of hometown beauty plus comments on hometown beauty

"Who doesn't say that my hometown is beautiful, the mountains are beautiful, the water is beautiful, and people are more beautiful ..." I was deeply intoxicated by the beautiful scenery of my hometown.

The willow beside the ancient well first reported the news of spring. Goose-yellow buds are like stars in the sky; The swaying branches dance in the spring breeze, like the black hair of the neighbor's third sister. Jiao Yan flew through the willow branches, holding the soil next to the drilling platform, and began the first step of a new life-nesting. Looking at the clever swallows, my heart has already flown to the blue sky with them and wandered over the beautiful white clouds.

The cool well water pulled me back from the clouds. The aunt next door called a bucket of sweet and cold water from the ancient well, and it didn't take long for us naughty children to drink it all. That carefree energy is still lingering in my heart.

With the arrival of the rainy season, the grass on the mountain becomes darker and denser. At this time, carrying a basket, drilling into the towering pine forest in groups of three or five and picking mushrooms in the grass deeper than our bodies became the happiest moment. Sporadic mushrooms stand proudly under trees and grass like a purple umbrella, just waiting for us to pick them one by one in the basket. Blue sky and white clouds, scorching sun, sweating like rain. But the mushrooms in the basket skipped home with us. What I get naturally is my mother's kind smile and the praise of my aunt next door.

Thousands of miles of ice, Wan Li snow. Zi River fell asleep in Grandpa Dong's arms and turned into a crystal ribbon. The faint sunshine sighed helplessly at the sleepy drunk glacier, shook his head and disappeared in an instant. At this time, the glacier was crowded with people. In a flat place, there are some gyro competitions to see whose gyro is more exquisite and beautiful first; A friend drew several circles with colored chalk, which turned like a rainbow flying in the sky; Some people put a steel ball on the top, which enables them to turn flexibly and quickly ... On the slope, there are skating performances: solo performances of eagles spreading their wings on the ice; There are three people pulling the sled with the dog; Some people simply sit on boards, ride on pine branches and run thousands of miles along slopes. ...

Green willows in spring, mushrooms in summer and glaciers in winter have accompanied me through a short childhood, which still makes me memorable and intoxicated!

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This beautiful prose about scenery begins with a lyric poem. In the middle part, the author describes the beautiful scenery of his hometown in detail from three aspects: green willows in spring, mushrooms in summer and glaciers in winter, and incorporates real feelings.