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Remember one thing. Sixth grade composition
In our daily life, everyone has the experience of writing a composition and is familiar with it. According to the characteristics of writing proposition, composition can be divided into propositional composition and non-propositional composition. How to write a composition to avoid stepping on thunder? The following is one thing I arranged for you: nine sixth-grade compositions. Welcome to read the collection.

Remember one thing: my parents are almost forty. I always smile and seldom quarrel. On this day, they quarreled and nothing could stop them.

Well, my mother and I slept soundly that night. Dad suddenly woke us up and insisted that mom talk to him. Mom was very angry when she saw that Dad had drunk too much. She sat up, opened her eyes wide and said, "The child will go to school tomorrow, while sleeping." Said conveniently pointed to the small bed.

My father is a hothead. After hearing what my mother said, he frowned and scolded her. My mother is a unconvinced person. When she heard her father scold her, she fought back. The more they scold, the more fierce they become. They all said they were right. My advice to the east and the west is useless. Seeing that they were going to fight, my mother pointed her finger at my father's nose and scolded him. Father clenched his fist and looked miserable. I was so anxious that I cried. What should I do? We can't let them fight. I was so anxious that my tears came down and my heart was pounding. I watched my father pick up a chair and hit it on the table. I was so scared that I quickly hid in the outer room. When my mother saw it, she went to bed quickly, too, and was blocked by it for fear of hitting herself. Finally, I had no choice but to call my aunt. Under the mediation of my elder sister-in-law, the storm finally subsided.

I think they are wrong. Husband and wife should live in harmony and not quarrel casually. If one of them backed down, they wouldn't quarrel.

Remember one thing. Everyone has experienced many things, big and small, in his life. Among these events, there are sadness, joy, unforgettable and unforgettable. Of course, I won't be that different person. I still feel sorry for that.

When I woke up that morning, I felt very quiet at home. There was no sound of cooking and no news report from the TV news anchor. So, I went downstairs to check. But the living room, kitchen and dining room are all empty, and there is no sign of mom and dad. In the dining room, all the food is ready, and there is still a note that says, "Mom and Dad have something to do today and will be back very late. This is 300 yuan. Go to a nearby shop for lunch and dinner, take care of your brother and lock the doors and windows. " After reading the note, I went to my brother's room to wake up my sleeping brother and let him have breakfast after grooming.

Today, my parents are not at home. My brother and I went to the living room with breakfast and watched TV programs while eating breakfast. We are very happy. After breakfast, I have nothing to do, so I take out my mobile phone and play online games. It's rare that the time to play mobile phone today is not limited by parents, so I want to have fun. I turned the TV to the cartoon channel and let my brother watch it himself, so I played with my mobile phone. Before that, I listened to my parents and locked the doors and windows to prevent strangers from breaking in.

Playing, suddenly a little greedy, want to eat potato chips, just rummaging in the cupboard for potato chips, how also can't find it. It turns out that the last bag of potato chips has been eaten. So I took my brother downstairs to buy potato chips. I bought several bags of potato chips and prepared to have a big meal. When I got home, I opened the potato chips. Selfish, I don't even want to give my brother a potato chip. My brother said he wanted to eat, so I made an excuse to ask him to pour me a glass of water and hot water before I gave it to him.

Because my brother was greedy and wanted to eat potato chips, he ran to pour me hot water without saying anything. I thought: I want to finish eating quickly and eat potato chips before my brother comes back. So I ate potato chips and forgot to take care of my brother. Suddenly, there was a sound of "Ah" in the kitchen, and only my brother was crying. I followed the sound to the kitchen, only to see my brother sitting on the ground. My brother can't hold the hot kettle steadily because it is too heavy. The hot kettle fell to the ground with my brother, and his feet were burned red. Seeing this scene, I was at a loss. I quickly called my mother and asked her to come back and deal with my brother's wound.

After dialing, my mother asked me to soak my brother's feet in cold water first, and then told me that she 15 minutes later. I asked my brother to soak his feet in cold water and wait for his mother to come back. Soon, my mother came back. My mother asked me to go to the kitchen to get salt, and then brought a medicine box, while my brother had to soak his feet in cold water for about half an hour. Half an hour later, my mother disinfected my brother with salt, and then took the medicine out of the medicine box and applied it to his feet. Later, the mother took her brother to a nearby clinic to prevent the wound from being infected.

