Red hare is a BMW pony brought by Dong Zhuo from Xiliang. In order to win over the young general Lu Bu, Dong Zhuo gave him the horse. Lu Bu killed the original owner Ding Yuan, went to Dong Zhuo's door and became his adopted son.
Later, the horse followed Lu Bu and showed great power. But in the White Gate Tower, because of Liu Bei's words, Cao Cao brutally killed Lu Bu, and the Red Rabbit BMW also went to Cao Cao.
Perhaps by coincidence, Guan Yu temporarily took refuge in Cao Cao to protect Liu Bei's two wives. Cao Cao cherishes Guan Yu very much. I also want to imitate Dong Zhuo's BMW for Heroes. But Guan Yu is not Lu Bu after all. He accepted the red rabbit in order to find Liu Bei faster. Since then, Red Rabbit Horse and Dragon Crescent Moon Knife have become the representative images of Guan Yu.
Guan Yu defeated Maicheng and was killed by Wu Dong. The red hare was returned to Ma Zhong. But this time it no longer obediently followed the new owner, starved to death, and followed the old owner Guan Yu.
However, according to historical records, the red rabbit disappeared after Lu Bu's defeat. Did not become Guan Yu's mount. This can also prove that The Romance of the Three Kingdoms has fictional elements.
Folk and pass, red rabbit passed down from generation to generation. Fang La bought it heavily in the Song Dynasty. When the water margin was conquered, Guan Sheng took it away. Perhaps because of this, Luo Guanzhong was misinformed when collecting information among the people.
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Don't starve that horse. Is it bad to read all the lies? No, there are good and bad lies. Although a good lie is a lie, it can boost one's confidence and make one happy. On the contrary, a bad lie will make people angry or sad. The text "Don't starve that horse" tells the beginning, process and result of a white lie. This article mainly wrote that "I" used to secretly go to the bookstall to read books, because "I" had no money, but the disabled young people who could keep the bookstall never asked me to pay. My father caught me stealing books and slapped me twice, saying that I couldn't read for nothing, and that the bookstall was a disabled young man. Later, "I" read a book with the money I got from pulling horse grass, but it was difficult to find a buyer. The young man who set up the bookstall lied to me that he had horses at home and told him to give him all the horses and grass in the future, but he didn't have any horses at home. After a long time, "I" also knew the truth and was very grateful to him. After reading this article, I remembered one thing I lied about, which is still fresh in my memory: I remember that there was a senior three sister living next door to my house. When the college entrance examination was about to take place, her father was seriously ill and was sent to a distant place for treatment. For this reason, she can't eat or sleep all day, and even has no intention of studying. Because her mother has a telephone conversation with my mother, she comes to ask about her father's illness every night. Once, her mother called to tell us that her father died because of ineffective rescue. I hope we don't tell her, or she will fail in the exam, which is also her father's wish. So, when she came to ask, our family pretended to be very happy and said to her, "Your mother said that your father is much better and told you to study with peace of mind and let your father see your achievements." My sister was very happy and began to study hard and was admitted to her ideal university. At this time, we told her the truth. Although she was sad, she thanked us. I am deeply touched by this matter, and there are many places in the article that make me deeply touched. There are only seven words that moved me in the article: "Sit down and take your time." This short sentence let me know that young people with disabilities are very concerned about their children. He lied to me that he had a horse at home because he didn't want me to waste time looking for a buyer, so that I could read more books while looking for a buyer. What a kind disabled young man! You are our role model! The author also admires us, and his spirit of insisting on reading is very touching. Isn't that what we need in life? Sixth grade: Cang Yue Ice Emperor
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Riding When we were in Beichuan, we stayed at home every day. It is so boring. So, grandpa will take us riding.
Just hearing the news, my brother and I were very excited. Cousin is clamoring to go. Grandpa said, "How can I get there with only one horse?" My brother walked away silently.
