1. The commentary should be further revised and expressed in concise and poetic language.
Achievement, planning background, content, goal and vision, the story should have a plot, be integrated with the planning content of the new city, and be narrative and artistic.
2. The promo should be expressed in a professional way, and its story is more profound.
Degree and breadth, to shock people and attract people to invest and start businesses.
3, the title is too calm, the ending can't make people feel excited, grab people's hearts, and the ending can't lift its head.
The climax, the first full story is not strong and too dull. The picture at the beginning of the propaganda film should capture people's hearts, and the ending should set off a climax, leaving a aftertaste like a leopard tail with a crested hair, giving people room for imagination. The story in the film should be coherent, such as singing opera, with the story as the background and logic before and after.
4, the picture switch is too fast, you can insert the rotation.
As one of the "five cities" of Wuhan Xingang, there should be a full lens.
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7, 220km2 control area, 65 km2 to have a master plan. The words and explanations of the four districts should be consistent, and the Xiliang Lake Tourist Resort should be changed to Xiliang Lake.
International tourist resort
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9. The subtitle of Shen 6ˇ08 should be revised. There is no bridge between Shenshan Island and the administrative commercial and residential area.
10, the four modernizations are synchronized, there are 8 new communities in the new city, and smart cities should have maps.
1 1, the fusion of script and explanation, and the fusion of stories are incoherent, which makes people a little confused.
Second, the music should be soft and firm, the rhythm should be appropriate, and the feelings should be rhythmic and magnetic.
And charisma, the whole film is too fast.
Third, the picture.
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3, the framing should take a fine picture explanation and the picture lens should be very consistent. In the planning and layout, urban design (including the expression of street view effect) should be expressed in categories.
The whole and energy-saving landscape of urban design should be expressed in whole and in part from different angles, and some should increase the animation effect of sightseeing)
4. The overall picture is good, and there are two aspects that need to be revised. (Note: The first is a three-headed diagram.
The film is not clear; Second, the picture is repeated; Third, increase the videos or photos of the leaders of the provincial party Committee, and the photos of the leaders switch too fast, and then choose after the photos are optimized).
Fourth, it is necessary to show frontier industries such as high-tech industries and life sciences, and to reflect higher vocational life.
The best living and investment environment in the world should reflect the best products, and the best products and clothing and textile industries should be deleted.
Five, promotional films, wall charts, sand table should pay attention to two points: first, publicity planning; Second, new.
The views of urbanization, street view planning, industrial planning, overall planning and special planning should be consistent in terms of pictures and figures, and there should be no contradictions.
6. Make a promotional film in Chinese and English.