I opened my eyes and saw my mother dressing my father. Neither of them said anything, but silently put on the newly washed clothes, buttoned them one by one, and then gently pulled them down.
This is what my father said last night. In order to earn more money for my sister and me to study during the Chinese New Year, I will go to town this morning to catch a train to go to work in Beijing. Really, so are the children from poor families. Dad can't spend the next year at home to make money.
It is said that reading is for myself, but I always feel that I don't understand that reading is for myself, but I really feel that I am sorry for my parents because I don't study hard. How hard the two of them work, aren't they all for my sister and me? You can't even spend the New Year at home! When I was in a trance, my father mentioned the stuffed big bag and said softly, "Goodbye, the child is yours!" " "Mom just whispered" grace "as a promise.
At this time, I saw him put down his schoolbag again and wanted to hug his mother for a kiss, but her mother pushed her father away and whispered, "Son, don't be a loser!" " "Dad never said anything, turned around and picked up the bag and strode out of the door. Then I remembered that I had to say goodbye to my father. I immediately got up and shouted, "Goodbye, Dad!" " "Mother also lowered her voice and shouted," Goodbye! Be careful on the road! " At night, my father flashed and disappeared into the darkness.
I looked down at my sister who was still sleeping. I don't know whose rooster started crowing: "Brother _ _ _ _ _ _".
2. One of the composition counseling series of action description in senior high school entrance examination composition: the teaching purpose of action description: 1. Through learning, students can understand the function of action detail description.
2, master the basic methods of action detail description. 3. Be able to use action details to describe and portray characters.
Teaching process: 1. Introduction: Action description is to describe the behavior and actions of characters. We often say: "Action originates from thought", that is to say, the actions of characters should conform to their ideological quality. Everyone has different personalities, feelings and inner world.
Russian writer? Tolstoy said: "When describing a character, you try your best to find actions that can represent his inner state." "Sometimes, just one such action is enough to describe the characteristics of that character." In order to write the characters vividly and express the central idea of the article, it is necessary to choose specific actions that are representative of the characters to describe them.
The description of characters' movements with typical significance can make the characters more vivid. When describing a character's actions, we should not only write what he is doing, but also describe how he does it.
Through the action description of the characters, the character characteristics and mental outlook of the characters are expressed.
Second, the role (a) reflects the psychology of the characters. He thought about it, dipped it in ink and wrote down the address:' Country Grandpa'. Then he scratched his head, thought for a while, and added a few words.
A series of actions here, such as thinking, dipping, writing, grasping and adding, vividly depict Fanka's complex psychology of longing for grandpa to receive a letter and save him from the fire pit. (2) The role of portraying characters.
(Laughter is the same. Introverts may blush and bow their heads shyly, while extroverts may laugh naturally and generously; Simple people laugh, cunning people hide. It is "revealing temperament in words and deeds." )
Dad was so angry that he dragged me out of bed that my tears came out. Dad looked left and right, so he grabbed the feather duster from the table and held it backwards. With a wave of his cane in the air, he howled, and I was beaten! Dad beat me from the head of the bed to the corner of the bed, from bed to bed, and the sound of rain outside mixed with my crying.
I walked out of the classroom and stood in front of my father. Dad didn't say anything. He opened his bag and took out my floral jacket.
He handed it to me, watched me put it on and took out two copper coins for me. The typical action of a typical character is not only reflected in what he did, but more importantly, in what way he did it, which is an important stroke to show the character.
For example, as a murderer, Li Kui jy only knows how to wave an axe and cut it off one by one, regardless of other things. This chopping and killing behavior is a typical feature of jy in Li Kui. However, before Song Wu killed Pan Jinlian and Ximen Qing, there were careful arrangements such as "thanking the neighbors for wine". After the "blood spilled on the Yuanyang Building", eight big characters were written on the white wall: "The murderer killed the tiger Song Wu."
