Example of analogical opening method of material composition (keywords "growth" and "transformation")

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20 18 playback of composition materials of senior high school entrance examination in Jilin province;

From tadpoles to frogs, only by shedding their tails can they grow up.

From tadpoles to frogs, turning around may not need to be gorgeous, but it must be thorough.

Even if you can live on shore, don't stay on shore forever; Even if you can live in water, don't stay in water forever.

When winter comes, it also needs to hibernate for a winter; But when spring comes, it will certainly make its own sound.

Example 1, entitled "What is a successful and gorgeous transformation?"

Hongmei is proud of snow, and the flowers are first-class; Bamboo stands on the rock, allowing east, west, north and south winds; The pines depend on heaven, and their chests are full of changhong. (At the beginning of the analogy, Hongmei-Cuizhu-Cangsong) The so-called success is just a gorgeous transformation of growth. (Summarize, put forward arguments and ask questions) Therefore, frogs croak, which is a tribute to growth! (Reference materials, evaluation materials)

Ups and downs are the richness of life, and red, orange, yellow and green are the beauty of life. Taking the mind as the seed and turning grass into a tree, life can grow into a towering tree! (generalizing arguments)

Structure: introduction+discussion

Specific structure: analogy-summary-putting forward arguments-quoting materials, evaluating materials-advancing arguments.

Example 2, titled "Transformation is an Opportunity for Growth"

The filth of a grain of dust cannot change the brightness of the sea; The hardness of the stone can't stop the progress of the river; The haze of a dark cloud can't stop the brightness of the sun; The pain of broken tail can't push back the metamorphosis of tadpoles. (At the beginning of analogy, dust-pebbles-tadpoles) (References, evaluation materials) Things are the same, so is life. (transition sentence) the rapids are brave, and the more frustrated, the more brave! (summarizing the meaning)

Difficulties and hardships, Yucheng; With extraordinary courage, Ding Ding made great achievements. Painful transformation is often an opportunity for growth. (Put forward an argument) What makes people strong is injury, what makes people mature is failure and transformation, which makes life painful and beautiful! (generalizing arguments)

Structure: introduction+discussion

Specific structure: analogy (quotation and evaluation materials)-summary-transition-putting forward arguments-advancing arguments.

Example 3, titled "Growth is a metamorphosis"

The tall and straight mountain pine has made a tenacious life after being tempered by wind and rain; If the practiced waterfall crosses the steep cliff, it will be magnificent; Plum blossoms in the corner endure the biting cold and bloom the most beautiful smile; Brave tadpoles have to go through the pain of metamorphosis to become beneficial frogs. (Introduction to Analogy, Pinus armandii-Waterfall-Tadpole) (References, evaluation materials)

Growth is a transformation, and its slowness and quickness depend on opportunities, efforts and perseverance. How wonderful it is to be cocooned or sublimated by flame, because it will change. With the expectation of new things, with a break with the original, there is always the excitement of waiting for a new starting point and transformation. How nice! (generalizing arguments)

Structure: introduction+discussion

Specific structure: analogy (quoted materials, evaluation materials)-putting forward arguments-pushing arguments-pushing arguments-pushing arguments.

Example 4, titled "Metamorphosis, Pain and Beauty"

The metamorphosis of pupa is painful, but behind the pain are beautiful wings and a vast world; It is painful for shells to breed pearls, but behind the pain, it means dazzling crystals that make people cry; The metamorphosis of tadpoles is painful, but behind the pain, it grows into a frog that says harvest in the rice fragrance. (analogy begins, pupa-? Shells- Tadpole) (reference, evaluation data) metamorphosis, painful and beautiful! (Summarize, put forward arguments, ask questions)

Growth is an isolated process, and you must learn to be independent. Growth is a very painful word, because you may not get it, but you will definitely lose it. (Parallel relationship) Smart people will change in their growth, (non-strict thimble, progressive relationship) will find the answer to life in change. (3 promotion arguments)

Structure: introduction+discussion

Specific structure: analogy (quoted materials, evaluation materials)-putting forward arguments-advancing arguments three times.

Example 5, titled "Life without Perfect Growth and Scenery"

Although the light spot of fireflies is weak, it is a challenge to the darkness to shine; Although the snail's pace is slow, it will succeed if it persists; Although the dream of tadpoles is difficult, it can only be transformed to achieve a gorgeous turn. (analogy begins, firefly-? Snail-Tadpole) (references, evaluation materials)

Transformation needs to be ready; Transformation requires more courage. (Transition, deepening the topic) It may be scarred when it is changed, but it will definitely precipitate after it is changed. (Continue the transition and deepen the topic) Life is like this, there is no perfection, but growth is also beautiful! (make an argument)

Structure: introduction+discussion

Specific structure: analogy (quoted materials, evaluation materials)-transition, deepening the topic twice-putting forward arguments.

Example 6, the topic "Dare to break through and become perfect"

Broke out of the shell is the chicken's philosophy of life, breaking the shackles and being reborn; Breaking out of cocoon is the life mission of butterfly, which becomes weak, plump and strong because of painful transformation; "Born with a Broken Tail" is an inspirational blockbuster for frogs. Because of the decisive decision, amphibians are free. (analogy begins, chicken- Butterflies- Tadpole) (references, evaluation data)

The course of life will always face changes and challenges. Only a brave breakthrough can create a beautiful new world. (Make an argument) Cross the rubicon, 120 Qin Guan will eventually Chu; Another 3,000 pieces of armor can swallow Wu. (transition, deepening the topic) breakthrough, there is an opportunity; Only by breaking through can we seize the opportunity. (Continue the transition and deepen the topic) Dare to break through and become perfect! (point to the point and reiterate the argument)

Structure: introduction+discussion

Specific structure: analogy (quoted materials, evaluation materials)-making an argument-transition, deepening the topic twice-pointing out the topic and repeating the argument.

Example 7, titled "The pain of broken tail can sharpen flight"

The road through the clouds only kisses the footprints of climbers; Stretch out the arm of the moon and only embrace the eyes of the dreamer; Open the key to success, only recognize the password of wisdom and courage. (analogy begins, road-arm-key) keeps ending without making a frog. Maybe tadpoles also know that "adults are uncomfortable, adults are comfortable, but not adults", so they give up completely and travel all over the world. (Reference materials, evaluation materials)

The pain of a broken tail can make you fly. (Put forward an argument) Transformation is accompanied by pain, but it also breaks free from bondage in blood and tears and seeks vitality in crushing. People are born different, and the same starting point and different ending points depend on the speed of running on the way. A little faster will give birth to a pair of wings, which is the power given by the wind. (3 promotion arguments)

Structure: introduction+discussion

Specific structure: analogy-quoting materials, evaluating materials-putting forward arguments-advancing arguments three times.

Example 8, titled "Change, Be the Best Yourself"

The reason why the butterfly is moving is that she has changed from the black and soft green in Mao Mao to a strong pupa, and finally condensed into gorgeous beauty; The frog can move because it has changed from a long tail and a round body to a slim swimmer and finally became an expert in exterminating pests. (analogy begins, butterfly-frog) (reference, evaluation data)

Transformation is always towards the best side; Transformation is always to be the best of yourself. (Make an argument) So learn from painful experiences and don't be afraid of pain. Either die in battle or go home in a mess. Every successful person is a wolf boy. Here's my chance, but who am I? (generalizing arguments)

Structure: introduction+discussion

Specific structure: analogy (quoted materials, evaluation materials)-putting forward arguments-promoting arguments.