Slimming method refers to the problems of verbosity, redundancy and repetition in sick sentences. Redundancy should be removed to make sentences concise and slim. Markedness refers to being good at finding marked words, structures or features in sick sentences. Signs are often associated with fixed language diseases, and there are certain rules to follow. Details are as follows:

(1) has coordinate phrases, which may be due to improper collocation, unequal concepts of size and improper word order.

On holidays, he often leaves his job and goes to the park to play with his sister. (improper use of "and". This sentence can be understood as "he" and his sister went to the park to play, or as "he" left his job and his sister went to the park to play alone. Replace "and" with "belt" to eliminate ambiguity)

The value of life does not lie in how others worship, admire and envy themselves. (improper word order. Should be "envy, reverence, worship")

(2) Prepositions may appear because of improper collocation, disordered structure, reversed subject and object, and incomplete subject.

When they encounter difficulties, they are not depressed, but gain strength from everyone's trust and concern and establish confidence in overcoming difficulties. (Improper collocation, "in" should be "from")

② On March 17, 2007, six members were expelled from the International Olympic Committee for bribery scandal. The next day, the world's major newspapers reported this event that shocked the international sports world in detail. (If the preposition is not used properly, "about" should be replaced by "about")

(3) The appearance of related words (conjunctions) may be due to improper collocation, incomplete related words (conjunctions) and improper word order.

Only by fundamentally solving the problem of "why people" can we better serve the people. (Improper collocation of related words should be a necessary condition, and "only ……" should be used. )

Although he is a farmer, he usually likes to study, knows a lot of words and is good at yangko. (The related words are incomplete, so "but" should be added before "normal")

Due to the low technical level, these products are either lower in quality than similar products in coastal areas or higher in cost. (The related words are in the wrong position and the subjects are inconsistent. The relative word should come before the subject, and "no" should be adjusted to "quality")

(4) When pronouns appear, there may be ambiguity and repetition.

You can't go to see him at the moment, he is taking the postgraduate entrance examination in the examination room. (unclear meaning, not sure whether "he" refers to "invigilator" examinee ")

Due to this traffic accident, the traffic on Wanping Road on Huaihai Road was closed for nearly three hours. (Again, "for this" means "for this traffic accident")

(5) There are long objects, which may be due to the incomplete head language and improper collocation.

① In order to fully popularize the use of rapeseed cake or cottonseed cake to feed pigs and accelerate the development of pig industry, the county held three technical training courses for breeders. (The target is not fluent, so "experience" should be added after "feeding pigs")

② Understanding sandstorm Understanding sandstorm is to prevent sandstorm from a scientific point of view and reduce the losses caused by sandstorm. (The object head of "reach" is incomplete, and "purpose" is added after "loss")

(6) There are many predicates, which may be improper collocation and stealing subjects.

This cultural station has become a place to educate and help backward youth, save and train young people who have lost their footing, and has been commended by superior leaders many times. (Improper collocation, "training" and "young people who have slipped" do not match)

Although the factory is small in scale, it won the provincial science conference award twice and the title of provincial quality product three times, and its products are exported to all parts of the country and Southeast Asia. (Swap the topic, "Factory" can't "win the title of provincial quality product")

(7) There are questions and negative words, which may be inappropriate.

Of course, the spirit of Lei Feng should be endowed with new connotations, but who can deny that there is no need to learn from Lei Feng now? It is illogical to add double negation to interrogative sentences and turn them into triple negation.

(8) The appearance of "Shi" sentence may be due to improper collocation of subject and object and mixed sentence patterns.

The West Lake in Hangzhou is a beautiful season. (The subject "West Lake" is not properly matched with the object "Season")

② How can we make everyone rich? The key is that knowledge plays a decisive role. ("The key is knowledge" and "Knowledge plays a decisive role")

(9) Both classical Chinese words and written language have appeared, which may be repetitive.

(1) The plan to set up toll gates on traffic trunk lines must be discussed and approved by the standing committee of the local people's congress and announced to the public. ("Zhu" means "Yu", and "Yu" is repeated)

The opening ceremony of the Beijing Olympic Games was wonderful and first-class, which was widely praised by world public opinion. ("comparable" means "can", which is repeated with "can")

After listening to the truth he stated, I thanked him from the bottom of my heart. ("Sincerity" means "in my heart.