Although my mother didn't blame me, I felt very guilty because I was greedy for temporary enjoyment and didn't take good care of my brother. Although my brother's foot has healed now, he still left some inconspicuous scars. Every time I accidentally catch a glimpse of my brother's scar, I regret it. Why should I be so selfish?

Remember one thing: I decided to be a translator since I was a child, and finally realized my wish and realized the feeling of being a translator. It was an unforgettable time!

I remember that day, I was struggling in the sea of Wang Yang by memorizing English words. Suddenly, my father asked me to buy stomach medicine. I was relieved and ran out of the house quickly.

As soon as I entered the drugstore, I couldn't help but get a fright. The Chinese medicine counter is very lively. Outside is a foreigner with blond hair and blue eyes, a beard and a tall nose standing on his chubby face. He gestured while tutoring and talked to the wrinkled doctor inside. The old doctor was shocked by the sweat on his face, but he spread his hands helplessly and kept shaking his head and waving his hand.

Hello! The foreigner motioned to me. I walked up to him with trepidation, and he immediately asked me in English: CanyouspeakEnglish? I blurted out: Yes, I can speak English. Then I felt a little regretful, because I just knew something. Just when I was distracted, the foreigner rushed out a lot of foreign languages in one breath, and I was at a loss. I only heard him say intermittently: the three treasures of Changbai Mountain, I am puzzled. What are the three treasures? Oh, since he wants to buy Chinese medicine, I guess it must be ginseng, velvet antler and elixir. I'll translate it to the doctor right away. When these Chinese medicines were put on the counter, Lao Wei's eyes lit up and he said, Thank you! Thank you!

Then there is bargaining, which is more troublesome. Although the foreigner said a lot, I still don't understand what he said. He was sweating, so was I. I had a brainwave and opened my forefinger. Anyway, it's money. It's easy to handle. Well, the business is finally done.

I was just about to run away when the foreigner grabbed me and said he wanted to buy something. But when I think about the words I have learned, I can't understand what he is saying. At this time, I think I hate books when I use them! The foreigner started sign language again, without regret: I picked up a pen and stuck it on my body. As I remember, it was an acupuncture needle. Damn it, I learned this word! The doctor brought this thing, the foreigner gave me a thumbs-up compliment, and the doctor thanked me again and again.

Bye. I ran out of the shop and took a long breath. Suddenly, I feel very fragile and comfortable!

But when I ran home happily, I remembered that I forgot to buy stomach medicine for my father!

Ah! It seems that we must continue to master knowledge and study hard to realize our dreams.

Remember one thing: My parents are in their forties and always have a smile on their faces. Usually there are few quarrels. Go to your uncle and aunt when you quarrel. One night, they quarreled over watching TV.

It was a Saturday night, and just after we had finished eating, my father, who had been busy for a week, couldn't wait to turn on the TV and watch the Beijing opera program with relish. Because my mother will take the entrance examination, sitting in the back room should pay close attention to reading, reviewing, sorting out and preparing for the exam. Dad was fascinated by the program, turned up the TV and sang a few words along with the program. In this way, my mother can't settle down to study.

So, my mother said to my father in the outhouse, "Keep your voice down. You'd better stop reading. I have to study hard and have an exam in a few days. " Mom said it several times in a row. But dad still didn't act, just like that, maybe he loved watching it too much! But every time I urge my father, I always say, "Go and read your book. I will turn down the sound." But dad didn't turn down the sound.

This time, my mother came to him helplessly and turned off the TV with a click. He was very angry and went back to the back room to read. Dad flew into a rage, cursed and smashed things at the edge of the outhouse. Mom scolded me in the back room. The more they scolded, the more malicious they became and they came together. I was by their side, watching them fight, so I ran to my uncle and aunt in three steps. This matter is settled. Actually, none of them are right. Dad always said, "It's none of my business whether she takes the exam or not." Mom is even more excited: "I think mine, you don't know to turn it down." If mom does well in the exam, everyone will have light on their faces.

Mom and dad should live in harmony, and they can't lose their temper because of a little thing.

