Dai Kun

Dad is a real smoker. Since he joined the ranks of smokers, he has smoked a lot at home: in the morning, at noon and at night; Smoking before eating, smoking after eating; Smoke when you are happy, and smoke when you are unhappy; Even if you sleep, you have to smoke one beautifully to sleep well ... well, at least two packs of cigarettes a day!

My mother and I are very upset about this. Once, my mother couldn't stand it anymore, so she used her unique stunt-lion roar, nagging for a long time. That's a gushing word that makes God cry! However, after scolding, dad continued to take out cigarettes, twice as much as usual! After smoking, he was still serious: "You have been cursing for so long, and I haven't smoked a cigarette. How can this work? " So I must make up for it! "Mom see dad so stubborn, so we have to let him smoke.

Who knows that my father has intensified recently, but I can only find ways to prevent my father from smoking.

How on earth can we get him to give up smoking? I think hard, think hard. Suddenly, I had an epiphany: since smoking needs cigarettes, why not hide them?

As soon as the method came out, I acted immediately and came to the stairs. Father is watching TV in the room, but cigarettes are left downstairs. Haha, this "smoking-loving" father is sometimes careless, which really helps me a lot! I crept downstairs, picked up my cigarette, crept back to my room, opened a cupboard casually and threw the cigarette in. You're done! Just waiting to see the show!

After a few minutes, dad couldn't help smoking and went downstairs to get a cigarette. "Where are the cigarettes? It was here just now. " I rummaged for a while, but there was no sign of him, so he gave up looking. I was ecstatic: I can't smoke! Unexpectedly, my father said, "Forget it, it's not much anyway." After that, I opened a cupboard door and directly "blinded" my eyes: piles of cigarettes! Dad took out a bag and said, "Just suck' Nanjing'!"

After seeing my father's "bumper harvest" warehouse, I no longer have the idea of hiding cigarettes, but how can I give up! When one plan failed, another plan was born: Dad had a lot of cigarettes, but only two lighters. Wouldn't it be the same to hide his lighter? ! I quickly ran down the stairs and successfully "transferred" the lighter in the name of taking a napkin. See how he smokes without a lighter!

Not long after, my father picked up a cigarette again and went to find a lighter. No smoking! I looked at my father's impatience and laughed to myself. "What's the matter today? First the cigarette is gone, and now the lighter is gone. How can I smoke? ! "Listening to my father's complaints, I can't help but admire my wit even more. Suddenly, my father patted his forehead and said, "Yes!" My smile froze on my face, but I didn't neglect my steps at all. I followed my father into the kitchen, only to see that my father turned on the gas stove with a fire on it. Father took advantage of the trend and began to "smoke" again.

See really no way, can only ask once: let dad smoke less. At the beginning, I drafted a "gentleman's agreement": dad can only smoke five cigarettes a day, and if he doesn't comply, he will pack the housework.

I handed the "gentleman's agreement" to my father excitedly, and my father couldn't help laughing twice: "Oh, you hid the cigarettes and lighters!" I looked up without fear: "Yes!" Dad was helpless: "This agreement is really too difficult for me to accept ..." Before my father finished, I quickly said, "Be sure to accept it!" "When I finish eating, but I don't want to tidy up, so ..." Dad pretended to hesitate. "Just take it!" "Long live Dad!"

From then on, my father obviously smoked less, and the family was no longer malodorous. My father couldn't help feeling, "Ha, my decision to quit smoking is really wise!"

Teacher Ma's comment: This is an exam composition. After reading it in one breath, it is like flowing water. Focus on the reasons and methods of dad quitting smoking, and gradually expand. The high state of symmetry is progressive symmetry, and this paper shows orderly narration. Very good.

The highlight of the article is the contrast between my father and me. I tried everything, but my father tried everything to break it. In fact, a good article only needs to do two things: one is to express fluently, and the other is to highlight. Dai has both, so he got high marks.

