I finally understand that when people's activities are associated with emotions, attitudes, postures or expressions, they are meaningful actions. This is a personalized action, which can create vivid pictures and make the dialogue full of vitality.
Let me give you an example: Officer Hawkins and Captain carruthers are two policemen. They are discussing a murder in the sheriff's office. Hawkins looked at carruthers, "there are a few things haven't been found out, lieutenant. Whose is this blue shoe? And this key is a second-class key. From the door, padlock or suitcase? " Carruthers shrugged his shoulders and Hawkins put these two things in his drawer. Carruthers stood up. "Maybe we can get more clues from the coroner." He walked towards the door. "His autopsy report should be on my desk now. Don't worry, Hawkins, we'll find out the truth soon. " He left the office. This scene lacks dramatic effect. These boring verbs: look, shrug, let go, stand, walk and leave, do not describe intention, attitude, posture or expression. Did not express the feelings of two people. Take another look. When these boring verbs turn into vivid activities, the scene immediately becomes full of vitality. Hawkins leaned forward. He pointed to the items on the table and said, "There are some facts that have not been determined, Captain. Whose is this blue shoe? And this inferior key is hung on the door, padlock or suitcase? " He stuffed them into the drawer and slammed the drawer. Carruthers stood up with a smile and patted Hawkins on the shoulder. "Maybe we can get more clues from the coroner. His autopsy report should be on my desk by now. Don't worry, Hawkins, I believe we will find out the truth soon. " He wandered out of the office. Now the emotion in this scene is clear. Every movement involves posture, attitude and expression. We saw Hawkins' troubles, and carruthers eliminated them with confidence. These words and actions complement each other. The following example is a conversation between two little boys outside the gate of an old house. "Come on, Johnny, let's go in." Billy said. Johnny looked at him. "I heard that there are ghosts here. People say they have seen ghosts. " "oh! There are no ghosts. It's all a bluff. " Billy stepped onto the porch. Johnny followed closely. Hardly had he reached the front door when he heard a scream and immediately turned and ran. Here are some colorless verbs: say, look, walk, follow, arrive, hear and turn around. The purpose of this conversation is to let us know that Bobby encouraged Johnny to enter a haunted house by stimulating him. But the dialogue doesn't involve gestures.
Now, let these actions convey attitude, posture and expression, and make the scene active. "Come on, Johnny, let's go in." Billy estimated that he was afraid to go in. Johnny is pale and even his voice is trembling. "I heard that there are ghosts here. People say they have seen ghosts. " "Uh-oh, there is no ghost. Those words are just scaring people. " Billy strutted up the steps. He took a challenging look at Johnny standing outside the door. Johnny glanced behind Billy's shoulder and finally moved forward again. He pretended to be bold, but he kept shaking at the front door. Just then, he heard a scream, a terrible scream. He ran down the steps and rushed out of the gate. Now this scene has a horrible tone, giving life to this small scene, and the central meaning is very clear.
In these two examples, the dialogue has not changed at all, but the description of the action has changed. It is these modified action descriptions that help readers better understand these scenes. As a writing exercise, you can try to add meaningful action descriptions to the same two scenes without changing the dialogue. For example, you can try to show the sense of humor between Hawkins and carruthers, or the adventurous spirit between Billy and Johnny instead of fear.
Composition of action description In English class the day before yesterday, Miswang assigned us a particularly interesting assignment: learn to do six actions on 24 pages, and whoever does more will get more points.
Learn to do actions? The students were curious and opened their English books in a hurry. Seeing these interesting moves, I breathed a sigh of relief and began to be complacent: it's too simple, a piece of cake! I will definitely get the highest score then.
Actually, it's not. It looks easy, but it's not as simple as you think! The first action is: move your eyebrows.
I compared it with the mirror. I either blink my eyes or shrug my nose, but no matter what I do, I just can't get away from those two naughty eyebrows like brothers.
Alas, they gave me a "duel" from the beginning, and they joined forces to boycott my "carrot and stick". They can get on if they want, and get off if they want. They can't be separated and they won't listen to me.
"Oh, my eyebrows little ancestors! Please, leave me alone! " "What did you say? Don't let go! " "Hum, don't be too happy.
Then I'll take care of you myself. "I" cheered up "again, racking my brains and frowning and thinking: Yes! I have one eye closed, one eye open, one eyebrow left, and the other eyebrow upturned. Isn't that enough? Haha, I succeeded! Let's look at the second action: move an ear.
This action depends entirely on your own feelings, and you can only understand it but not express it.
I think hard and do it with my heart. Who knows, my ears didn't move, but my nose, eyes, mouth and eyebrows moved.
