1, determine the characteristics of the scene: before writing, determine the characteristics of the scene, such as its shape, color, sound, smell and so on. For the description of smell and hearing, we should pay attention to which smells and sounds are unique and can leave a deep impression on readers.
2, with the description of other senses: in addition to smell and hearing, but also with the description of other senses, such as vision, touch and taste. Through various descriptions, readers can feel the characteristics of the landscape more comprehensively.
3. Add emotion and thinking: In the process of description, you can add your own emotion and thinking about the scenery. For example, describe a smell that makes you feel familiar or happy, or a sound that reminds you of an experience or mood.
Share 3 related compositions below.
Tisch
Smell, autumn still hides a delicious smell. Pears are fragrant, apples are sweet, and my feet are often hooked by the fragrance ... Listen, walk into the autumn and walk into this huge concert hall. The tree shook its hands and arms, and the sound of "brush" was the sound of yellow leaves telling others. Crickets flap their wings, and "cricket" is the rhyme to bid farewell to the balcony.
Every leaf, every little flower, every drop of sweat and every grain in full bloom has the sound of autumn. More interestingly, I often fly kites with my friends. One person holds the rope with his hand, and the other person stands in the distance and says "let go". As soon as the thread is tight and loose, the kite flies in the air and gradually rises above the treetops. The matchmaker ran away quickly. Kites fly higher and higher, flying in the air, and we shout happily and run desperately in the fields. Passers-by saw it and said, "Put it so high!" We had a wonderful time and felt extremely happy ... I love this beautiful autumn! I love this happy autumn!
extreme
One sunny morning, there were several white clouds floating in the sky, and suddenly a bird flew over, furry and particularly cute.
In the jungle, there is a green meadow. A little rabbit jumped over, jumped on a small flower, sniffed it, jumped on the grass, sniffed it and ate it with relish.
There is a stream beside the grass. Several small fish are swimming happily in the stream, and small tadpoles are swimming around as if looking for their mother. Not far away are layers of mountains, and next to them are rows of pine trees.
I love this beautiful scenery!
Tisso
In Tianmu Mountain, there are many voices that can't be heard in the city. Because I am on holiday here, I heard these wonderful voices.
Early in the morning, cicadas in the bamboo forest behind the house are called "cicadas" and birds are singing "twittering". Listening to these beautiful voices, I suddenly woke up and got out of bed with a snort. After breakfast, I walked along the mountain road to the river and heard the sound of running water. I seem to feel cool, so I soon went swimming to escape the heat. At night, I stood on the balcony of my home and heard frogs coming from afar, high and low, one after another, which reminded me of the poem "frogs can be heard in the fragrance of rice flowers" Only in Tianmu Mountain, with trees and flowing water, can I hear so many voices in one day. In order to let everyone hear these wonderful voices, we should take good care of the environment and ecology.
Update 1: diagram of question 4.
Update 2: Head and tail of fitness trail
Update 3: 3. A street lamp is installed every 15m on both sides