This way of killing can be said to be well thought out, and it is a typical Song Wu style of killing. In order to make the characters' actions typical, the author must refine the plot. The author of "Water Margin" asked Song Wu to deliberately let him throw away his weapon when he killed Tiger and Ximen Qing twice.
When fighting tigers, the sentry in Song Wu's hand was hit by a tree and broken into two pieces; When killing Ximen Qing, Song Wu's knife was kicked off by Ximen Qing. This killing scene is much more thrilling than killing a tiger with a few sticks and stabbing Ximen Qing with a knife, which can highlight the extraordinary courage and divine power of Song Wu and is more typical.
-Dad's flowers have also dropped. (3) Express the emotions of the characters and reveal the role of the theme of the article. He turned to the blackboard, picked up a piece of chalk, and with all his strength, wrote two big words: "Long live France!" " "Then he just stayed there, leaned his head against the wall, said nothing, just made a gesture to us ..." Stay and Pour wrote that Mr. Hamel was extremely sad and painful, unable to control himself, and even lost the power to speak.
However, these actions are always fixed in people's minds, showing Mr. Hamel's deep love for the motherland, his strong desire to recover the country at an early date and his belief in the victory of the motherland, which has played a role in sublimating the theme. Third, the method method 1: Please see the following two clips (both of which are the action descriptions of how a character attends class): The original words: "Wang Min is very serious and attentive in every class.
She never plays tricks or talks to her classmates. She remembers everything the teacher says. In class, Wang Min always listens carefully.
Facing the blackboard, she stood upright, her feet pedaled at 90 degrees, her eyes staring at the teacher and the blackboard roundly, sometimes blinking thoughtfully, and sometimes nodding while listening. "These two paragraphs, the first paragraph, Wang Min's behavior of how to listen carefully is not specific, so readers can't see how serious Wang Min is.
Secondly, it shows how Wang Min sits, how to let go and how to look at his eyes when listening to the class, thus vividly describing the way Wang Min listens carefully, which is very concrete and true. Only by carefully and vividly writing the actions of the characters can the ideological character of the characters be reflected.
Method 2: Action description should carefully decompose the traditional martial arts action or TV lens, and often divide an action into several parts, a big action into several small moves, and then show or describe each part and small move according to a certain level to make the whole action vivid. Example 1: "Catching Birds in the Snow" in From the Herbarium to the Moon in Santan: "① Sweep away a piece of snow, ② Expose the ground, use a short stick ③ to support a big bamboo curtain, sprinkle some chaff at the bottom ④, tie a long rope on the stick ⑥, and people will take ⑥ the birds from a distance to peck, and when they reach the bottom of the bamboo curtain, they will pull the rope ⑥.
The verbs such as "sweep", "dew", "support", "scatter", "tie", "pull" and "cover" here break down the bird-catching actions one by one, which is vivid and makes us understand the process or method of bird-catching at a glance. Ex. 2: Wearing a small black hat, a big black jacket and a dark blue cotton robe, he hobbled to the railway and leaned down slowly. It's not difficult.
But it is not easy for him to cross the railway and climb the platform over there. He climbed up with his hands (5) and contracted his feet (6) upward; His fat body leans slightly to the left, trying to find it, and then I see his back, I.
3. Character action description composition 400 words in the morning
Early in the morning, before dawn, I was awakened by my father's cough.
I opened my eyes and saw my mother dressing my father. Neither of them spoke, but silently put on the newly washed clothes, buttoned them one by one, and then gently pulled them down. This is what my father said last night. In order to earn more money for my sister and me to study during the Chinese New Year, I will go to town this morning to catch a train to go to work in Beijing. Really, so are the children from poor families. Dad can't spend the next year at home to make money. It is said that reading is for myself, but I always feel that I don't understand that reading is for myself, but I really feel that I am sorry for my parents because I don't study hard. How hard the two of them work, aren't they all for my sister and me? You can't even spend the New Year at home!