I remember one thing: On July 8th, my mother and I went shopping in Fenghua.

First, we came to Xinhua Bookstore. There are all kinds of books in the bookstore, including children's books in pinyin, famous works with profound meanings and interesting encyclopedias ... I like them as soon as I see them, and I really want to buy all the books. We went to the third floor. "wow! A lot of books! " I can't help admiring. I picked a book by Wu Meizhen and read it with relish. I was fascinated at first, but I got a little impatient after reading a few pages. I took a look and my eyes lit up. "Father and son!" "I cried in a low voice. I carefully took out the book, gently opened the first page and began to read it carefully. The contents are really great! Every episode is so funny and humorous, and the fragments exude a sense of humor. The book tells the story between father and son. When I was immersed in the sea of books, I suddenly heard my mother's vague cry, so I went over. It turns out that my mother is going to buy me exercises for the first volume of the fifth grade. We chose two books. After paying the bill, the cashier said that I would go to the side to receive the prize. Hearing this, my heart is full of joy. Although I only took a small bag of eraser, I was still very happy.

Out of the bookstore, it's past ten. It's time for lunch We decided to eat KFC. Because KFC is far away, we have to walk there. On the way, my mother chose a shop and took a fancy to three clothes. Two of them are leisure. My mother changed clothes in the fitting room and felt good about herself, so she bought these two clothes. The other dress was introduced to my mother by the seller. My mother thought it was too ladylike. The seller said, it's not ladylike at all. You should try it! Under the persuasion of the seller and me, my mother was a little moved, but she thought the price was too expensive, so she began to bargain … Finally, the bargain was successful! These three clothes were bought by my mother for 700 yuan!

We came to KFC next to Baika Supermarket, and we were surprised that the store was demolished! Mom asked passers-by, and passers-by said that Yintai Department Store had KFC. We looked up and saw Yintai Department Store opposite! There is a place where three big characters are written, that is, KFC, and we are all surprised. Didn't you just pass Yintai Department Store? Why didn't you see it? We are so stupid!

After lunch, we went to a big market, because a dress we bought in the morning needed shoes, so we planned to buy shoes first. I visited several stores and finally found the right person. The heel of that pair of shoes is like crystal, with beads on it. They are beautiful! My mother liked it at first sight, but the price was too expensive, so she said to go to other stores. We looked at several stores, but there were still no shoes suitable for my mother's skirt. Finally, my mother decided to go to the original store. Mother began to bargain again ... bargaining succeeded! Mom bought this pair of crystal shoes!

Mom's wallet is old, and she is going to buy a new one. We walked into a shop. My mother took a fancy to a wallet, but it was too expensive. My mother didn't buy it.

After buying what we want to buy, we look around and around. We felt that there was nothing to see, so we went to the bookstore to read for a while.

Walk all day! So tired!

Remember one thing: the focus of this exercise is to write a personal experience and make it concrete. This matter must be "personal experience", not hearsay or fabrication. It can happen in the past, in the recent period, or even today. The content of this matter is very wide, which can be something that I feel deeply guilty about, something useful I have done, something new and happy in my daily life, and so on. This can happen anywhere, such as on the road, at school, at home, in the park, etc. The difficulty of this exercise is how to guide students to choose some meaningful little things as writing materials and write them out concretely.

Training objectives:

1. Initially learn to judge questions and be able to write compositions according to the requirements of the questions.

I will write a personal experience and write the story in detail.

3. Feel the meaning and lessons expressed by money.

Teaching time: 2 hours.

The first lesson: guide students to learn the text, guide "examination of questions", and clarify the requirements, scope and content of exercises. Learn "reference fragments" to guide students to choose materials and start writing.

The second class: students' composition, teachers' tour guidance, choosing some composition comments and guidance, and then students revise their compositions and complete the exercises.

Preparation before class:

1. Review the exercise "Remember an unforgettable thing".

2. Each student prepares three personal experiences.

3. Preview "Remember a Personal Experience".

First, introduction.

Students, since you are wise, you might as well have done a lot. For example, go swimming in the swimming pool, catch loach in the country, or pick up shells at the seaside. Today, we are going to write an essay "Remember a Personal Experience". I believe the students can write this composition well.

