Current location - Health Preservation Learning Network - Healthy weight loss - Twenty years later, what has changed in my hometown?
Twenty years later, what has changed in my hometown?
The fifth grade composition unit 2 "Going back to my hometown after twenty years" teaching design teaching goal 1. Cultivate students to pay attention to life, the present situation of their hometown, reasonably imagine the changes in their hometown when they grow up, and express their cordial feelings with their good wishes. 2.20 years have passed and great changes have taken place. How to express your changes, changes in your hometown, and whether your wishes have been realized? Ask the students to express their wishes for their hometown now and describe in detail the changes in their hometown after 20 years. Teaching preparation 1. Collect content about the theme of "strong nostalgia". Poetry, songs, stories, etc. ) 2. The teaching process of multimedia courseware. Introduce conversation to stimulate interest 1. "It is suitable for all ages. When you return to your hometown, the local accent will not change." What does hometown mean to a wanderer? Today, we are going to write about our hometown twenty years later. What will happen to us and everything around us in 20 years, and will our hometown change? What am I like? What would it be like if we were together again? 2. Put forward the operation requirements, and define the imagination and operation focus. Second, speculate on the changes of hometown after 20 years and construct a literary source to talk about hometown 1. On the one hand, teachers give examples to guide students' imagination, such as paying attention to the imagination of change, and can write about the changes of houses, roads and hometown partners; For example, based on scene description, you can write scenes of reunion with good friends after a long separation; You can write about the journey home; You can also visit the scenery of your hometown ... 2. (1) Changes in hometown after 20 years Street-shopping mall-square-park-river-home and family (2) Changes in reunion scene with relatives after 20 years (environment)-Changes in grandparents' appearance and words and deeds-Changes in parents' appearance and words and deeds-Tell the changes in hometown and feelings of parting (3) Teachers meet and communicate (appearance, words and deeds, work situation, life Such as: hometown buildings, hometown shops, hometown attractions, hometown roads, hometown specialties, hometown primary schools, hometown snacks ... Click on the key words (slides): buildings, shops, roads, attractions, specialties, primary schools and snacks have changed in two time and space, reminding adults of their age, employment and family situation after 20 years, and talking about what they will look like when they grow up. Compare your imagination. 2. Talk about the overall impression of reuniting with my hometown after a long separation: this is not what it used to be. Describe the changes in your hometown collectively and write about all kinds of changes. Pay attention to the guidance of learning methods and introduce changes. ⑴ Take the overall situation into consideration: introduce the changes of various things one by one according to the order of itinerary (foothold). You can draw a stick figure and mark the changes at various points in your hometown (parks, nursing homes, scenic spots, communities, primary schools, etc.). ), and highlights the "shopping street"-snack bar, cafe, teahouse, entertainment center, supermarket, car life museum, photo studio, barber shop, fitness and so on. (Blackboard) The school is new: the campus changes, and the teachers change little. He Qing: Environmental protection, the pond bears more fruits: everywhere. (Learning method guidance: Play songs with the help of songs, such as Childhood, Clouds in Hometown, and Meeting of Young Friends. 3. Ask for homework. A. Write a topic with "Returning to your hometown after 20 years". You can focus on one aspect, such as focusing on change. For example, based on scene description, you can write scenes of reunion with good friends after a long separation; You can write about the journey home; You can also visit the scenery of your hometown ... imagine boldly and be informal. B, pay attention to draw lessons from the writing method of this unit text, and grasp one person, one thing and one thing to complete the article. (Review content) 4. Communication A. Think for yourself and determine the general writing ideas B. Communicate at the same table. Learn from experience. C, freely read the "origin of deliberation" in the "interesting language" after the text, understand the mystery of the use of language and words, and internalize the experience into exercises. 