Reflections on composition 1 first, there are solid diseases in Chinese composition teaching at present.
1. Strong political factors and lack of substantive breakthrough.
Combining with the Chinese text of Grade One in Senior High School, only half of us write the content knowledge of the textbook from the perspective of Chinese, and the other half is the ideological and political education for students. Chinese teaching under the political background often stifles students' free creative inspiration and restricts their free thinking. Furthermore, many Chinese teachers habitually use the text as a model essay in composition teaching, which invisibly intensifies the influence of political factors on Chinese composition teaching in senior high schools. Make the whole classroom lack of vividness, just like a beautiful rainbow floating in the air. Visible and intangible, mostly empty and beautiful slogans. Many people are getting tired of Chinese learning, which has a lot to do with the current Chinese education. If the teaching mode of Chinese composition is limited to the Chinese text itself, then Chinese education will be farther and farther away from literary works. Textbook itself is a literary carrier biased towards politics. If the textbook model essay education is simple, the students' articles are bound to be the same and boring.
2. Under the general situation of education, there is no platform for free innovation.
China has been dominated by such remarks as "the dignity of being a teacher" and "being a teacher for life" since ancient times. Teachers and parents are all on it. Students are more obedient to their teachers and dare not resist. Long-term restrictions will inevitably lead to students losing their creative passion and interest in learning. This is also the view of traditional teachers on Chinese education under the background of exam-oriented education. Teachers' task should be to guide effectively, not to stand still and stick to the rules. In Chinese composition teaching, students' subjectivity should always be emphasized, and teachers play a leading role. Teachers should respect students' independent cognition and personality development. However, teachers in reality often ignore students' thoughts, emotions, psychology and personality in teaching. It is strictly subject to teacher education, and teachers dominate everything. After a long period of accumulation, students' innovative ability has been curbed, they have lost interest in learning, and even become tired of learning.
Second, the analysis of teaching strategies under the evolution of college entrance examination composition
1. Establish a correct world outlook and a belief in life.
As the saying goes, "people can't stand without faith." Teachers should help students establish a correct world outlook and a firm belief in life in teaching. For example: 10 Beijing college entrance examination composition topic is "down-to-earth look at the stars". Among them, "looking up at the starry sky" refers to the starry sky overhead and being down to earth. This requires students to have correct values and world outlook. At the same time, "down-to-earth" is an interpretation of morality and life beliefs. If you can hold the starry sky above your head and have such cultural connotation in your heart, your writing ideas will be balanced and your writing will be like a god. This requires teachers to help students establish correct values and life beliefs in their usual teaching. Only a firm belief is the fundamental source of struggle. Only by establishing correct values can students calm down and savor literary works and stimulate the ideological source of composition.
2. Establish a correct examination mentality and multiple assessment criteria.
Three years in senior high school is the key stage and turning point of students' education, which has a very important influence on teenagers. Many people in the industry believe that students' comprehensive quality should be improved through education, and their application ability and innovation ability should be cultivated through education. But the result is often the opposite, and many reasons are that students are affected by exam results. What directly affects students is the model test, monthly test and so on under the background of college entrance examination. Scores are the decisive factor in determining teachers' teaching achievements. In order to pursue high enrollment rate and good grades, teachers will inevitably put all the learning burden on students. Long-term oppression will inevitably lead students to be afraid of exams, and then afraid of Chinese composition. In order to improve their composition scores quickly and then summarize the college entrance examination questions over the years, students turn to various fast composition training classes, stereotyped writing templates and so on. In the end, there appeared a composition shortcut of "one copy, two copies and three sets". To cultivate students' literary foundation, teachers should first establish students' correct examination mentality, so as to ensure that the examination is not chaotic and targeted. It is not an exam that can determine a person's life path. Secondly, we should establish diversified evaluation criteria. It can't just be a lifelong assessment model. Students should be encouraged to innovate and explore, and pay more attention to the cultivation of comprehensive ability.
3. Pay attention to hot spots and learn about the wonderful things outside Chinese characters.
As the saying goes: "The world is full of knowledge, and people's understanding is an article." This shows the importance of Chinese in life. There is Chinese everywhere in life, and Chinese contains life everywhere. In recent years, most of the college entrance examination composition topics involve social hot issues. For example, in Anhui in 20xx, "Who is responsible for the script revision" was once a hot topic in society. Therefore, teachers should pay attention to introducing social hot topics in the teaching process. Secondly, students should pay attention to the cultivation of literary literacy outside Chinese textbooks and actively pave the way for the smooth writing of exam compositions.
