1, you are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; You are a student with great potential.

2. The language of the article is fluent, which also shows the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.

Sorry, the teacher didn't understand this paragraph. Would you like to explain it to the teacher again? Thank you.

Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style. what do you reckon ?

5. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing style is conquering and attractive. Work hard and create more glory!

6. Your article is like a slowly flowing stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!

7. The style of writing is sharp, with extensive quotations and deep roots. Although the analysis of social problems is still absolute, the article is still moving with a kind of enthusiasm and frankness. Further research and thinking on history books and social commentary. I believe your article will become more mature and lasting!

8. It is wise for a teenager who is not deeply involved in the world to approach a complex society. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is very casual, as if leading readers to stroll on the Yuan Ye of the mind. The disadvantage is that the discussion is slightly angular. You know, incisive arguments can make the finishing point and make your article more profound. Keep practicing and you will be better!

9. The writing of this article is beautiful and fresh, full of certain philosophy. It is written that "I" walked by the sea, and the sea not only gave me the enjoyment of beauty, but also caused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea has given me a space to swim, and I am immersed in life for the sea, making the sea a "person" with noble personality strength. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of beauty and is thought-provoking.

10 Except for class, school life seems dull, but this paper is good at finding the extraordinary from the ordinary and showing it with relish: nervous morning, fighting noon, tired night, and every time I choose a lens full of life interest to decorate it. The fresh and lively language vividly shows the positive mental outlook of contemporary middle school students.

1 1. This article is highly ideological and artistic, which makes people think for a long time after reading it. Ingenious conception, using comparative techniques to deepen the theme; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.

12, the introduction of father in the article is comprehensive: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction to the father is also focused: focusing on the feelings of the father. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and live up to his expectations!

13, snow can be associated with the pursuit of life. Starting from the details of life, the spirit of innovation is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who says "boiled water" is not the best drink?

14, the quotation of several common sayings in the full text is just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.

15, your article is very creative, and your ideas are completed in the form of geometric proof questions. The full text is very literary!