Selected comments on the opening report of undergraduate graduation thesis
1. The topic of the paper conforms to the professional training goal, and can basically achieve the comprehensive training goal, with less difficulty and less workload. The theme of the paper is general. Students' ability to consult documents is poor, and they can't collect information about the examination system comprehensively. In the process of writing, his ability to comprehensively apply the knowledge of examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of examination system is poor. The length of the article meets the requirements of the college, the content is not complete enough, the hierarchical structure is problematic, the main points are not prominent enough, the logic is poor, and there is no personal opinion. The title of the article is biased, the argument is not prominent enough, and the discussion can't stick to the theme. The language expression is poor and the format meets the requirements of the specification; Less possession data and poor timeliness; Some contents are similar to others' achievements.
2. The full-text structure is basically reasonable and scientific, the logical thinking is clear, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, the argumentation method is reasonable, the references meet the theme requirements, the theme and content meet the professional requirements, and some of them are closely related to this part, but individual quotations are not marked, and there are not many truly innovative contents, and individual concepts are vague, which generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
3. The research content is realistic and operable. The topic is a hot social issue with a rigorous logical structure. The views are clearly expressed and the discussion is comprehensive. This language is concise and easy to understand. In the process of argumentation, the principle of professional knowledge can also be well combined with practical problems. But arguments are not enough. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
4. The topic is contemporary and realistic. The structure of the full text is reasonable. The expression of views is basically accurate. The full text closely follows the requirements of the administrative management specialty and fully embodies the characteristics of the administrative management specialty. Check out more related information. But the main deficiency is that there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
5. research-such as the topic, fully embodies the characteristics of the times. It can provide reference value for solving administrative problems in China. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and obvious in viewpoint. What can be taught well in the process of argumentation is to combine argumentation with case argumentation. The disadvantage is that some arguments are not convincing.
6. Conduct research on the theme of ... It can provide reference for solving the problem. In the structure of the full text, we should first adjust the basic concepts to ask questions, then make an in-depth analysis of the problems, and finally make an analysis of-. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
7. The topic is in line with the training objectives of the administrative management major, and can better comprehensively apply social theory and professional knowledge. The writing attitude of the thesis is serious and responsible. The content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials are sufficient, and the hierarchical structure is reasonable. The main points are prominent, the logical points are clear, and the language expression is fluent. But the depth of the argument is not enough.
8. The topic of this paper conforms to the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. The materials consulted in the writing process of this paper are not only sufficient but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.
9. This article is very novel. Taking-as a clue and combining with local standards, this paper comprehensively analyzes the existing problems and reasons of-. And put forward the countermeasures to solve the existing problems. Content argumentation also teaches scientific rationality. The full text fully embodies the characteristics of administrative management specialty and the format is standardized. But innovation is not enough.
10. This paper meets the professional requirements and reflects social hot issues. Therefore, the research on this subject is beneficial to the further development of China. The full text starts with the problem of-,and then analyzes the reasons. On this basis, the related. The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.
The opening report of undergraduate graduation thesis comments on classic articles
1. study xxx as the topic, fully embodying the characteristics of the times. It can provide reference value for solving administrative problems in China. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and obvious in viewpoint. What can be taught well in the process of argumentation is to combine argumentation with case argumentation. The disadvantage is that some arguments are not convincing.
2. Research on xxx. It can provide reference for solving xxx- problem. In the structure of the full text, we should first adjust the basic concepts to ask questions, then make an in-depth analysis of the problems, and finally make an analysis of-. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
3. Zhao Xia's thesis "Website Design of Electronic Information Science and Technology Specialty" has completed the website design of electronic information science and technology specialty, and completed the overall scheme design, structural design and programming of message board module and news management function module. This design was completed by two students. Zhao Xia is responsible for the design of news management function module, and its development mainly includes the establishment and maintenance of background database and the development of front-end application programs. In addition to reading all the reference materials designated by the tutor, students can also read some self-selected materials, put forward a more reasonable implementation plan for the opening report, and complete the foreign language translation on time as required, with good translation quality. The writing standard of the thesis meets the requirements of the thesis defense.