Grandpa asked me to sit in the saddle and my brother sat on the horse. I turned around and said proudly, "Don't fall, son." My brother stuck out his tongue at me.
We set out.
Grandpa is leading the horse in front, and my brother and I are sitting on horseback leisurely. Suddenly, there was a shout from behind: "Wait for me." Oh, it's my cousin. He borrowed a horse from his neighbor and caught up with him. He patted the horse's ass and the horse soon caught up with him. Let's go together.
Walking, our horse suddenly cried and ran to one side. The younger brother shouted, "God bless me, I don't want to die yet." I was too scared to speak, and grandpa controlled the horse.
At this moment, menstruation came from the front, and we suddenly realized, alas, the horse was scared to see her coming, and we haven't seen her yet.
We're going home and riding horses. This is really a thrilling and interesting game.
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Nothing can catch up with the clouds. Science and technology have developed rapidly in this era, so everything has become faster, such as communication, and of course there are many, many more. Everyone knows this. But some of them are regressing, just unconsciously.
Otaku and otaku are also a hot spot today. Why do they want to stay at home? Yes, most of them are caused by the "doting" of technology. Food, clothing, housing and transportation, almost all the needs of life can be simply completed at home, just need the Internet and mobile phones. Of course, they won't feel too bored. They can chat with friends online, then go to the farm to steal food and listen to songs at the same time. Then they can visit Taobao and reply, watch videos and play online games. This relaxed and leisurely life is nothing. However, sometimes they feel that something is missing, and their hearts are empty ... life is short, and what they lack is meaning.
This is not only related to these, but also related to human health. Although there are advanced medical equipment and superb treatment methods, some unnecessary diseases can be completely avoided if you are responsible for your own body. Don't say do more exercise. Now some people have to take a bus even a few steps, which is one of the reasons. Others, hiding at home or going to the gym to exercise, are much better than people who don't exercise at all. However, what will happen now is not low carbon. For a better life for mankind, you can take a walk with your family, friends or colleagues (classmates) after dinner, and go to the park for morning running and mountain climbing on weekends, instead of those jobs of "using electrical appliances". In this way, you have made great contributions to society and worked hard for the strategy of "sustainable development". Why not do these things that benefit the people, the country and the society?
"Recently in good health. Sitting for a long time, my legs are weak, and my neck is sore after watching the computer for a long time. The digital age seems to have accelerated the pace of life and slowed people down. " With a few strokes, Vae can describe this social phenomenon incisively and vividly, so vivid, profound and penetrating!
Ma Yun, the founder of Alibaba, Taobao and Alipay, once told us in the program dialogue: "Today is cruel, tomorrow is even more cruel, and the day after tomorrow is beautiful, but most people will die tomorrow night and will not see the sun the day after tomorrow." Body is the capital of revolution and environment is the premise of development, so body and environment are the foundation of a better life. In order to live a better life, let's protect our bodies and the environment first. Then, of course, the day after tomorrow to see the sun, from sunrise to dusk.
In a good mood, go out for a walk, the blue sea and blue sky are blowing the wind; The rivers and mountains are beautiful, so go out more, don't stay at home but be lazy.
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Rainbow pony and my story I wonder if you have seen my pony: friendship is magical. The pony inside has all kinds of advantages. When they find their differences, they will have their own lovely marks. I came to the world of ponies and came to Ma Xiao town to find friendship. Among them, I met many friends: unicorn, the protagonist who loves reading and magic, shines at dusk; Bao Yun Daisy, who is proud of speed; Honest and powerful Apple Jack loves to laugh and sing. A rarity that loves beauty; Fluttershy, who gets along well with small animals, begins a magical story about friendship!
Once I was doing a flight test. Somehow, the plane flew into the clouds by mistake, came to a small town, and then knew nothing. ...