Under the background of educational reform, teachers should keep up with the trend of the times, change the traditional concept of Chinese education, take students as the main body, cultivate students' comprehensive quality, connect with reality, pay attention to the close connection with social life, and constantly reflect on improving composition teaching in senior high schools.
Thinking Composition 2 My old home had a very large yard. Looking at the entrance of the yard, it is full of lush plants. When spring breeze blows, I often wrap some yellow bees in sweet flowers. I still remember when I was a child, it took several minutes to run from one end of the yard to the other-not only the length of the road, but more importantly, those strange little creatures always caught your eye skillfully.
Walking out of the gate, there is a lush locust tree forest in the east. I have long forgotten which season it is, and there are strings of white Sophora japonica hanging on the tree-it has been four or five years, and they are harmless.
Now, when I stand on the land where they once existed, there is only a shabby old house in front of me, which is the only sign that they once lived. There is no other reason: Sophora japonica was cut down without the consent of the tree planter because it needed wood badly to build a house at home. The tree planter once found this family, and before he left, he lamented that the tree he had planted for more than ten years was so unfortunately destroyed; But when I came back, why did I laugh all over and tell people that trees were born to be cut down? What's that pile in my pocket?
However, this is not the point. This is just an appetizer. The main course has been served.
Things can be traced back to the fact that people who came back from Beijing in the village bought houses everywhere. It is said that this person has something to do with this matter. I heard that if you want to develop here, you will get a lot of money. The quiet village was crazy: buying land, expanding, expanding, and even many people paid for building materials to build houses on the open space ... The yard at home was ruthlessly buried with gravel, and the streets in the village littered, and it was necessary to turn around from time to time when driving.
Soon, the news came again: people's subsidies are calculated by the square, including Nanwu, which seems to be hundreds of thousands. The village, which was not peaceful, exploded again-batches of trees were cut down, and the originally clear river became turbid because of sand digging. Almost every door has a pile of sand or cement or old tiles and bricks. ...
It is said that development is a good thing. What's so good about it? Just to speed up the pace of urbanization? Is it to make some people make money? Anyway, there are almost no trees in the village now, but there are still some forbidden trees by the river. The only tree left should be the poplar tree that just passed my roof!
On TV, magazines, books and newspapers, all kinds of advertisements put forward by businessmen can be seen everywhere, and advertisements are pervasive in life. Advertising has become the main means for merchants to promote their products, and advertising has also become a feast for TV stations to keep the audience's appetite. Advertisements and brochures are full of star marks. Stars, stars, asking stars to advertise and promote sales seems to be a fashion, which seems to indicate that it is difficult to move without stars. Some merchants made it clear that if a star is using this product, or a star is using this product, this is disgusting.
Are star advertisements really that good? Is the shampoo used by Dawn, the shampoo used, and the Yashili infant milk powder that Jiang cried for the baby really that good? Do Li Ming and He Jiang think so? The answer, of course, is uncertain. Whether these stars have used it or not is unknown! For that expensive advertising fee, it is not uncommon to betray the audience by taking advantage of the audience's trust, not a scandal twice. According to a newspaper report, Liuli, a student from a county in Henan Province, won the top prize in liberal arts in one fell swoop after studying hard and was admitted to Peking University. So, a brain tonic manufacturer found her and asked her to advertise for this company, saying that she was admitted to Peking University because she sang the brain tonic produced by this company, and promised to give her100000 advertising fee. The news exposed the inside story of the advertisement to us. Nothing is impossible as long as it can attract customers. Fortunately, the girl in the mountain village immediately refused. But what if you don't refuse for that hundred thousand dollars? Don't some people want to be cheated again!
What is the effect of star advertising? The advertising market is chaotic, full of true and false, people are constantly deceived, and their trust in stars, businesses and even TV stations is greatly reduced. However, genuine products are subject to unfair competition, which also violates the competition principle of market economy. People can't help asking, in that case, is it necessary for TV stations to spend hundreds of dollars on advertising every day? An advertising planner revealed the secret. He said, "TV stations also have their revenue-generating tasks. Although there are many TV dramas, there are not many good ones, so we have to. " But is there really nothing else for TV stations to do? Why are there so few public service advertisements? This is not only a problem of income generation, but also shows that the negative influence of some people under the condition of market economy is self-evident. People with poor quality are blindfolded. Some TV stations only pay attention to income generation, not quality.