4. The topic of the paper is basically the same as the content of the paper, with complete structure and fluent language. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tried to learn from Lev? Looking for the connection between Tolstoy and a character in Cao Yu's novels. From the content, the author has a further understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials. How to draw my own conclusion through the analysis of the data is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author has made great efforts.
5. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to XXXXX's writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also sharp, the paper is clear and reasonable, and the viewpoint is unique, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
6. The topic of the paper is very meaningful. On the basis of absorbing academic research results, it is reasonable to have my own experience and put forward my own views. The argument is correct, the material is substantial, the narrative is clear and logical. The words are fluent. Writing conforms to academic norms. In the future, we should further sum up experience, compare music education modes and teach music better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
7. The topic of this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the learned knowledge is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are innovative opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent. In the future, we should further sum up experience and compare moral education models, so that moral education can be carried out better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
8. This paper takes * * * as the research object, with novel topics and high theoretical value and practical guiding significance; In the process of writing the thesis, the student took a serious attitude, independently consulted the literature and collected information, and put forward a better implementation plan for discussing the topic; Strive to observe discipline and finish writing tasks on time; This paper discusses thorough research, rigorous logic, reasonable structure and close paragraph cohesion. The conclusion of the paper is correct and the format meets the requirements of paper writing; Have a sense of innovation at work and have their own unique opinions.
9. This paper takes * * * as the research object, and the topic of the paper basically meets the requirements of financial management; The student's attitude in the writing process is average, but he can basically complete the writing task; The paper is comprehensive, but the research content is not deep enough. The structure of the paper is reasonable and logical, but the cohesion between paragraphs is not close enough. The conclusion of the paper is basically correct, and the format basically meets the requirements of paper writing; However, the innovation significance of the paper is weak, and there is no obvious breakthrough in the previous research.
10. The selected topic in this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the learned knowledge is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The obtained data is reasonable, the conclusion is correct and innovative. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent.
1 1. The selected topic of the paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has high academic research (reference value (great practical guiding significance. This student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, can comprehensively collect information about the examination system, can comprehensively use the knowledge of the examination system in the writing process, can comprehensively analyze the graduation thesis of the examination system, and has a strong ability to comprehensively use knowledge. The length of the article fully conforms to the requirements of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions. The topics are completely consistent, the arguments are prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; There is no plagiarism.
12. The title of the paper is very meaningful. On the basis of absorbing academic research results, it is reasonable to have your own experience and put forward your own views. The argument is correct, the material is substantial, the narrative is clear and logical. The words are fluent. Writing conforms to academic norms. In the future, we should further sum up experience, compare music education modes and teach music better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
13. The selected topic in this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the learned knowledge is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The obtained data is reasonable, the conclusion is correct and innovative. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent. In the future, we should further sum up experience and compare moral education models, so that moral education can be carried out better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
14. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the XXXXX paper writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also sharp, the paper is clear and reasonable, and the viewpoint is unique, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
15. The selected topic in this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the learned knowledge is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The obtained data is reasonable, the conclusion is correct and innovative. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent.
Hot articles in the opening report of undergraduate thesis
1. The topic of this paper is reasonable and meets the requirements of administrative management specialty. The full text takes the theme as the analysis and demonstration, which has reference and reference significance for perfecting China's administrative management. The content demonstration is more scientific and reasonable, the format is more standardized, and the reference materials are closely related to the theme of the article, but the innovation and arguments are insufficient, especially the last part of the article is too weak and unconvincing. Generally speaking, it basically meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
2. Focusing on this theme, this paper focuses on these issues. The topic basically conforms to the category of administrative management specialty and fully embodies the professional characteristics. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable, but the innovation is not enough, some viewpoints are not fully demonstrated, the format is not very standardized, and there are not many viewpoints that really belong to them. Generally speaking, it is basically qualified.
3. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. The parts are closely related, the opinions are basically accurate, and the argumentation content is more convincing. In the process of argumentation, the basic knowledge principle of administrative specialty is basically used to analyze the main problems in the article, but the reference materials are insufficient, the article lacks its own original content, and a few viewpoints are not profound and comprehensive.