When I was in a trance, my father mentioned the stuffed big bag and said softly, "Goodbye, the child is yours!" " "Mom just whispered" grace "as a promise. At this time, I saw him put down his schoolbag again and wanted to hug his mother for a kiss, but her mother pushed her father away and whispered, "Son, don't be a loser!" " "Dad never said anything, turned around and picked up his bag and strode out of the door. Then I remembered that I had to say goodbye to my father. I immediately got up and shouted, "Bye, Dad!" "Baidu map
4. About junior high school students' reading, the narrative composition describing the details of action is 400 words, not the details of love.
Scene 1: When my mother came with a pole, my daughter took two buckets of water from the well.
Daughter (puzzled): Mom, didn't you say you would carry it with a stick? How do you hold the pole?
Mother: I'll get it back.
Daughter (walks up to her mother and grabs the pole): How much are those two buckets of water? Are you tired?
Mother (smiling): Nothing, I can provoke.
Daughter (carrying a pole): I'll go back and get a stick. Please wait here first.
Mother: Do you think this child is in trouble ... (My daughter brought a stick and gave it to her mother when she was carrying water. )
Mother: Please raise the stick to your side. My side is too long.
Daughter: Never mind, I can lift it. Mother saw her daughter motionless, so she pulled the bucket to her side.
Daughter (a little unhappy): Mom, are you tired after a day's work?
Mom (smiling): I'm used to it, not tired!
Mother (asked with concern): Are you tired? Why don't you have a rest?
Daughter: Mom, I'm not tired. Are you tired?
Mother: I'm not tired.
Daughter: Then let's hurry! My father and my brother are still starving!
Mother: Then hurry up. You can cook later, and I'll get a bucket of water.
Daughter: Really, I'll get the water. You have a rest first.
Act II (While eating, my brother is serving the first bowl of rice. )
Brother: (hands the first bowl of rice to Dad) Those who work eat first!
Dad: (laughs) Don't eat if you don't cook?
Daughter: (adding a piece of meat to mother) Mom, why don't you eat meat? Eat more. You have lost weight this year.
Mom (laughing): I don't like meat. It's too greasy. Look, your brother is as thin as a monkey. Only when you eat well can you have the strength to study.
Brother (looking at Dad): Dad, work is the most important thing, and Dad makes up for it.
Dad (seeing his daughter): Lei Lei is about to take the senior high school entrance examination, and his study task is the heaviest. He doesn't usually eat well. I'll make it up for you and get a good grade in the exam. (He puts it in his daughter's bowl)
Daughter (blocking dad's meat): Dad, you'd better eat! Too greasy food will cause acne.
Dad (laughs): You really brag. Is this a piece of lean meat?
Daughter: I don't eat lean meat either.
It was a hot Saturday in summer, and my father and I went hiking in Baiyun Mountain. This mountaineering is an activity organized by dad's company. Dad's company often organizes such activities to let employees strengthen physical exercise and relax their work pressure.
Speaking of Baiyun Mountain, it is known as the famous mountain in South Guangdong, and it has been called "the first show in Yangcheng" since ancient times. It is located in the northern suburb of Guangzhou, with a total area of 20. 98 square kilometers, the main peak "Moxingling" is 382 meters above sea level. It overlooks the whole city of Guangzhou and the Pearl River in the distance. Whenever it rains or in late spring, the mountains are covered with white clouds, which is a spectacle, hence the name. Baiyun Mountain has long been famous in the world. Celebrities came and went during the Warring States and the scenery was pleasant during the Jin Dynasty, so the Tang Dynasty was famous for its resorts. Baiyun Mountain has occupied many places in the "Eight Scenes of Yangcheng" since the Song Dynasty. Citizens always like to hike here, especially on holidays, and take climbing Baiyun Mountain as a pleasure. At this time, the bustling scene of supporting the elderly and loving the young constitutes a unique picture of Yangcheng.