Advertising, advertising, advertising, when can we give the audience a pure sky?
Thinking Composition 4 Friends 20×××× years 165438+ 10/0/4 Sunday
On Friday, I was walking slowly outside Class Three when I suddenly saw a junior boy littering on campus. At that time, I thought, "They don't care much about the work of cleaners. If everyone litters like a little boy, there will be more and more rubbish, and the cleaning workers will be very hard. The world will become more and more dirty and smelly, and we will never see this beautiful world again. Will we be happy living in this dirty world? Will the body be good? " So I immediately picked up the garbage and threw it into the dustbin, thinking, "to protect the environment and sanitation, we should start from a young age, starting from me."
On Saturday, my mother typed my composition on the computer. I was surprised: "Hey, how does the computer know so many words?" It's amazing! "But my mother said," No matter how powerful computers are, they are also invented by human beings. Talent is the most powerful and intelligent! " "I listened and thought," Yes, people's minds are really developed. I created a computer with my own wisdom, so that we can type, play games and so on. When I grow up, I must invent something that benefits mankind. "
On Sunday, I have a composition tutorial class. Why should I cram for the last minute? Because I may take part in the on-site composition contest in Xiangzhou District, Zhuhai, each class will choose three or four students to help me. I am one of the 2 1 students, and then I will choose nine excellent students to take part in the on-site composition contest, so I must study hard, strive for the contest, and win glory for the school, the class and my parents.
Although I only wrote Friday, Saturday and Sunday, I am still very happy because I think.
You think well, and the teacher thinks that when you think, you improve yourself. How nice! You are a happy child. I wish you good results in the composition competition.
Thinking composition 5 exercise is an important way of using language to express and communicate, a natural state of expression and a simple photo of life. Therefore, the author thinks that "independence", "truthfulness" and "innovation" are the real connotations of individualization of primary school composition, and through a series of strategies, students' writing level can be improved, so that "everyone can express their views and feelings", thus making primary school composition full of personality and vitality. What is "personalized composition"?
The author believes that it is necessary to take students as the main body, attach importance to the existence and development of students' personality, respect students' spiritual freedom and uniqueness of the spiritual world, tap students' intelligence and creative potential, guide students to write their own true and unique feelings, and cultivate students' imagination, creativity and expressiveness.
People-oriented, showing personality
Writing teaching should be considered from the perspective of enlightening and moistening life, feeling life and returning to people. Writing should never be based on the level of "writing", but should be regarded as the self-realization of adult life value. Many teachers believe that writing is a skill and an operational thing. As long as the skill training is grasped, the writing level will be improved.
Therefore, in teaching, teachers often pay attention not to people, not to how students think and write, but to how students master the rules of writing, and then follow the "rules" and train step by step. In this way, students' exercises become a combination game of words. Of course, the composition written in this way will definitely not have its own feelings and personality. Mr. Feng Yi put it well: "If you blindly believe in Buddhism, you can only make one mistake and push people who could have made it to the abyss." This shows that if we want to make a breakthrough and innovation in teaching, we must work hard on "people".
The material of the article is often definite and objective, but the viewpoint of the article should be flexible, free and full of personality. As Rodin said: "Life is not short of beauty, what is lacking is our discovery of beauty." Teachers should let students learn to pay attention to the things around them and have a unique perspective and insight into life. In order to publicize students' personality, the author tried the following methods.
At the institutional level, we should focus on the concept of "people-oriented, highlighting individuality", focus on students' all-round physical and mental development, personality and potential development, reflect the characteristics of "Chinese" teaching and the habits of humanistic tradition, take into account the reality of different students, conduct teaching in groups and layers according to the differences of students' practice, and preset corresponding practice time, space and evaluation methods.
On the cultural level, pay attention to educating people with ethos and create a high-grade class culture. The ancients said, "Living with a good man is like entering Lan Zhi's home. If you don't smell its fragrance for a long time, you will blend with it. " This kind of silent edification promotes the awakening of self-consciousness, which is absolutely different from top-down, outside-in indoctrination education. In recent 10 years, while engaged in Chinese teaching in primary schools, the author noticed that the composition content of primary school students is not rich enough and the Chinese is monotonous and poor. In addition to students' lifestyle and interpersonal communication, the narrow reading area and the sharp decline in reading volume are the main reasons. Reading is one of the foundations of composition. Being able to read more books can promote writing.