Dad quit smoking writing (2)

Third grade of Dongcheng Central Primary School? Cao Shuang

Father often smokes, smoking more than ten cigarettes a day on average, which makes the house often smoky. Smoking is harmful to health. For the sake of the whole family not to smoke secondhand smoke, and for the sake of dad's health, I thought of the grand goal of letting him quit smoking.

Let my father give up smoking. He promises "fine" verbally, but he always smokes secretly behind my mother's back. It seems really difficult to quit smoking. Dad can't quit smoking, which really gives me a headache! In order to help my father quit smoking successfully, my little head began to turn and I had to use my "little trick".

In the following days, I wrapped the chalk in white paper, "stealing the column" to replace the cigarettes that my father could not bear, and stuffed them into my father's bag from time to time. Every time he took out his lighter and cigarette case to get a cigarette, he found that what was inadvertently sent to his mouth was chalk in the shape of smoke, which could not be lit at all. Dad's face is bitter. Over and over again, my father didn't smoke what he thought was sweet, but my mother and I secretly enjoyed it. I am proud of my cleverness.

I just kept coming down and changed my dad's cigarettes. At the same time, he also provoked him with words and laughed and called his father a "smoker." Dad may also understand that I am trying to quit smoking and embarrassed to smoke. After half a year, dad finally gave up smoking! I am proud of my success.

But it didn't last long. Today, I found out that dad started smoking secretly again. I want to find a new way to make him quit smoking for a long time. My mother said that she would join me and fight a "protracted war of quitting smoking" with her father.

Help Dad Quit Smoking Composition (3)

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Class 6, Wuchang Experimental Primary School, Wuhan City, Hubei Province (1) Xu

My father has no other hobbies, like smoking and watching football. Watching the ball, dad is a heavy smoker! He can do anything you can think of; You never thought he could do it!

Look, he's smoking again-find the sofa, lean on it, and then order me: "Xu Yunze, go and get my cigarette." I was just about to get a cigarette when my father ordered me to find an ashtray. If you are negligent, you will only be ordered again: "Go to Lao Zi!" "

After getting what he needed for smoking, my father "pounced" on cigarettes like a hungry wolf. It felt like walking in the desert for three days and nights and suddenly seeing a lot of delicious food.

At this time, the real beauty came: he took out a cigarette, lit it with the maximum power of a lighter, leaned comfortably on the sofa, put his head in his hands, and shouted again, obviously not as impatient as before, but still had a sense of command, "Help me tune the channel to CCTV5."

Once ball addiction and smoking addiction are hooked up at the same time, dad becomes an "old slacker". He ordered me in a condescending tone, such as "Xu, help me eat melon seeds", "Xu, help me make tea", "Xu, help me make tea", "Xu Yunze" and "Xu Yunze" ... This "Xu" and that "Xu" are extremely boring and helpless. The feeling of "heart jam" that you can hold back but dare not drives me crazy!

Until one day, I complained to my father: "Dad, you always smoke, which is very harmful!" " "

"If you are willing to run with me for a month, I will agree." Dad said, in fact, I never thought about how painful it would be in the future. The first time, I couldn't hold on. After that, in order to keep my promise, I insisted on running with my father every time. Although I can't last that long, I discussed it with my father and decided to split it 50/50: I only ran for 15 days, and my father only smoked 5 cigarettes a day.

After more than a year, my father still smokes, but he always asks our permission. I am actively exercising with my dad and trying to help him quit smoking completely!

Of course, dad still asks for running! So, I started "devil training". Every Saturday and Sunday afternoon, I will run five times on the playground of Hubei University. "Five laps, two kilometers! Just to get dad to quit smoking, that's not necessary! " During this time, my heart has retreated.

However, another voice in my heart is saying, "No, it is my duty to help my father quit smoking. Moreover, this request was made by myself, and I should be responsible. " In this way, I persisted in finishing the first lap, the second lap and the third lap. ...

Since then, I will run on the playground with my father every weekend. After a while, I was surprised to find that I was not only getting better and better, but also getting better and better in sports! Of course, dad's addiction to cigarettes naturally disappeared.

I, here, thank my father for everything he has done for me!

(Instructor: Pei Nianzhong)