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The argumentative essays in People's Daily are both literary and artistic.
Among the many styles in the examination room, argumentative writing may be the most brilliant. It conquered the marking teachers and examinees with its extensive themes, wonderful lyrical reasoning and profound cultural heritage. Have you found that most of the excellent compositions in the examination room are argumentative? However, writing argumentative essays is not easy. The biggest problem of argumentative writing is that it is not like this style, or the stylistic characteristics of argumentative writing are insufficient. If you want to write this style that is most favored by marking teachers, you should not only consolidate your writing skills, but also understand the stylistic characteristics of this style and master its writing methods.

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Representative work 1: Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required.

In the evening, the two grandparents leaned against the window and looked out.

"You see, thousands of lights, bright streets, neon flashing. It's beautiful! " The boy said, "If there is no electricity, modern technology and tall buildings, where can we find them?"

The old man nodded and shook his head thoughtfully: "It's a pity that there are no stars in the sky. Everything has changed, in a flash! At that time, those ancestors lit a bonfire by the cave and watched the moon rise and the stars shine. Maybe they appreciate the beautiful scenery. "

What are your feelings, associations and thoughts about this material? It is required to choose a good angle, define the concept, clarify the style and draw up a good title; Don't deviate from the content and meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.

Le Hu shan shui

In the past, China people paid attention to Confucianism and Taoism. On the one hand, I am eager to "live high in the temple" and I will enter the stage of saving the people; At the same time, I want to "stay away from the rivers and lakes", find a carefree life and reduce my salary. In this way, there are a few handsome figures beside the green mountains and green waters, and walking around is a happy life.

It can be seen that happy scenery was also a fashion in the past. Good news spreads through mountains and rivers, and mountains and rivers are occupied by people. China's "hermit" added a hazy and noble temperament to the landscape, attracting the attention of ordinary people all the time, and then formed a beautiful landscape culture. People in Chang 'an heard Wang Wei's piano and Zhong Nanshan's whistle, people in Longzhong learned Zhuge Liang's Song of Fu Liang, and people in wuyue saw Wang Xizhi and others repairing things at the foot of Kuaiji Mountain. Not to mention Lushan, Huangshan and osawa! Counting carefully, there are mountains and rivers everywhere, and the culture of mountains and rivers has long been immersed in the blood of China people.

Thousands of years have passed in the blink of an eye. Today, large-scale industrial development makes everything organized and scaled. The neat and magnificent buildings, the new "architecture" across the fields and the joyful landscape are no longer individual actions, but the collective actions of China people. However, people in China have found that more landscapes have disappeared. Therefore, people in China are very helpless and aggrieved. They looked around blankly. There are tall buildings everywhere. Where can they send their feelings to the mountains and rivers? In the evening, the grandparents and grandchildren watched the scenery, and the grandson enthusiastically told his grandfather about the modern beauty: neat buildings, wide and straight roads, colorful lights and the warmth of thousands of lights. Grandpa listened, sighed and deeply recalled the scenery in his memory, but now there is no scenery in his memory and he feels empty.

Looking at this material, I thought about it. Isn't modern landscape a landscape? Su Dongpo has a poem that says, "It is a green hill where bones can be buried, and it hurts people alone in the rain." Might as well change it: "Green hills are all cokes, where will the night rain hurt you?" In this way, the hearts of China people can be greatly relaxed and more casual. It is true that the scenery in my memory disappears day by day, but that is only the scenery in the past. Times are changing, society is changing, and even mountains and rivers are changing. There was no modern landscape before, but we enjoyed natural landscape. Now the development of society provides modern landscape. Why should we cling to the scenery of the past and not appreciate the "scenery" of the present?

Appreciating the ancient landscape and today's landscape is a choice. The scenery is your own, and how you look at it depends on yourself. Whether you are happy or not, the scenery cannot be changed. Now that the old has been introduced, let's change the taste by the way. After all, our ancestors have enjoyed the ancient scenery. What's wrong with trying new scenery now? ,

Analysis and comment

From a historical point of view, it shows that many people in history are "happy mountains and rivers" and enjoy life!

It has become a characteristic of China to deduce "landscape culture" from the case of "happy landscape".

Look at the present, because the society is developing, the past landscapes have disappeared, so grandpa's lament has emerged.

"Isn't modern landscape a landscape?" That's great.

At the end, the theme is highlighted: happy ancient landscapes and happy today's landscapes are all choices.