Keywords: autumn outing, junior high school, senior one, 750 words
Words: 750 words composition
This article is suitable for: the first grade of junior high school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 750 words in the first grade of junior high school, and the title is "Autumn Tour in Phoenix Ridge". Welcome to contribute enthusiastically. "The scenery in the outer suburbs, the roads in the suburbs, and the natural oxygen bank in Beijing!
"This is the overall characteristics of the Phoenix Ridge Natural Scenic Area. 10 year 10 2, sunny. I went to Phoenix Ridge with my parents and several uncles. First, on the way to Fenghuangling, there are many orchards on both sides of the road, with bursts of fruit fragrance coming from time to time. We decided to pick some apples first. Entering an orchard, there are different varieties on both sides of the road. The red Fuji apple on the left has just hung a red smiling face; The yellow bananas and apples on the right are all green and yellow. I reached out and picked the Fuji apple that was not red. My mother said it was not good enough. It's time to eat yellow bananas and apples. So I turned right and looked for the big yellow apple to pick. After a while, I picked out half a basket. Look up at the tree, ah, the apple at that height is more beautiful. I looked at the target, grabbed the pedal, climbed to the branch and picked the attractive yellow apple. After picking apples, I went out to find some cherry tomatoes. Small red fruits are hung on the green seedlings, which are very beautiful. I can't help picking some cherry tomatoes. I really went home with a full load. Second, after picking on the mountain, we drove straight to Phoenix Ridge. Fenghuangling has more than 40 scenic spots on the north, middle and south lines. We chose the center line and started hiking. The central line starts from Longquan Temple, a famous temple in the west of Beijing, and along the way, we have been on a winding stone step road. Along the way, I saw the ancient health training ground such as Xianren Cave, Sanfo Cave, Xuanyuan Cave and Xianren Chair, and built pavilions and stone benches for tourists to rest along the way. In a small forest, there are still some hammocks hanging, and I am comfortable lying on them. After a while, the fatigue disappeared. When I walked out of the temple gate, I saw some people around me, so I went to have a look. There is a donation box and an introduction to Xishan Xiaomi Garden. I donated some money, and a monk gave me a small bag of Xishan millet for me to taste. I got something new. Unconsciously, one day passed, and we enjoyed the autumn wind and sunshine, and set foot on our way home full of autumn fruits. Teacher's comment: This article by the little author mainly describes the trip to Phoenix Ridge with my parents in autumn. The full text describes the process and interesting things of picking fruits and visiting Phoenix Ridge in the order of sightseeing, with emphasis on picking apples and offering love. Reasonable layout. The article describes the process of autumn outing smoothly and truly. However, the language of the article is dull and lacks certain literary talent and aesthetic feeling. I hope our little author can read more model essays and extract good words. I believe your article will be better!
(Xue Le China famous teacher: Teacher Zou Zi) 2009-10-815:19: 00.