On the practical level, we should firmly grasp the two difficulties of "strictness" and "leniency", that is, emphasize the strictness of teaching requirements, attach importance to students' subjectivity, and let students develop and show their individuality in the harmony of "strictness" and "leniency". In this way, the exercise is often integrated into the students' personality sentiment, and it is a crucial article that integrates personality. While practicing in class, we should attach importance to extracurricular activities and lead students out of Shan Ye and get close to nature.
It is found that many celebrities benefit from "wild fun" activities and regard "wild fun" activities as valuable life experiences. Writer Liu Jin wrote in Shan Ye: "Shan Ye, it taught me more than just the names of birds, animals and plants. It also taught me love, taught me life, taught me beautiful romantic fantasies, as stubborn and simple as a mountain. " In short, "people-oriented, showing personality" means combining exercise teaching with individual life development, being good at activating students' "vitality" and radiating all potential creativity. When writing is the call of the educated to life, teachers may have mastered the essence of education.
Devote oneself to basic teaching
"Broaden our horizons and devote ourselves to the foundation", which requires us to stand tall and far, devote ourselves to the foundation, steadily and steadily, constantly improve students' writing ability and enhance the follow-up motivation. From this perspective, high and low are not contradictory, but complement each other and are the inheritance of quality education.
Extensive reading conveys spiritual food. "Reading a book a hundred times is self-evident." Teachers use morning reading, lunch break and other time to guide students to flexibly try speed reading, competitive reading, forward reading, intensive reading, skimming and discussion. Give full play to the role of the school library, reading room, class book corner and other positions, so that students can expand their reading. At the same time, let the students have a notebook, and the recorded contents are divided into three parts: idioms, proverbs, wonderful words and phrases, and wonderful fragments. You can extract and sort out the content of the article in time and write down a brief comment or feeling. Students have also given such notebooks a good name, such as Picking Honey Collection, Spark of Life and Finding Shells in a Sea of Books.
Experience life and enrich materials, so that students can glow with "three-dimensional" life and enrich materials. The author pays attention to guiding students' eyes and strokes to life, thus enriching their exercise materials. Enrich school life, carry out various activities according to local conditions, and try to let students at different levels have the opportunity to participate and become the masters of the activities.
For example, in terms of notes, the author used the morning meeting to hold "three-minute speech" and "hearsay", used the squadron activities to organize theme activities such as "the value of hard work" and "my specialty", and organized students to hold parties and handwritten newspapers in conjunction with major festivals. This not only cultivates students' expression consciousness, shows their talents, improves students' expression ability, but also arouses students' expression desire and interest in homework. Society is a huge writing treasure house, and teachers should guide students to "care about family affairs, state affairs and what's going on in the world". For example, care about the new things in the neighborhood, care about the changes in the living environment, and care about the traffic police under the scorching sun; See and hear all kinds of information through books, newspapers, television and computers. Use after school or holidays, watch movies, visit exhibitions and so on.
Desalinate guidance and publicize personality
Desalinate the traces of guidance, walk into the hearts of students, and cover up the traces with family. The overall goal of the course is to develop the thinking ability while developing Chinese, and enrich the expression content by imagination and association. Desalinate guidance and pay attention to the differences in students' writing ability, their own cultural knowledge background, interests, habits and specialties, as well as the development and changes of the same student in different learning stages. Under the guidance of the student-centered concept, we should find their differences, face up to their differences, guide their differences and pay attention to students' development, so that students can fully show their unique personality, original creativity, extraordinary bold imagination, unconventional thinking mode and unique language expression in the activities of observation, imagination, thinking and operation, publicize their personality and pay attention to the improvement of the overall effect.
Innovate thinking and activate vitality.
Composition teaching adopts the same way of thinking, which makes students' thinking rigid, afraid to innovate and cross the line. People with a strong sense of innovation can always study problems from an unusual and unique perspective, which is the thinking of seeking differences. Let students have a personalized sense of innovation from here.
Accumulating novel languages, enriching personalized languages, accumulating and using new words, and using words with the characteristics of the new era, especially online languages, not only make the language lively and interesting, but also make the language interesting.
One of the psychological factors that induce creative motivation and provide students with a stage to show their talents is "the joy of gaining honor and interests". Based on this, if students try to succeed, they can effectively stimulate their creative motivation and cultivate their innovative spirit. To this end, the author takes the following measures:
First, the composition is "flowery". Establish a "show yourself" garden, and put creative compositions in the garden for the whole class to learn.
