1 Our school
Liu, Class 4 (2), wenshan city No.1 Primary School.
(original)
From ignorance to knowledge, everyone goes through one place, and that is school. I am no exception. At school, there are tall and straight trees, green lawns and scattered wild flowers. Then I will take you to see the beautiful scenery of the school.
Every time I walk into the school gate with my schoolbag on my back, there is a wide playground, with toilets, garbage dumps and sports equipment on the right. On the left is the Li Ming building, followed by the branch building, and in front is the flag-raising platform. There is a tall banyan tree under Li Ming Building.
That banyan tree has lived in our school for several years. According to the teacher, 1989 exists. It withered a few days ago, and now it is brand-new. The branches are all green leaves, and some are still buds! The thick trunk is the body of a soldier. The students are tired of playing, so they enjoy the cool under the green trees. Ah, banyan tree, you silently contributed to us. We want to pay tribute to you, learn from you and learn from your selfless dedication.
This is our beautiful school, where we study safely and live happily ... Ah, beautiful school, you have given us a happy life, and you are the most sacred in my heart.
Our school
Liu, Class 4 (2), wenshan city No.1 Primary School.
(Revised draft)
From ignorance to knowledge, everyone has to go through one place, that is, school, and I am no exception. In school, there are tall and straight trees, green lawns and scattered wild flowers. Then let me show you the beautiful scenery of the school.
Whenever I walk into the school gate with my schoolbag on my back and go forward, there is a wide playground with toilets, garbage dumps and sports equipment on the right. On the left is the Li Ming building, followed by the branch building, and in front is the flag-raising platform. There is a tall banyan tree under Li Ming Building. That banyan tree has lived in our school for several years. According to the teacher, 1989 exists. The leaves were dead a few days ago, but now they are brand-new. The branches are all green leaves, and some are still buds! The thick trunk is like a soldier's body. The students are tired of playing, so they enjoy the cool under the green trees. Ah! Little Ye Rong, you have made a silent contribution to us. We want to pay tribute to you, learn from you and learn from your selfless dedication.
This is our beautiful school, where we study safely and live happily … Ah! Beautiful school, you gave us a happy life, you are the most sacred in my heart.
Comments: This paper introduces the characteristics of our school by the majority of students, focusing on the application of banyan in school. It's not bad that the article uses metaphor rhetoric to describe it. I hope to continue to refuel!
2 Our campus
Long, Grade 4, wenshan city No.1 Primary School.
(original)
Everyone has his own place to study, that is, campus, with happiness, sadness and happiness. There are many plants in our campus, such as evergreen trees and cypress trees ... let me introduce our beautiful campus!
As soon as we entered a small door, there were two buildings on the right, one was the branch building and the other was the Li Ming building. On its left is a railing, where we can play. There is an evergreen tree, and there is also an evergreen tree under Li Ming Building. The trees on both sides of the podium are two big banyan trees. There is a table with five or six chairs under the big banyan tree. As soon as school is over, we do our homework, and it feels great there!
But what I like best is the evergreen tree under Li Ming Building. It is older than us. It has lived there for 20 years, which means it is 20 years old. As soon as we got to physical education class, we ran under the evergreen tree to avoid the cold. As soon as we got there, we felt very cool! I think it's cool under this evergreen tree, because there aren't so many leaves under those evergreen trees, and this tree is very honey all year round! So I like this evergreen tree!
This is our beautiful campus, where we can walk on the ladder of progress, where we can make many friends, where our laughter can rush out of our throats! I love you, campus!
Our campus
Long, Grade 4, wenshan city No.1 Primary School.
(Revised draft)
Everyone has his own place to study, that is, campus, with happiness, sadness and happiness. There are many plants in our campus, such as evergreen trees and cypress trees ... let me introduce our beautiful campus!
As soon as we entered a small door, there were two buildings on the right, one was the branch building and the other was the Li Ming building. On its left is a railing, where we can play. There is an evergreen tree, and there is also an evergreen tree under Li Ming Building. The trees on both sides of the podium are two big banyan trees. There is a table and five or six chairs under the big banyan tree. As soon as school is over, we will do our homework. It feels great to do our homework there!
But what I like best is the evergreen tree under Li Ming Building. It is older than us. It has lived there for 20 years, which means it is 20 years old. As soon as we got to physical education class, we ran under the evergreen tree to avoid the cold. As soon as we got there, we felt very cool! I think it's cool under this evergreen tree, because there aren't so many leaves under those evergreen trees, and this tree is very honey all year round! So I like this evergreen tree!
This is our beautiful campus, where we can climb the ladder of progress; Here, we can make many friends; Here, we can make our laughter rush out of our throats! I love you, campus!
Comments: Yan Rong's articles are rich in content, fluent in sentences and well described. This paper describes the landscape layout of the school, and also describes the characteristics of evergreen that I like and some benefits that I bring to myself. That's good. I hope to continue to refuel!
3 My campus
Wenshan Zhou Experimental Primary School San (7) Ban Wang
(original)
The place where everyone must go when they are born is the campus, which determines everyone's future. I am no exception. I also have a campus that decides my fate. In Shixiao, there is a tall grapefruit tree, a whole row of tall cypress trees, and a green meadow. Today, I introduce the whole campus to you.
Whenever I walk into the campus, I see the spirit of the school. I heard that the ball is connected with the soul of the school. There are two boxwood trees beside it. Boxwood is like two soldiers, guarding the school soul. Next to Buxus microphylla is a vast playground. There is a row of banyan trees opposite the huge playground. This row of Ficus microcarpa is like soldiers in chess, standing neatly. In the most inconspicuous place, there is a osmanthus tree that I admire most. It is persevering. I was just a little bud when I first entered school. But in the second grade, it grew to 5 cm, and the leaves were yellow. I'm worried. After two weeks, its leaves grew a lot. In the third grade, it became a small tree. This tree has a stronger will than all trees.