I really can't do anything about them, so I have to ask the "master"-Gao Xiang to teach me to "move my ears".
It's the teacher. Nothing like me. His ears move, but he doesn't move elsewhere.
He asked me to touch his ear with my hand.
Ah, I suddenly had an inspiration. With my unremitting efforts, one ear miraculously moved.
The second action is also completed! The third action is the simplest: shrug your nose.
I pursed my mouth and raised my eyebrows. My eyes are round and my nose is wide open.
What a modern version of "Pig Eight Rings"! The fourth action is no problem: the right hand touches the left hand from behind.
I have studied dance, which is the basic movement in acrobatics. I usually practice in dance class, which is my best.
Not only that, I can touch my wrist! The fifth action is to eat with your left hand.
I picked up two pens to make chopsticks, ready to clip a chalk head, and I skillfully clipped it for a long time! Haha, this is my first time to enjoy it! Awesome! The sixth action is: left fork and right knife.
I have eaten western food several times and am familiar with this method. It can be done easily! Hehe ... I have learned all six movements, waiting for the teacher to add points!
What are the compositions for writing small animal movements? Lovely puppy. I have a puppy at home. His name is Husai, and he is very naughty.
Every time I come back from school, it comes at me as soon as it sees me, as if to play with me.
My grandmother also has a puppy. Its name is Snow White.
Both Hussey and Snow White are white, but Hussey has black spots.
These two puppies are almost the same age. It was as big as my Chinese textbook when I came down.
Once, I brought them meat.
As soon as they saw the meat, they knelt down and stuck out their tongues to see the meat in my hand.
Seeing their greedy appearance, I put the meat in the dish bowl and they immediately grabbed it.
Husai grabbed the meat first. He picked it up and wanted it for himself. Snow White quickly opened her mouth and bit her tightly. The two men competed with each other and refused to give in.
Finally, they tore the meat in half and ate happily.
Look at the way they eat meat. Very cute.
That day, I took Hussey to grandma's house to do my homework, and the snow climbed over and circled around me.
When I ignored it, it licked me with its tongue, which made me unable to do my homework.
I have no choice but to put it in a cage.
After finishing my homework, I let the snow out.
It seems very unhappy. I gave it a small piece of meat to eat, and it just shook its head and became very happy.
When Hussey saw Snow White eating meat, she ran very fast, but the meat had been eaten up by Snow White.
I had a good time with two puppies.
Character action description composition is urgent ~ ~ ~! ! My deskmate My deskmate's name is Ni Jianwei. He has black hair, about an inch long.
He has light eyebrows under his hair and big eyes under his eyebrows. His lips are slightly upturned and there are some wrinkles on his nose. When he laughed, he stared at his big eyes and looked as if he were laughing.
Ni Jianwei has many advantages and disadvantages.
Advantages are helpful and love physical exercise, especially running.
The disadvantage is that the action is too slow, and sometimes I like to hit people.
When Ni Jianwei was happy, his eyes narrowed into a crack. Originally, he was laughing instead of laughing, but now he smiles naturally and sometimes gives me something to eat.
Today is the mid-term exam. Of course, Ni Jianwei also has problems he can't do.
He buried himself in writing for a while, then frowned when he encountered problems that he couldn't do, smiled on his face, held his head in his hand, looked like a little doctor, and sometimes yawned.
He's angry again. His big eyes, which are usually full of smiles, now emit two cold lights, which are aggressive, his teeth are creaking and his nose is panting, as if he were short of oxygen.
Ni Jianwei also likes to meddle. I haven't bought "100 moved the father of middle school students" until now, so he will come to talk about me. It's really annoying
But he is very generous. Whenever I forget something, he always lends it to me.
Action description essay 150: When the high jumper takes off, he pulls his leg to the ground with the outside of the sole of his foot substantially and smoothly, and quickly rolls from the heel to the front of the sole of his foot. Due to the positive and rapid forward feed of his hip joint and the rapid arc run-up when he put down his foot, he formed a backward and inward leaning posture. In the take-off buffer stage, increase the take-off speed. When the body changes from tilt to vertical and the center of gravity moves above the take-off leg, the three joints of the take-off leg are quickly and effectively pushed, and the trunk stands almost vertically above the take-off foot before leaving the ground. The direction of the take-off leg should be out of the center of gravity of the body, producing the necessary rotational impulse for passing the pole. He jumped over and succeeded.
My father gave me a short essay describing the function of the topic. My classmate I have a smart and lovely classmate. His name is Zhou Sijie.