5. Write three pleasing essays, commenting on whose exercises are concrete and substantial, with detailed changes and reasonable imagination, showing the characteristics of full composition teaching. Fourth, praise the lyrics of hometown. Show the teacher's model essay "Praise the Hometown" so that students can appreciate the excellent works and deepen the theme. Sing "Going Back to My Hometown Twenty Years Later" in the tone of "Young Friends Meet": "Let's meet again in twenty years, great motherland, lovely hometown …" Grasp the unique perspective of students and make positive comments; Grasp the students' extraordinary and reasonable imagination to evaluate; Grasp the students' accurate sentences and make positive comments; Grasp the individual progress of students and evaluate it. Fan Wen returned to his hometown after ten or twenty years and looked around. The narrow and muddy village road has become a spacious and solid concrete floor, with all kinds of exotic flowers and grasses planted on both sides, which is particularly bright. From time to time, there are all kinds of famous cars passing by on the highway, such as Mercedes-Benz, BMW, Audi … everything, so cool! Looking around, dilapidated houses have long since disappeared, replaced by skyscrapers. Time flies, the sun and the moon fly, and in a blink of an eye, 20 years have passed. It's 2026. I am the general manager of a well-known computer company. I have developed a lot of new software and made a lot of money. Now I live a comfortable life in a foreign resort. One day, I was thinking, "I have been to most places in the world, where else can I go to play?" Suddenly, I remembered my hometown, my lovely hometown, which I haven't been back for 20 years. So, I immediately packed my bags, took my assistant and life secretary, boarded my self-guided supersonic plane and flew to my hometown as quickly as possible. After a few hours' flight, I came to my hometown-Yingangdong Village, changpo town, Gaozhou City, Guangdong Province. What I saw surprised me. I thought I was looking in the wrong place: looking around, the narrow and muddy village road turned into a spacious and solid concrete floor, with all kinds of exotic flowers and grasses planted on both sides, which was particularly bright; From time to time, there are all kinds of famous cars passing by on the highway, such as Mercedes-Benz, BMW, Audi … everything, so cool! Looking around, dilapidated houses have long since disappeared, replaced by skyscrapers. I remembered the green vegetable fields and sweet potato fields I played when I was a child ... why did they all leave? Look ahead, wow! I found many sheds for growing all kinds of fruits and vegetables. I picked a square, transparent and unknown fruit, looked at it and thought: What is this? Can I eat? I have never seen such fruit abroad. I hesitated and took a gentle bite. Oh, it was delicious. I ate it all after two or three bites. The fruit grower told me that this is a new product "Shuilongguo". Next to the melon shed, there was the cry of chickens and ducks, but I didn't smell the shit of chickens and ducks. What happened? Upon inquiry, it turns out that these chickens and ducks are also newly "cultivated" grandchildren. They can grow up just by basking in the sun. Oh, they don't need feeding. They are all fat and strong. It's amazing! After 20 years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. I should consider moving my villa here! Returning to my hometown after 20 years, I will be a famous scientist in 2028.

Today, I drove my homemade superluminal airship from the moon to see my hometown-Nanchang. Sitting on the superluminal airship, it took only seven or eight minutes to get to Nanchang. When I arrived in Nanchang, I was shocked. The sky is full of ftls. By the way, I forgot to tell you what a ftl is like for so long: the chassis of a ftl is a soft sponge. You just need to press a navigation key where you want to go, and then a notebook will stretch out in front of you. You only need to enter the name of the place you want to go, but for safety reasons, you'd better start the protective film and the recognizer. Oh! I almost forgot to mention that the energy of this airship absorbs solar energy. It takes half an hour to absorb solar energy for a month because the car is equipped with an energy multiplier. I parked the airship in the parking lot, and as soon as I stepped onto the sidewalk, the sidewalk moved. Ten minutes later. The sidewalk stopped when we reached the elementary school attached to Jiangjiao. It turns out that the sidewalk will follow people's thoughts to my destination. As soon as I entered the school gate, I was attracted by the scenery in front of me. Glass buildings, green belts, birds ... tired of playing all day, but unable to find a place to live. I was walking in the street in frustration when I met an old man. He asked, "What's the matter, young man?" I said, "No place to spend the night." Grandpa said loudly, "sleep at my house!" " "

I was so happy that I said in English, "Thank you." Grandpa's house is so beautiful, and there are glass that can be soundproof and burglarproof everywhere. There are many headlights, and he will never run out of electricity there!