Second, the composition "diary". Hold "Appreciation of Excellent Works". Every Friday morning, let creative and fluent students come up and read their excellent works once a week. After reading them, discuss them and find out the highlights to enjoy.
Third, the composition is "draft-based". Contribute to the school red scarf radio station and the school board newspaper column, and contribute to the literary society magazine. To provide a stage for the individualized development of students' compositions.
Individualization of composition emphasizes full respect for students' personality differences, different learning abilities and different learning needs, stimulates students' initiative and enterprising spirit, encourages students to choose their own expression methods, and forms personalized expression methods, thus forming an "eclectic" talent training method. In this process, we should not only let them be good at depicting the beautiful side in real life, but also let them face up to the dark side in social life. Only when the theme of composition is far away from lightness, shallowness, sweetness and tiredness, and vanity and splendor are abandoned, and innovative thinking is activated, can personalized composition teaching be full of vitality.
Make a little progress every day, not chicken soup, but philosophy of life.
I used to think this was a bit melodramatic, but I didn't really understand it.
The so-called progress here is because you have a sense of direction and know where the distant goals are. Progress is like a wheel that has just been pushed. Although it is slow, it has been pushing and insisting. When this force reaches the state where the wheels can roll, there will be inertia, so you don't have to work as hard as you did at first, and you will relax.
This is a very wise method.
The point that needs to be improved every day here is because the existing target distance is clearly analyzed and understood, and then it is decomposed into detailed steps step by step. Yes, they are not the efforts of the East and the West, but the way of superposition all the time. It is a kind of deep cultivation, which will make the efforts of yesterday and the day before yesterday serve today and also a kind of growth.
Some people will say why they always seem to be useless and have no achievements when they work hard. In fact, there are such factors on a large scale.
I didn't use any strength at all, just punched left and right, distracted my energy, and finally got exhausted and didn't achieve the expected effect.
Therefore, it is necessary to understand the goal and direction and what each step is for, so that those accumulated over time will be meaningful and become your wealth.
Thinking Composition 7 "Dream of the Wolf King" takes the female wolf Zilan as the protagonist, and tells the story that Zilan, who lost her partner, struggled to give birth to five cubs with hounds in a heavy rain on the vast Gamal grassland, and one of the newborn cubs died after being attacked by heavy rain. Zilan tried her best to train these four puppies. For the next generation, in order to realize the dream of the wolf king, Zilan praised all the maternal love for the four wolves.
This book makes me feel the greatness of maternal love. However, what inspires and touches me more is the way of human thinking. I thought quietly-
Looking at it from another angle, we will find the wolf's survival concept that we hate at ordinary times-living is a wolf, and dying is a pile of meat. This idea may be inhuman to humans, but it is in line with the feelings of wolves. As Zilan thought-it may be a kind of compassion to use the excrement of the dead to save many living lives!
I used to hate wolves and always thought they were murderous. And surprisingly like the generous style of hunters. But now, seeing the butcher kill the chicken, I even feel cruel. Humans! Humans! Don't, you just for a good meal, a piece of Zhang Zhengui Wolf skin, and killed a life? If you were killed by a life for no reason, would you be willing? Will your soul be willing?
Animals also have feelings, just like fierce and cruel wolves. They will not spare any young life. Two male wolves will fight for a female wolf, or even lose both sides. However, while the mother wolf protects her cubs, the power of generate's maternal love is amazing. Why is this? I don't know.
People live and need food to survive. But wolves are alive, and they also need food. Maybe someone will say, "Don't wolves kill people, too?" I would ask him, "Didn't you kill wolves?"
You know, wolves are animals, ferocious animals, and God gave them this nature. But human beings, sentient beings, are all higher creatures. How can they kill people innocently? It doesn't matter if the wolf is killed. Aren't chickens, ducks, geese and birds all lovely animals killed by human beings?
The other day, I watched a movie about protecting animals on TV. When I saw a famous hunter skinning innocent animals alive in order to get precious deerskin, I was completely shocked-unexpectedly, there are such people in the world today! How shameful it is that they kill lives and innocent people for money! When I saw the animals lying on the ground, I felt an unspeakable indignation.
Dream of the Wolf King is a rare book. That's it, let me sort out my thoughts and learn to think again!