Second, learn "job requirements".

1. Students read by themselves: What are the requirements for this exercise?

2. The discussion is clear.

Requirements: 1, review the meaning of the question.

2. Write this story in detail.

Third, guide the examination of questions.

1. Select personal experience.

2. How to write personal experience? Let's think about the following questions first.

(1) Show the slides and distinguish the following two topics.

Remember an unforgettable thing

"Remember a personal experience"

Thinking: What are the similarities between * * *? What is the difference?

(* * * Similarity: You remember everything, just write "one thing", not a few things.

Difference: The previous one focused on "unforgettable" and was particularly impressive. Time is generally far away from now, and it is still very clear and memorable. Of course, unforgettable things, generally speaking, have experienced more personally. The focus of the latter topic is "personal experience", and the focus must be "personal experience". For example, a classmate helped a difficult classmate, and his deeds were outstanding and touching. Seeing this, you are deeply moved and will be "unforgettable". But you can't write what you have seen and heard from your own personal experience. )

(2) Slide show and analyze the examples selected by the following four young authors, which are in line with this topic, which are not, and why?

Slide 1: I don't know how to write something my grandmother told him. An uncle sent my grandmother home.

Slide 2: Xiaogang is going to write an example of visiting the traffic police uncle in winter vacation.

Slide 3: Xiaoling is going to cook a table for the guests.

Fourth, learn "exercise tips" and know what you can write about your personal experience.

1, silent reading practice tips, thinking: What kinds of things are listed in the article? Cross it out with a "-".

2. Communication:

First, this may be a good thing.

B, it can also be something you should learn.

C, it can also be new things and fun in daily life.

3. Think again, what kind of content can you write? (brain, sadness, anger, etc. )

4. What are the meaningful things listed in "Sports Tips"? Look at these little meaningful things.

Five, clear requirements, guidance to write specific.

1, repetition exercise requirements. Just now, we discussed the requirement of clarifying the meaning of the question in the exercise, and we chose a personal experience. The second requirement is to write the story in detail.

2. Contact the article "Flying the Luding Bridge" and think about how the article was written.

(first write to grab time, and then write to attack the natural barrier. In the process of writing, the author grasped the language, movements and demeanor of soldiers.

3. Learn the "reference fragment" (see the textbook).

(1) Read the article and think: How many aspects of things are elaborated in this article?

(2) communication.

First, wrote a classmate report to the teacher "squadron leader" to correct the paper; Wrote down his language, "Shout loudly ..."; He wrote his action as "running to the office while shouting".

B, wrote the teacher's actions, demeanor, language, such as "into the classroom", "she said seriously" and so on.

C, wrote my psychological activities. Such as "I am in a state of confusion", "I am anxiously waiting for criticism" and "this look looks like surprise and dissatisfaction" ...

D, I also wrote the students' reaction: "There was a lot of discussion, and everyone looked at me."

(3) read the fragment.

I remember one thing: during the May Day holiday, my parents, uncles and aunts and I went to an entertainment center to carry out fitness activities. In the gym, everyone found their favorite sports and started to work out. Dad and uncle play billiards, mom and aunt play table tennis, and friends swim, play games and surf the Internet.

After swimming, I came to a treadmill painted with black paint. The waiter understood what I meant and turned on the power of the treadmill for me. I took off my shoes and stood on the treadmill. My uncle turned on the start switch for me, and the treadmill slowly turned.

I run slowly with the speed of the treadmill. I just ran for a while, feeling a little tired, breathing a little short, and my feet are weak. It seems that I can't hold on any longer.

I thought to myself: should I keep running? Looking at my uncle and aunt's encouraging eyes and listening to my father's encouraging language, I think this is also an opportunity to exercise my endurance and will. ! So I decided to keep running.

Looking at the constantly beating numbers on the counter, my heart is beating violently and my pace is getting faster. I just feel hot all over, and the sweat on my forehead keeps falling. After running nearly 500 meters, I feel I can't hold on any longer. My father has been cheering for me and told me that persistence is victory. As long as I pass the "limit" of running, it will be much easier to run in the future. I did as my father said, and soon I felt less tired from running. After my unremitting efforts, I defeated myself and finally ran 1 km. I was surprised myself: this is five times the playground of our school. My aunt and uncle and everyone present looked at me with admiration and clapped their hands. My parents hugged me proudly. My heart is as sweet as honey.