Zhou Sijie's biggest appearance feature is that his eyebrows are very dark, as if he were drawn with pen and ink.
His eyes are small and round, giving people a very naughty feeling.
However, Sijie's eyes always sparkle with wisdom, which makes people feel that he is very smart.
Zhou Sijie is rich in knowledge, and Chinese and science classes have become his stage.
Whenever the teacher asks him questions, the students get ready and wait for his "long speech".
What he says is always specific and comprehensive, and can get to the point.
Once, the teacher asked a question in combination with extracurricular knowledge.
Students, look at me, I look at you, no one can answer why, and I have racked my brains, but I can't think of it.
At this time, Zhou Sijie raised his hand confidently and the teacher nodded.
J.J. suddenly stood up and answered the question brilliantly.
The teacher gave him an approving look, and the students applauded him from the heart. The warm applause lasted for a long time.
I admire him for having so much knowledge.
Zhou Sijie's composition is also very good. Reading his composition is memorable and thought-provoking. I want to see it again after reading it.
His composition is sometimes profound, and sometimes it is very clever.
For example, "forbearance is the highest realm of Shaolin.
"... if you want to say something funny in his composition, you have said it all day and all night.
Zhou Sijie is not only funny in composition, but also cute.
He always does what children do, as if he hasn't grown up yet.
Staring at his eyes, clenching his fists with both hands and looking fierce are all his usual actions, which are very interesting.
My stomach can't stand being with him.
Do you know why? He always does something interesting, which makes me laugh and hurts my stomach.
I dare to predict that he will become a comedian in the future.
J.J. is also the idol of boys and always creates some exciting games for them.
This is a learned, gentle, lovely and funny little boy-Zhou Sijie.
My cousin I have an innocent, lovely, intelligent and lively cousin. He has a pair of big eyes, and when he thinks, his black eyes turn straight in his eyes.
Cousin can show a pair of white and neat little teeth when she smiles, which is very interesting.
I like him very much.
My cousin lives in grandma's house.
Once, he told his grandmother that he liked Xiaohua Mall.
Grandma loves her cousin and listens to him.
He asked me to watch my cousin and buy Xiaohua Mall on the street.
Grandma bought a lively and beautiful Xiaohua Mall.
My cousin jumped for joy when he saw the lively and lovely Xiaohua Mall, so he ran to grandma's side, played with the lovely Xiaohua Mall, stroked it gently, and hummed beautiful Xiaohua Mall songs in his mouth.
Then Xiaohua Mall pawed at his cousin's pants.
Grandpa saw it, picked up Xiaohua Mall and threw it away.
My cousin burst into tears when he saw it. He said, "Grandpa is bad, but Xiaohua Mall is not sensible. If you want to educate him, how can you throw him away If I am not sensible, will you abandon me? You see how pathetic! " Everyone burst out laughing.
Grandpa quickly picked up Xiaohua Mall and said to his cousin, "Yes, the kitten is not sensible. My brother will educate it!" Another time, my cousin was playing in the house. He didn't listen to his grandmother and insisted on playing with his bike. As a result, he accidentally overturned his bike and pinned his finger. He quickly broke his finger and burst into tears.
At this moment, grandma heard crying and ran out of the room. Seeing this, she was angry and funny, so she didn't go to physics and chemistry.
He stopped crying for a while and peeked through his fingers to see if grandma paid attention to him.
He found that grandma ignored him and went to her to laugh.
How interesting and lovely my cousin is! I like him very much.
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A composition describing the movements of small animals 200 words Little squirrel A few days ago, my father took me to climb Towel Mountain.
Although it is autumn, the trees on Towel Hill are still so green.
Dad told me: There are many chestnut trees on Towel Mountain, and there are many little squirrels on the trees. I just walked and looked to see if there were any squirrels in the tree.
Suddenly, a chestnut fell from the tree.
I looked up, and it turned out to be a little squirrel, lying on the tree and eating chestnuts with relish.
I saw the little squirrel holding chestnuts in both hands, and then pushing them away bit by bit with his teeth, eating the nuts inside.
I stood there stunned. After a while, my father said, "It's still far from the top of the mountain. Let's leave now. At this time of year, many little squirrels come out to eat chestnuts. Come again next time. "
"Say that finish, my father and I climbed to the top of the mountain again.
My cousin I have an innocent, lovely, intelligent and lively cousin. He has a pair of big watery eyes. When he thinks about a problem, his black eyes roll in his eyes.
Cousin can show a pair of white and neat little teeth when she smiles, which is very interesting.
I like him very much.
My cousin lives in grandma's house.
Once, he told his grandmother that he liked Xiaohua Mall.