This is Nanchang in 2028 and my hometown. I went back to my hometown after 20 years. How time flies. Twenty years have passed in an instant, and now I am honored to be a people's teacher. My yearning for my hometown hasn't changed at all. Every grass and tree in my hometown makes me dream, especially the white-haired old mother who has dedicated her life to me. I drove to my hometown, thinking all the way: have the potholes flattened and the narrow path widened? But anyway, my colorful childhood will not change. Ah, here we are, my hometown. But I was stunned by what I saw. The stream has become clear and insightful, and it is no longer so turbid. All kinds of exotic flowers and plants and a big tree are planted on both sides of the avenue, and the whole city has turned green. Look, there are some willows by the stream. Long, soft willow branches fluttered in the wind, as if to say "welcome, welcome". The grass here is more lush and green, and it looks like a tapestry from a distance. Flowers are more fragrant and refreshing. Birds are singing on the branches. This painting is so beautiful and natural. Seeing this stream reminds me of catching crabs and catching small fish and shrimp when I was a child. I suddenly remembered my alma mater, which nurtured me and taught me the true meaning of the world. Near, near, my heart began to get excited and began to surge. Ah, my alma mater, that sacred place. Is this Ning Wu Primary School? I sighed, and I even felt that I was in the wrong place. There are lush trees and flowers here. The classroom has become bright and spacious, and the tables, chairs and benches there are brand new. Ah, it's so beautiful, so beautiful, it's all unimaginable. I went back to that warm home. Mom and Dad, I'm back. Mom and dad came when they heard the sound. "Mom, I miss you so much." The two of us embraced excitedly, with tears in our eyes. My mother brought me a cup of tea. I asked my mother doubtfully, "Mom, how has my hometown changed so much?" Now that science and technology are developed, the development speed of Dongyang is like sesame blossoms. Now schools and roads have been improved. Time flies. I'm leaving this lovely hometown again. Twenty years later, I returned to my hometown of "Ding, Ding". My alarm clock rang and I looked up at my calendar. On August 8, 2027, I left my hometown for 20 years! Today next year, the Olympic Games will be held in my hometown-Wanzhou, Chongqing. What has changed in my hometown? Go back to your hometown to see! I dragged my suitcase to New York Airport. After boarding the plane, I heard the flight attendant's sweet Chinese. I seem to have met relatives and friends who have been reunited for a long time ... Twenty years ago, in order to study, I took a plane for more than ten hours before arriving in the United States. Today, it only took me more than two hours to fly on the A390 from new york to Wanzhou Wuqiao Airport. What a change! When I got off the plane, a voice-activated electric chair came to me. I sat up with my luggage and shouted "Airport Restaurant". The electric chair came to the restaurant on the first floor of the airport. I haven't eaten authentic Chinese food for a long time. Eat quickly! The food in my hometown is really delicious! After dinner, the electric chair took me to the gate of the airport, which brightened my eyes, because there were many means of transportation, subways, maglev trains and so on. What's more, on the two marble pillars at the entrance of the airport, I personally participated in the design of the mascot of the 2028 Wanzhou Olympic Games-Jinlong Yufeng, which really made me proud! I took the subway to the five-star hotel in Wuqiao. There are many facilities here, and the waiters are all trained. At night, I lay in bed imagining the downtown area of Wanzhou, thinking and thinking, falling asleep ... I had breakfast in a hurry in the morning and couldn't wait to take the subway to my alma mater. Along the way, birds and flowers, green trees and red flowers, tall buildings have mushroomed ... When I came to my alma mater, several bright red characters came into view. "Wanzhou Shanghai Primary School" is so familiar and kind! Entering the school, brand-new classrooms are varied, and various cartoon images are symbols of different classes. There are anti-theft devices, the latest ultra-thin computers, high-definition digital TVs, electrically controlled blackboards, tables and chairs that can be adjusted up and down in the classroom. The classroom is surrounded by spacious playground, green lawn and beautiful garden. Being in it, I felt extremely happy and suddenly relaxed. Say goodbye to my alma mater, take the maglev train to the main city of Wanzhou, and find that the streets are clean and spacious, and skyscrapers are row upon row. Shopping malls such as New Century, Parkson and Chongbai are still lively, but the most lively one is Wal-Mart! Gaosuntang Square is gorgeous, Jigongling Primary School is brand-new, and Wanzhou No.2 Middle School is famous at home and abroad ... Then, I went to Taibaiyan. The dilapidated farmhouse in the past has become a spacious and bright building; The dam of the farmhouse has also become bigger, clean and tidy, with trees and flowers everywhere; There are lively little fish swimming in the pond. How beautiful! In the evening, when I came to binjiang road, the banks of the Yangtze River were brightly lit. With the bright lights, I saw the Yangtze River clearly and the river became clearer. Looking around, the lights of the Yangtze River Bridge, the Second Bridge and the Third Bridge are flashing, and the Olympic mascot Jinlong Yufeng at the end of the bridgehead is competing for beauty! I went back to my hometown this time and saw many changes. My hometown is becoming more and more prosperous and beautiful. Wanzhou people are welcoming the arrival of the 2028 Olympic Games with full enthusiasm, civilized etiquette and thoughtful service. I am proud of my hometown, and I love my hometown even more! When I returned to my hometown in the morning