After this little thing, I understand a big truth. That is: no matter what difficulties a person encounters, as long as he finishes what he started, don't give up halfway, and make unremitting efforts, he will succeed.

I remember one thing: During the winter vacation, my good friend Qiu Zhiheng invited nine students, including Zhou and Xu, to visit Jinxi Pastoral Island.

As soon as we entered the gate of pastoral island, we were stunned by what we saw. I saw sheep grazing happily in the sheepfold and lambs sucking milk; Fish play freely in the fish pond; The cute little white rabbit is eating leaves in the cage; The dog and the chicken are resting in the tree. This kind of beautiful scenery is invisible in the city, and I think it is a kind of enjoyment.

While walking, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and unconsciously came to the restaurant. When we first arrived at the restaurant, we saw the tempting food prepared on the table, which dazzled us and made our mouths water. Everyone ate with relish.

After lunch, our stomach turned into a big round watermelon. Therefore, Qiu Zhiheng proposed to take us fishing in the fish pond and digest it by the way. At the fish pond, the staff provided each of us with a fishing rod, a bucket of water and a bag of bait for free. We started fishing, and we kept staring at the ball floating on the water. After a while, I suddenly heard someone shout, "I'm hooked!" " Take the bait! "Suddenly, everyone jumped three feet for joy. I saw a lively crucian carp pulled out of the water and put it in the bucket. At this time, I was also excited, sitting still with a fishing rod in my hand, staring at the water to see what happened. I waited patiently for the fish to bite, waiting and waiting. Hard work pays off. The ball on the water moved, so I quickly lifted the fishing rod. Wow! I caught a grass carp weighing two Jin. I yelled, "I caught it. "At this moment, my classmates gathered around me, dancing together, laughing together and sharing joy together.

At sunset, we waved goodbye to the pastoral island. Although the pastoral island is not as lively and prosperous as the city, it has a strong local flavor, quiet and beautiful, and it is an indispensable beautiful scenery for people.

Remember one thing, grade six composition 9, remember the most regrettable thing:

In my life, many things have happened, the most unforgettable thing is one when I was in preschool, and it is also the one I remember most regretfully.

I studied very well in kindergarten. Once, the teacher asked us to do a quiz. Then the teacher said, "students, take out your notebooks and finish the questions." The teacher will grade you. Whoever does well in the exam will be given some small prizes. " Of course, at that time, we were naive, thinking about what the prize would be, maybe it was sugar, maybe it was a notebook, maybe it was a pencil, maybe it was an eraser, maybe it was a beautiful curriculum, maybe it was a ruler without a pattern, ~ ~ ~ We thought about many things that the teacher might hand out, but at this time, time passed, but I copied the questions but didn't finish them, only did 650 questions. With an "X", I only got more than 70 points, but the prize was a small red flower. I really regret that I didn't cherish the exam and let the old man sneak away. At this time, I really dare not think about the consequences of my coming home. My mother may hit me, maybe ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ "Oh, I see". In an instant, I came up with a method that I thought was perfect.

On my way home, I tore the quiz from my notebook. My mother checked my homework as soon as I got home. At this time, my mother found that my notebook was very thin, as if a few pages were missing, so she asked, "Yingying, how many pages are missing from your notebook?" I looked down and dared not speak. My mother knew that something must have happened, so she called her classmates who were going home on speaker. The phone "Didi" rang and my heart was pounding. Suddenly the phone was connected, and my classmate's voice was immature. After my mother asked my classmate what happened, she was very angry and began to hit me. I felt quite wronged at that time, so I tore it up. My mother seemed to read my mind and said, "You learned to lie at such a young age. Did Will Zhang learn well? " You go back to your room to reflect and find out what you have lost. "Hearing this, I regretted it very much, so I admitted my mistake. My mother smiled and praised me as a child who changed well after knowing that I was wrong. At the same time, I also found what I lost, that is honesty.

Later, my mother told me many truths, one of which I will never forget. The truth is this: be honest in everything, and dishonesty will bring disaster and misfortune.