Mountaineering can exercise the body, exercise the will, absorb the fresh air of nature in the countryside, and adjust the body and life. Now is the information age, with advanced technology, many things can be done without going out. People stay at home all day, work in the company, seldom exercise, and get sick easily. Since the outbreak of SARS virus, it is particularly important to strengthen physical exercise, improve personal physique and ensure the quality of work and study.
Two days after Typhoon Ibudu, the temperature in Guangzhou dropped after the storm, but it was still sultry, and dark clouds appeared again and again from time to time. Early in the morning, I prepared an umbrella and drinking water, put them in my backpack, got on my dad's car, and we set off. The car stopped at the foot of the mountain. Dad said that because of the fear of rain, this time we chose a relatively flat, easy-to-walk, but far-away road to climb the mountain, but in order to achieve the purpose of exercising, we decided to board the destination at one breath. After entering the mountain gate, we walked all the way up. In less than 10 minutes, I was already sweating. The summer sunshine seems to be trying to pull out the swaying green trees and pass them on to my face, which is burning. We walked and enjoyed the scenery on both sides. People are bustling on the road, probably because there is a holiday on Saturday. It seems that everyone has a sense of strengthening fitness. There are many famous natural attractions on Baiyun Mountain. We have been climbing along the mountain road. The mountain road is lined with tall green trees. There is a rest point every other road, and there are stone benches and trees everywhere. Looking down, the spring water in the mountain is flowing out, which is really comfortable. Oh, it used to be called Pugu. There are unknown flowers everywhere, and the insects around are busy collecting nectar. It's really a vibrant scene. At this time, we went to the grassy lawn again, just like a huge green carpet, where the grass was everywhere. A breeze blew in the mountains, and the grass and small wild chrysanthemums shook their bodies as if calling to us. The wind took away the heat wave under the scorching sun, leaving a fresh, really refreshing. In 28 minutes, we arrived at Nengren Temple Scenic Area. My father told me that we were halfway to the destination of Peak Park, and there was a steep slope ahead. He asked with concern, "Are you tired?" Do you need a rest? "I'm thinking," we must work hard to reach our destination, so as to achieve the purpose of exercise, and we must not be discouraged. "I took two sips of water from my backpack and handed it to my dad. I replied, "Let's go on! "Dad looked at me and seemed to say," Well done! " Looking at the green grass and green hills, and the city that is constantly far away from us, we continued to move forward, turning from the avenue to the stone mountain road, and came to a scenic spot called "Tiger Hill". It's so hot, my father asked me if I want to eat an ice cream to cool down. I quickly agreed. We ate My Sweetie's ice cream and climbed the mountain. Going hiking is really interesting. On the way, we kept passing my father's colleagues when my father's cell phone rang. Oh, it was a colleague of my father who sent an interesting short message in the distance: "You are eating ice cream with sunglasses, and your son is behind you". We couldn't help laughing after reading it. Walking, I feel my legs are heavy and my clothes are soaked with sweat. Dad also said that he was a little breathless. I watched my dad still firmly ahead, and I kept encouraging myself in my heart. "Persistence is victory!" . At 40 o'clock, we arrived at the destination "Peak Park", watching the sweat flowing down from our foreheads, but we couldn't hide the smile on our faces from the joy of victory. We stood at the top of the mountain, overlooking Guangzhou, where there are many tall buildings at the foot of the mountain, shouting "Hi! How are you? " With the melodious music in the park, the sound echoed in Shan Ye, forming a picturesque scenery. The beautiful scenery of Baiyun Mountain intoxicated me and made me linger.
6. She will treat her mother warmly in a 400-word composition describing what her mother did in the second day of junior high school. She often wears colorful clothes, so don't be naughty at school.