after 20 years, a crisp music woke me up from my sleep. I opened my sleepy eyes and looked at my electronic watch. It is June 65438+1 October1in 2028. At this moment, I remembered the agreement made by our classmates 20 years ago-to meet in front of the main building on June 65438+1October 65438+1October 0, 2028. So I hurried to school. Walking into the school, there are flower beds surrounded by fences, which can emit different colors of light. When I came to the main building, a robot stopped me and asked me to input the class, name and teacher's name. After I went in, I got on the elevator and arrived in the blink of an eye. Suddenly, a man rushed out and said, "Boy, I forgot my old classmates after only twenty years." I guess he's Zhang Yujun. I asked, "How have you been these years?" He said: "I suffered a lot and finally finished my studies. Now I am a teacher here. " We walked into the classroom and met my teachers and classmates. In these 20 years, everyone has worked hard and achieved remarkable results. Our teacher Liu has also taught a group of excellent students. Time is really amazing, and everyone who makes good use of time has a rich harvest. Train of thought analysis: This article mainly captures the memories of my childhood friends. Imagine a partner who didn't work hard as a child, Zhang Yujun, who finally suffered a lot, finished his studies and became a teacher. Other students have excellent grades; Childhood teachers have also taught a group of excellent students. One last point: Everyone who makes good use of time will get rich harvest. Twenty years later, I returned to my hometown on this day in 2028, which happened to be the Eleventh Golden Week. This holiday, I finally returned to my haunted hometown. When I arrived in my hometown by spaceship 2028, I couldn't believe everything in front of me was true. In the past, there was mud everywhere in my hometown, so the traffic was inconvenient when it rained. Now, it has become a wide road; The humble small tile houses in my hometown have now become high-rise buildings; My hometown ... I immediately got up and went back to the place where I used to live. As soon as I entered the door, I saw my cousin enjoying himself and wearing gorgeous clothes. Now, he is a little-known hair stylist! When I came to the hall, I sat on the sofa. Somehow, I feel very comfortable all over. Lezai told me: "This is the massage sofa he invented. It can promote blood circulation and help people sitting on it get rid of excess fat, so it is also called a slimming sofa. " Then, I followed Le Zai to his new home. Before coming to a bare clearing, it is strange that there are no figures or weeds in this clearing. Le Zai pointed to the vacant lot and said, "This is my home!" " "Say that finish, a door appeared. Go through that door and you'll be brand new! Everything in front of me is actually some gorgeous household appliances. Lezai told me that this is an invisible room, but as long as you enter the owner's fingerprint, this invisible room will automatically appear and you can enter the house immediately! I reluctantly returned, and it was not until nightfall that I reluctantly bid farewell to my developed hometown. My lovely great inventor is happy! Train of thought analysis: The imagination of this paper is comprehensive, and all three aspects mentioned in the writing guidance are written out, and they are seamlessly integrated, giving people a kind of natural feeling-this feeling will only be felt when we meet again after a long separation. Changes in my hometown are also natural, some can be seen in front of me, some can't be seen now, and may become a reality many years later. Without imagination, where can there be reality? Twenty years later, I returned to my hometown, walked out of the clean airport and walked on the long road with all-purpose luggage. I smelled it with my nose and found that the smell of automobile exhaust disappeared, but turned into fresh air. It turns out that this is a new invention of scientists. A filter is installed on the exhaust pipe, which can turn the dirty automobile exhaust into fresh air, so that the automobile not only does not pollute the air, but also purifies the air. At this time, I suddenly found that the sewers on both sides of the road disappeared and became a row of neat holes. It turns out that this kind of small hole can collect rainwater. When the weather is hot, this small hole can automatically spray smoke-like rain, making the ground moist and the air moist. And after treatment, it has become domestic water. Unconsciously, I walked into my alma mater, into the classroom where I studied and came to my place. I found that there were no schoolbags and textbooks, only a computer monitor, a mainframe and a keyboard were in the desk hole. In class, click the name of the class, and you can learn the content of the class like turning a page. You don't need a pen to write your homework. Just finish your homework on the computer and copy it to the mailbox and send it to the teacher. I walked out of school and came to the place where I lived as a child. I found that the surrounding open space has become a high-rise building. In order not to let the children have nowhere to play, I specially planned a piece of land and built a children's amusement park, which is free to play all day and open! I'm looking forward to it. I'm looking forward to such a beautiful day coming to us soon ... Analysis of ideas: This paper mainly assumes from the aspect of environmental protection that the increase in the number of cars is an indisputable fact and serious air pollution will be inevitable; The same is true of water pollution, which threatens all living things in nature. The little author is really blessed to think that all these things have been solved after 20 years. The change of schools and the renewal of educational means are more and more appearing in front of people. The little author has not forgotten to provide a place for students to play-a children's amusement park that is open free of charge all day!