4. This paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed first, and then the official accountability system in China is analyzed.
5. In-depth analysis of the dilemma, and finally put forward effective suggestions to solve the dilemma. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the paper's viewpoints and themes, and the practical demonstration is not enough. But there is not much real innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
6. The idea of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are clear, and the opinions are expressed accurately. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some better solutions to the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature consulted is closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meets the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
7. The title of this paper is * * *, which is novel and practical. The full text has scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper. The demonstration method is reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is more thorough. In the process of demonstration, students can also combine the principles of administrative professional knowledge with social reality. Whether it is from the topic selection or viewpoint demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. But innovation is not enough.
8. The paper is rigorous in structure, strong in logic, accurate in text expression, detailed in content and irregular in format. In the process of writing the thesis, the student actively contacted the tutor, conducted serious investigation and research, read a lot of literature, and was able to master the basic theoretical knowledge of this major skillfully, with certain scientific research ability.
9. This paper focuses on the analysis of the existing problems and reasons of * * *, and puts forward some operable countermeasures. The full-text topic is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing. The demonstration method is reasonable, and a large number of data are used to demonstrate, which increases the reliability of the demonstration. Can comprehensively use the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze * * * *, but the main deficiency is that the language is not very refined.
10. By using the methods of literature investigation and mathematical statistics, this paper analyzes and studies the application of football games in primary school football teaching, and puts forward some reasonable suggestions, which has certain guiding role for the development of primary school football and mass fitness.
1 1. In the research work of this thesis, the student consulted and analyzed the latest academic literature in the field of phased array antenna testing and diagnosis at home and abroad, and put forward his own views on this basis. The materials cited in the thesis writing are true and reliable, the research methods are correct, the obtained data are detailed, the writing norms meet the requirements, the article structure is logical and meets the requirements of the dissertation.
12. In the postgraduate study stage, the student actively demands ideological progress, always strictly demands himself and actively studies the policy line of the CPC Central Committee. In learning, according to my own research direction, I carefully studied relevant books inside and outside the class, consulted professional literature, mastered basic theoretical knowledge and professional knowledge, and successfully completed my master's thesis. Full of enthusiasm for life, harmonious relationship with classmates and helpful. I hope that in my future work and study, I will continue to maintain and carry forward my fine style and make greater achievements.
13. In the study of specialized courses, he carefully studied relevant core courses according to the requirements of research direction, and laid a solid scientific research foundation; During her study, she also studied many other courses, broadened her horizons and got a deeper understanding of the structure of the whole research field. In English learning, I have strong English listening, speaking, reading and writing skills.
14. Students have a good foreign language level, can read foreign language documents of related majors skillfully, and have good English writing and conversation skills.
15. The topics are basically the same and the arguments are more prominent. Discussion can better serve the argument.
16. The topic selected in this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the knowledge learned is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The obtained data is reasonable, the conclusion is correct and innovative. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent. In the future, we should further sum up experience and compare moral education models, so that moral education can be carried out better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
17. The title of the paper is basically consistent with the content of the paper, with complete structure and fluent language. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tried to learn from Lev? Looking for the connection between Tolstoy and a character in Cao Yu's novels. From the content, the author has a further understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials. How to draw my own conclusion through the analysis of the data is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author has made great efforts.
18. The topic of this paper is reasonable. Regional economy is the focus of economic research, and agricultural economic growth is also the focus of discussion at present. In recent years, many experts at home and abroad have made many mature discussions on this issue, and some experts and scholars in XX area have made in-depth research on the economic problems in XX area, but no special discussion on the comprehensive study of XX agricultural regional economy and its growth has been found. How to understand the present situation and future trend of regional economic differences in XX agriculture and promote the healthy and sustained growth of agricultural economy is an urgent problem to be solved in economic reality, and it is also the significance of this paper.
19. The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is average. The topic selection has practical guiding significance.
20. The student's ability to consult documents is average, and he can collect relevant information of papers. In the process of writing, he can basically use basic knowledge and analyze problems comprehensively, and his ability to use knowledge comprehensively is average.
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