This is a beautiful campus. Here gave me the wisdom of my teacher, here gave me countless memories, here gave me the future. Ah! How much fun the school has given me!
my campus
Wenshan Zhou Experimental Primary School San (7) Ban Wang
(Revised draft)
The place where everyone must go when they are born is the campus, which determines everyone's future. I am no exception. I also have a campus that decides my fate, which is the state experimental primary school. There, there is a tall grapefruit tree, a whole row of tall cypress trees and a green meadow. Today, I introduce the whole campus to you.
Whenever I walk into the campus, I see the spirit of the school. I heard that the ball is connected with the soul of the school. There are two boxwood trees beside it. Boxwood seems to be two soldiers guarding the school soul. Next to Buxus microphylla is a vast playground. There is a row of banyan trees opposite the huge playground. This row of Ficus microcarpa is like soldiers in chess, standing neatly. In the most inconspicuous place, there is a osmanthus tree that I admire most. It is persevering. I was just a little bud when I first entered school. But in the second grade, it grew to 5 cm, and the leaves were yellow. I'm worried. After two weeks, its leaves grew a lot. In the third grade, it became a small tree. This tree has a stronger will than all trees.
This is a beautiful campus. Here gave me the wisdom of my teacher, here gave me countless memories, here gave me the future. Ah! How much fun the school has given me!
Comments: This article by Yi Jian describes the school scenery through personification and metaphor, and also describes the image and characteristics of his favorite osmanthus tree, which is not bad. I hope to continue to refuel!
4 My campus
Class 4 of wenshan city No.1 Primary School (1)
(original)
Everyone will go through a place in the course of life, and that place is our campus. There are two tall evergreen trees in our campus. There is a flat playground. There is a rectangular flag-raising platform. Today I will tell you about our beautiful campus.
When you walk into our campus, you can't help walking towards the first big banyan tree. Next to the big banyan tree is fitness equipment, and next to the poplar in the orchid. In front is the flag-raising platform. Every Monday, we put on our school uniforms and stand below to raise the flag.
My favorite tree on campus is evergreen, because it brings us light in every hot summer and coolness in winter. Don't we learn this spirit?
This is the campus where we study. I will learn a lot here, I have made many friends here, and I know the truth of being a man here. Ah! Beautiful little guy, I love you.
my campus
Class 4 of wenshan city No.1 Primary School (1)
(Revised draft)
Everyone will go through a place in the course of life, and that place is our campus. There are two tall evergreen trees, a flat playground and a rectangular flag-raising platform in our campus. Today I will tell you something about our beautiful campus.
Walking into our campus, you can't help walking under the first big banyan tree to enjoy the cool. Next to the big banyan tree are fitness equipment and rows of big poplars in the orchid, standing hand in hand. In front is the flag-raising platform. Every Monday, we will put on our school uniforms and stand below to raise the flag.
My favorite tree on campus is evergreen, because it shields us from the sun in hot summer and winds us in winter. Isn't this spirit worth learning?
This is our campus. The books are loud and clear. I learned a lot of knowledge here, made many friends here, and learned the truth of being a man here. Ah! Beautiful campus. I love you.
Comments: Ding Yi's article has made great progress. She can write about some characteristics of the campus, describe the scenery of the campus, and also write about her favorite plants. Not bad. I hope to continue to refuel!
My school
Wenshan Zhou Experimental Primary School Class 4 (2) Ceng Zhe
(original)
Everyone leaves one place from ignorance to knowledge, and that is school. I study in a harmonious and civilized experimental primary school. In school, there are straight pine trees, winding pomelo trees and evergreen trees. Today, I will take you to see the beautiful scenery of the school.
As soon as you enter the school gate, you can see two rows of boxwood leaves trimmed like caterpillars by the gardener. Looking around, behind them are "holding up the future" and a magnificent sea of clouds. Two pine trees on both sides of Haiyun Mansion guard Haiyun Mansion like two soldiers, as if to say, "You want to grow taller and taller like us, but you are more and more knowledgeable. Every day, there are wide playgrounds on both sides of Haiyun Building. Everyone likes to play basketball or football there. At school, my favorite is the winding grapefruit tree: the grapefruit leaves are dense in spring, pale yellow and green in summer, golden butterflies in autumn, flying in the air, and all the leaves wither in winter.
This is my school. Here, I left childhood memories, here, I left a string of growing footprints, here, I left a sweet smile. Ah! Experimental primary school, you are the cradle of my growth.
My school
Wenshan Zhou Experimental Primary School Class 4 (2) Ceng Zhe
(Revised draft)
From ignorance to knowledge, everyone can't leave one place, and that is school. I study in a harmonious and civilized experimental primary school. In school, there are straight pine trees, winding pomelo trees and evergreen trees. Today, I will take you to see the beautiful scenery of the school.
As soon as you enter the school gate, you can see two rows of boxwood leaves trimmed like caterpillars by the gardener. Looking around, behind them are "holding up the future" and a magnificent sea of clouds. The two pine trees on both sides of Haiyun Building guard Haiyun Building like two soldiers, as if to say, "You should grow taller and taller like us, have more and more profound knowledge and make progress every day." There are wide playgrounds on the left and right sides of Haiyun Building, where everyone likes to play basketball or football. At school, my favorite is the winding grapefruit tree, with dense leaves in spring and light yellow and green leaves in summer. In autumn, the leaves turn into golden butterflies, flying in the air, and all the leaves wither in winter.
This is my school. Here, I left childhood memories, here, I left a string of growing footprints, here, I left a sweet smile. Ah! Experimental primary school, you are the cradle of my growth.