Mom, mom, I'm 1 1 years old. My mom has a bad habit of speaking without losing face to others. I remember one time, mom, mom, with round eyes, I failed in the math exam? Mom, the advantage of mom is that she is very thoughtful and cares about me! My mother is very enthusiastic. My mother's personality is very different from others, with long hair. I am proud to have such a mother! My mother is honest. Maybe some people have the same personal experience as me and have nothing to do with our elders. She gets up early every day, often with a smile on her mouth and a flat nose. Do you know how much damage this has done to our door? My mother was very angry and how tired she was, but my mother was really good to me and my father and gave me a warm home! Mom still loves to nag! My mother is very cheerful, saying that my mother is not only enthusiastic, but also always has to say one thing several times, which looks very gentle. Instead of hitting me, she sarcastically called me a big fool! In a word, a thousand words are summed up in five words, which makes my friends have no pressure and constraints at all. I am very jealous. Do you need to tell me about these things? Prepare powder for dad. My mother is busy from morning till night. She taught me how to make bread as soon as she got up, and my good friend ran to our house as soon as she was free! Thank you for loving me so much. Every time I bring my classmates home, my mother's only shortcoming is that she is nagging. In the morning, my mother always tells me to walk slowly and drive carefully. Mom, the classmates all say that mom is good, her ears are almost cocoon, and the food is especially delicious. She often teaches me to be an honest child, but she is happier. She can be regarded as a good mother and a complete friend. She also knitted me some pieces.
I just opened the textbook and suddenly saw a picture under the glass plate.
"Deer, my favorite sika deer, draw it." I thought to myself, open the painting, pick up the brush, divide three times five by two and tick off a deer.
However, because I didn't observe it carefully, I painted the deer head as a child's head. How much is not beautiful! Erase the repaint, but it's drawn to the right again.
I had to draw another duck swimming in the river on the left side of the paper and "twist" the deer's head to make it look at the duck. I've finished painting. It's really good.
In the fifth grade, I joined a calligraphy interest group. Under the guidance of my tutor, I picked up a brush dipped in black juice for the first time. According to the instructor's instructions: the index finger and middle finger are stuck outside the pen container, and the ring finger and little finger are stuck inside the pen container.
I write carefully one by one. A point, a horizontal, a vertical, a si.
But it's outrageous. It was clearly painted by a three-year-old child. A little, it is a thick ink group; A horizontal, winding like a small snake; A vertical one, but as thick as an elephant's legs and feet in art; A slap is even more outrageous, like a bald broom that has long been scrapped.
I looked at my masterpiece and smiled. These strokes are uneven and asymmetrical, not to mention the shelf structure.
But the tutor said, "well written!" It seems that you have a bright future. If you practice hard, you will succeed in the future. " 3. I saw a male classmate come up to the stage, quietly spread out a roll of white paper, raised a brush full of thick ink, meditated a little, and painted while flying like a phoenix.
With the constant bleeding of the brush, a lifelike horse appeared on the drawing paper. It holds its head high and goes forward bravely, showing an irresistible force.
4. Disgusting "smelly elder sister", so nobody cares, do you want to ruin my experiment? I gave my finger a heavy flick. Who knows it didn't bounce off, but it angered this "smelly elder sister". It immediately gave off an unpleasant smell and made me run back to the house, covering my nose.
The room is quiet, only the TV is ringing. Dad suddenly grabbed the corner of the table with a wave of his hand.
1 of "beep", slapped on the table, bowls, plates and chopsticks all jumped up, and the glass at the corner of the table fell to the ground and broke. 6. Holding a small hazelnut in one hand and a heavy pair of pliers in the other, look directly at the hazelnut.
The pliers drop slowly, but they often hit one side. After a while, their hands were smashed several times. There was a painful expression on her face.
7. xu teacher teaches us Chinese. She holds chalk in her dexterous hands every day and writes carefully on the blackboard. We can't help imitating her handwriting in our notebooks.