I don't know how long it took. I vaguely opened my eyes and saw some ponies with beautiful manes beside me. Some have horns on their heads, some have wings, some are land horses ... "Hey! Look, the guy lying in bed seems to be awake! " Flying colorful fur, the blue horse said, "whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa." ! You ... you can talk? ""What's the matter? By the way, any horse will. " The white horse said with eye shadow, what's your name and why are you here? "Asked the purple unicorn. So I talked with them for a long time before they understood, and then they asked me my name, and I told them my name was Sonik, and they also told me their names ... "In this case, you can live with us temporarily. "Fluttershy said to me," why don't we go to the princess later and ask her to help us live in a house for Sonik? "In this way, I temporarily stay in Little Horse Town until my plane is repaired. ...
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Ryoma Echizen, my love Ryoma Echizen, I met you for the first time on the day when I was reading a novel. You are portrayed as handsome and arrogant. I was moved by your appearance, heart and personality. I still remember that your favorite drink is Fanta (grape flavor). I still remember that you like playing tennis best, and your tennis skills are unparalleled. Otherwise, how can you be called the prince of tennis, Malone? I described it to my friend and she went home. Tell me you are ugly. I just laughed a few times. No one can understand my heart. Although you are my best friend, you are handsome, even higher than handsome. They don't understand you. I know your love for tennis is unparalleled. Your mouth is hard. When I am shy, I always like to pull down my hat to hide my inner shyness. You always show indifference in front of others. I really like you more and more now As long as there is one word in your name, I will be excited for a long time. I hope you wish me success in this exam. First place, Malone, why are you so handsome? I write novels, all about you. Oh, I want to drink milk, remember? Although you hate drinking, carbonated drinks are not good for your health. Don't drink too much, don't like Ryuzaki Sakuno, like the hostess I wrote, like everyone who loves you, and don't put on a bad face every day. Someone likes you, don't be unhappy. Hey, dragon boy, keep moving!
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The future of horses In ancient times, horses, like cars today, were a means of transportation. Now with the gradual development of science and technology, more advanced means of transportation have been invented, such as boats, cars and planes. It seems that horses are not used as widely as before.
[Comment: In the past, even cars were carriages, and even roads were roads. Now cars have become cars and trains, and roads have become expressways. Is the horse going to be eliminated? ]
In the 22 nd century, the "minister" horse was once again "reused"-although the car runs fast, but now the natural resources are decreasing day by day, people have to use water, electricity and oil very carefully, and everyone has become a "miser" As long as we waste something useful, everyone will keep nagging. Therefore, horses have become a convenient means of transportation-though not very fast.
[Comment: The horse's luck has changed again. It's really thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi. Humans have accidentally "developed" themselves back to the era when horses dominated the means of transportation. ]
Scientists are studying a new technology, which is a liquid medicine that can speed up the running of horses. After drinking, the horse will run as fast as the legendary "Maxima", with a speed of 160km/h and as fast as the cars on the expressway.
[Comment: This potion is really amazing. ]
Soon, this magical potion was successfully developed! A white thoroughbred horse drank this potion-hey, there is no change in appearance? The jockey got on the horse, and when he sat down, the horse galloped eagerly. No one saw how the horse ran, only a white shadow flashed by and then saw the dust raised by the horseshoe-it was a spectacular scene.
[Comment: God! The last three sentences about the galloping speed of horses are really well written and vivid, "white shadow", "flash" and "dust" Good horse! ]
Scientists immediately produced more liquid drugs for horses to take. Slowly, people began to use horses as means of transportation, and cars were eliminated. In order to make this "new car" more comfortable to ride, people have made more improvements to the horse. Now, walking in the street, people sitting in comfortable "horse chairs" can be seen everywhere. They walk very slowly-you don't need to walk too fast, just stroll slowly.
[Comment: Absolutely green traffic! ]
How interesting the future horses are!
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The pony's wish The pony family's running race is over, and Tony the pony won the championship. Pony and his mother are very happy.