Grandma loves her cousin and listens to him.
He asked me to watch my cousin and buy Xiaohua Mall on the street.
Grandma bought a lively and beautiful Xiaohua Mall.
My cousin jumped for joy when he saw the lively and lovely Xiaohua Mall, so he ran to grandma's side, played with the lovely Xiaohua Mall, stroked it gently, and hummed beautiful Xiaohua Mall songs in his mouth.
Then Xiaohua Mall pawed at his cousin's pants.
Grandpa saw it, picked up Xiaohua Mall and threw it away.
My cousin burst into tears when he saw it. He said, "Grandpa is bad, but Xiaohua Mall is not sensible. If you want to educate him, how can you throw him away If I am not sensible, will you abandon me? You see how pathetic! " Everyone burst out laughing.
Grandpa quickly picked up Xiaohua Mall and said to his cousin, "Yes, the kitten is not sensible. My brother will educate it!" Another time, my cousin was playing in the house. He didn't listen to his grandmother and insisted on playing with his bike. As a result, he accidentally overturned his bike and pinned his finger. He quickly broke his finger and burst into tears.
At this moment, grandma heard crying and ran out of the room. Seeing this scene, she was so angry and funny that she ignored him.
He stopped crying for a while and peeked through his fingers to see if grandma paid attention to him.
He found that grandma ignored him and went to her to laugh.
How interesting and lovely my cousin is! I like him very much.
My grandmother has a Xiaohua Mall, which is very popular.
Xiaohua Mall's back is covered with yellow fluff with white stripes, and his triangular face has a pair of alert and bright eyes.
The triangular ears on the top of the head rotate flexibly, and the sharp claws on the four legs are generally placed in the meat pad, which is as thick as plum blossoms and walks silently.
Xiaohua Mall also has a slender tail, which often swings.
Xiaohua Mall may be naughty. I often tease him and throw a ball of wool in front of him. His two little paws alternately roll the ball of wool and keep playing.
I waved the ball of wool back and forth. It jumps up and down, and sometimes it rolls underground.
In the evening, when I sleep, Xiaohua Mall often climbs into my bed. If I don't let it, it won't stop barking, so I have to sleep with it.
Although Xiaohua Mall is naughty, he sleeps lazily most of the day.
At night, Xiaohua Mall crouched quietly in the dark, staring at the mouse hole, only swinging gently.
After a while, a mouse slowly poked its head out and looked around. When it saw nothing, it came out slowly.
I saw Xiaohua Mall's hind legs push forward, and the mouse was pinned down by its front paws. He bowed his head and took a bite and went to enjoy its delicious food.
Xiaohua Mall is naughty, lovely and earnest.
I like it very much.
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"We all have a home, called the girls' dormitory.
There are many beautiful women in "Top Students", and the supervisor is just one of them ... "Humming a little song of my own, I will show you the girls in our class with a light pen.
"I am the most handsome in the world!" Someone jumped out of his mouth in the shower.
According to normal people's thinking, this person is probably sick.
But that's the truth. There are all kinds of birds when the Woods are big. This miss "someone" is the famous health director of our class.
Hard-working, tolerant and generous, this is our unanimous evaluation of her.
It is said that girls are spoiled and cannot bear hardships, then you are all wet.
Don't believe it? Then please look down.
"One, two, three ..." Listen to this familiar voice and you will know that it must be time for the PE teacher to ask us to do push-ups.
I saw that the girls were all tired and barely finished eating, and they didn't care about reaching the standard at all.
Therefore, she is particularly unique in the crowd.
Beads of sweat dripped from her face as her body fell. No matter how hard she tried, she kept on doing it. This spirit makes those boys who have always called themselves "Hercules" feel ashamed.
She is the monitor of our class-Comrade Tong.
"I am a little rabbit! Meow.
"People who hear this sentence, please don't be afraid. She is not a mutant animal or a virtual existence. She is my good friend-Rong Rong.
She is kind and simple, strong and quiet. "Quiet as a virgin, moving as a cunning rabbit" is her true portrayal.
"Top students, top students, where are we going?" What is a top student? Top students are awesome.
Gifted, a good student in the teacher's mind, a god in the classmate's mind, there are really several gods in our class.
However, I still won't reveal her real name here. After all, "pride makes people retrogress, modesty makes people progress", and she is modest and low-key.
The girls in our class are like blooming flowers, each with its own personality and characteristics, but from the listed girls, we can get a glimpse of the overall appearance of the girls in our class-high-spirited, infinite youth! They are gentle and quiet, or warm and cheerful; Or versatile or well-read, this is the girl in our class!
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