After Haitao found the sparrow's nest, he put a flashlight in his waist, spat on his hand and climbed up. Before climbing to the sparrow's nest, he lowered his head and said to us, "Hey, look carefully and get ready to catch sparrows!" " "Say that finish, he stood on another branch and straightened up.
Unexpectedly, the sparrow's head hit the sparrow's nest and got a fright. There was a creeping sound from the nest, and then several sparrows rushed out desperately. Haitao was in a hurry and reached for one.
He took a photo of the nest with his flashlight, and there was only one left, which may not be crowded out, chirping. Haitao reached out and grabbed another one. He put it in a plastic bag and threw it in front of Xiao Pang. Xiao Pang happily picked it up, took the sparrow out of the bag and watched it flapping its wings. He cried happily, "That's funny, that's funny …" 9. I held my breath, bent my hands into an arc, approached slowly, and then swooped forward.
Haha, look where you are going! Tingting also squatted down to watch. I slowly let go of my hand, alas, I only have grass where grasshoppers lie.
"What's the matter? I clearly see this lying here. " Cousin said, "The grasshopper jumped out and you didn't notice. No, it is right there. "
I looked in the direction of my cousin's finger and the grasshopper was there. I ran another button, hey, I ran away again.
I looked at the grass around me. Ah, it was hidden under my feet. I stared at it, squatted down gently, and suddenly my hands were buckled at a height of about 10 cm from the grasshopper. "I know, I know!" I am so happy that my cousin dances around me excitedly.
10, obviously humming, walking in the field. Suddenly, there was a cry of "goo goo".
Looking down the sound, I saw a little cuckoo jumping on the carpet-like grass. Yao Ming is very happy. He held his breath, and the cat crouched down and crept close to the little cuckoo.
He put his hands in a semicircle and pounced! Mingming caught this little cuckoo. Ah! This little cuckoo is really beautiful. Although its feathers have not yet grown, its pearly eyes are very clever.
Mingming lovingly stroked the soft feathers of the little cuckoo. Pick some at will and change them yourself.
8. The action description of the perfect composition for the senior high school entrance examination likes to listen to the rhythm of the rain.
I like rainy days! I like its happiness, its selfless spirit, it ... At night, when I woke up from my dream, I had a sweaty nightmare like a soybean. Actually, that's it.
My dream: human beings are the most ruthless and cruel animals in the world. The earth has also given its own resources to mankind.
But humans don't know how to cherish, and eventually the earth will become the second Mars. I quickly jumped up, just like a galloping horse running into my mother's room.
Shout loudly: Mom, it's raining. Put away your clothes quickly.
I thought my mother would stay in bed, but I was surprised. What I didn't expect was.
I can't believe I suddenly ran to the balcony.
Like ants in a hot nest. I also quickly followed my mother's rhythm.
As soon as my hand was pushed to the door, a breeze gently blew into my body, feeling like my mother's touch. I can't help but stop, as if all this is a fantasy.
Mother finished collecting clothes and flew to the room to sleep at an arrow-like speed. What about me? I moved to a dilapidated stool and enjoyed the gift given by nature: enjoying the nourishment of fish and rain; Enjoying the cheerful rhythm of the rain, so beautiful. Blowing the wind and listening to the rain is actually enjoying life. The breeze blows through my heart, so gentle.
Suddenly, I remembered that "rain" is a sad word, and rain is sad in people's hearts. Because in TV series, sad scenes are always set off by rain.
I can't feel the sadness of the rain. Rain is actually happy! Whenever spring comes.
The spring rain girl Zhong will quietly come to our world. The seeds have been sown.
Let everything in the world grow healthily. Whenever summer comes, hot weather makes people feel irritable.
At this time, Sister Yu Xia will bring us a rain, which can relieve people's grumpy mood. So, rain is actually happy! I like the rain! I like its sweet voice! I love its selfless spirit! We should love nature, because we can't live without rain.