Mother said to Tonis, "Baby, you made your mother very happy today. If you have any wish, your mother can help you realize it. "
"Really?" Tonis asked.
"It's true!" Mother patted her chest and said.
Mom, I'm so tired now. Let me have a good sleep first.
"Ok, mom is waiting for you."
In his sleep, the pony dreamed that there was a clock at home. Whenever the hour hand, minute hand and second hand overlap, there will be a cosmic tunnel, which can reach anywhere in the universe. Pony also dreamed that he had a pair of "gravity thighs", which could stand steadily wherever he was. Pony is very happy in his dream.
"Ha!" The pony yawned and woke up. He said to his mother, "Mom, I made these two wishes. I want to have a time summoner and a pair of' gravity thighs' so that I can stand firm anywhere. "
"I thought you wanted delicious or beautiful clothes, but I didn't expect your wish to be really bizarre. Do you really want these two things? " Mom asked.
"Yes, I really want it, and you promised me."
"Well, close your eyes and your dream will come true soon!"
The pony closed his eyes obediently. When he opened his eyes, the "time summoner" and "gravity thigh" he longed for were all realized, but his mother was much older and looked ten years older at once.
The pony cried anxiously. "Mom, mom, what's the matter with you?" "Son," gasped his mother, "a few years ago, a fairy gave me two spells, which can realize two surreal wishes, but every time I realize one wish, I will be aging for five years."
"No, mom, I don't want these. I just want my mother to be healthy, and I hope she will be all right, "said the pony, breaking the time summoner. His tears fell on his mother's face, and her mother changed back to her former appearance. The pony's gravity thigh disappeared. He is still an ordinary pony, but he and his mother are very happy. The mother and son hugged each other with tears in their eyes. ...
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Brave emissary-Feeling after reading Little War Horse; I have finished reading Little War Horse today, and I deeply admire the hero in it. A small war horse is a rabbit with long ears. It tells the story of a rabbit with long ears. After its unremitting efforts, it finally regained its former freedom! The whole story goes like this:
That little war horse once lived on the grassland. Many animals want to eat it, but every time they are escaped by the little war horse. But once a young war horse was captured and brought to the city, and many Lopunny were also captured and brought to the city. They were kept in a pen. People kept dogs in the pen, put a shelter in the pen, and let 500 rabbits be chased by dogs in the pen. Among them, 400 rabbits were chased to death by dogs. It is also said that only by letting the rabbit get 13 stars, that is, winning 13 games, can the rabbit be set free and released into nature. The little steed won 13 games and regained his freedom. Finally, the little steed was respected by others. It also saved the whole rabbit family and allowed their offspring to survive.
This perseverance is really admirable, and people have to admire this long-eared hare-the little war horse.
So the little war horse is so persistent that he never gives up for his dream. Then we shouldn't stop until we realize our dreams like little war horses!
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The story of a swift horse and a pony chasing the wind on the vast grassland, a swift horse and a pony are chasing the wind …
Suddenly, Maxima felt a sharp pain in her hind hoof and fell to the ground. When he looked carefully, it turned out that there was a thorn in his hind hoof and he could not compete. At this time, Zhuifeng didn't laugh at Maxima, but went to help Maxima find a sheep doctor. When they came to the sheep doctor, the sheep doctor told them that there was a thorn in it that had to be pulled out. Chasing the wind requires a swift horse to pull out the thorns, and a swift horse must also pull out the thorns. Dr. Yang struggled to pull out this stinger that made Maxima miserable. After the stinger was pulled out, Maxima rested on the grassland for a while, and then its hind hoof slowly got better. Maxima thanked Zhuifengju for not only not laughing at himself at that time, but also helping him see a doctor. At this time, Maxima was full of gratitude for chasing the wind. The pony chasing the wind also likes to race and run with swift horses. From then on, Maxima and Zhuifeng became inseparable friends.
On the beautiful prairie, there are swift horses and horses chasing the wind.
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