Teaching objectives:

1, so that students can learn to select materials from multiple angles, broaden the scope of disciplines and improve their ability to select materials.

2. Help students accumulate certain materials.

3. Promote traditional culture in composition teaching, so that students can inherit the traditional virtue of respecting the elderly.

Note: The purpose of this kind of teaching is to let students learn to choose materials, but as a part of Chinese class, composition class also plays the role of preaching, teaching and solving doubts, so the above goal is established.

Teaching focus:

1, so that students can learn to choose materials from multiple angles and broaden the scope of disciplines.

2. Help students accumulate certain materials.

3. Promote traditional culture in composition teaching, so that students can inherit the traditional virtue of respecting the elderly.

Description: The main function of composition class is to guide students to pay attention to life, accumulate constantly, and be good at expressing what they see, hear and feel smoothly, so as to achieve the order and purpose of things. However, the composition class also has the function of educating people. Ye Shengtao said that writing must first be a person. Based on the above understanding, he set the teaching goal of 1, 2,3 as the teaching focus.

Teaching difficulties:

Let students learn to select materials from multiple angles, broaden the scope of disciplines and improve their ability to select materials.

Description: How to broaden the writing theme is a difficult point for existing students.

Teaching process:

First, exchange memories and introduce new courses:

1, "When a person is a stranger in a foreign land, he misses his family more often during the festive season. I know where my brother climbs, and there is one less dogwood. " This was written by Wang Wei, a great poet in the Tang Dynasty. What is the title of this poem? What kind of emotion does this poem express? What customs can be seen from this poem about the Double Ninth Festival?

Qing: "Mountain Holiday Thinking of Shandong Brothers" misses distant relatives on the Double Ninth Festival. Climb high and insert dogwood.

2. Meng Haoran's "Passing the Old Village" "Prepare chicken rice for me, old friend, you entertain me on your farm. Green Woods surround the village and green hills are located outside the city.

Open the window facing the valley vegetable garden and pass the glass to talk about crops. Please come here to see chrysanthemums when the ninth festival comes. "Describe what kind of scene?

Clear: Double Ninth Festival feasts friends, enjoys chrysanthemums and drinks chrysanthemum wine.

Description: The purpose of designing this course is to draw out the teaching objectives of this class and naturally bring students into the teaching atmosphere of this class.

Second, reveal the topic and define the goal.

"Double Ninth Festival" is a traditional festival to respect the elderly in China, and it is a special day for people to express their blessings and thanks to their elders and other elderly people. On this special day, we express our blessings and care to our grandparents, chat with the elderly, rub our backs, or accompany our families to climb mountains, enjoy chrysanthemums and eat cakes. ...

There are many stories about Chongyang, and there are many materials that can be included in the text. Then, how to broaden the theme of the Double Ninth Festival and explore the composition materials?

Description: This section points out the teaching objectives of this class, so that students can carry out learning activities purposefully and learn clearly and effectively.

Third, compare experiences and broaden the selection of materials.

(A) Multi-angle selection style

What style can you write about the topic of Double Ninth Festival?

Clear:

Argumentative essays, such as the Double Ninth Festival or this festival's activities to respect the elderly, or people's feelings about the behavior of the elderly on this day.

Explanatory text, such as introducing the origin, customs and legends of the Double Ninth Festival.

Narrative, such as introducing the good deeds or activities of thanking the elderly and their families, or commemorating a respected old man on the Double Ninth Festival.

(2) Multi-angle material selection

1, material selection should be "solid"

Both argumentative and narrative essays must be based on their own personal experiences. If you take personal experience as the material, you can ensure that you will not "crash" with the people in the material, and you will have the possibility to write your own uniqueness. In short, the angle of material selection requires truth, in style, material and uniqueness.

① Experience and familiarity.

When students choose materials for narrative writing, they should not only focus on the excellent compositions they have read, but also choose materials from personal experiences and very familiar life as far as possible. If you cook a meal for the old people around you, tidy up the room, clean the house, comb your hair, send some fruit, send some greetings and so on. , familiar with, it is handy to write.

② Specificity and particularity.

Under certain and special circumstances, people's feelings are often different from those of ordinary people. For example, I have always been loved by my elders, but occasionally my dispensable request was rejected, or my rude words and deeds hurt them. At this time, students' reactions, feelings and emotions will fluctuate greatly. If you put it in the article, you may get a good article.

2, the material should be "small"

The angle of material selection is small, and the article can be written realistically, giving people the impression of novel material selection.

Such as: the feeling of the Double Ninth Festival, the origin of the Double Ninth Festival, the brief introduction of the custom of the Double Ninth Festival, the unforgettable Double Ninth Festival, the morning of the Double Ninth Festival, the night of the Double Ninth Festival, and a mountain climbing activity to remember the Double Ninth Festival.

The material in the article can be written as what elders do: for example, pick up the phone, send holiday wishes to the elderly at home and around them, cut their nails, talk to them and so on. Or the story that happened on the Double Ninth Festival; Or your own feelings about the Double Ninth Festival; Or introduce the custom and origin of the Double Ninth Festival.

Note: How to choose talents is both important and difficult. This link attempts to broaden the scope of students' material selection from the choice of styles and materials. Because of the limitation of style, some students have limited choice of materials. If we can get rid of the mindset and limitations of narrative style, then everyone will have something to say. For the topic of Double Ninth Festival, students may be a little at a loss, feeling abstract and not knowing how to write it. Let the students choose real small materials and familiar materials they have experienced, and then they can trade in writing and write their true feelings.

Fourth, appreciate the exercises and accumulate materials.

Yi Chongyang

-for grandpa.

When I was rummaging through the drawers yesterday, I suddenly found my grandfather's ID card. Grandpa's face in the photo is small and thin, and his small eyes are trying to open wide, but only a crack is still exposed. If he is sleepy, his mouth is wide open, as if he has something to say. My grandfather left this for me many times.

On the afternoon of the second day of April, when I finished packing my grandpa's things and was about to leave, grandpa curled up in a corner of the old wooden bed. Grandpa asked, Connie, do you want to come over tonight?

I said yes. A pot of porridge will definitely be cold at night.

I tucked grandpa in. I said, grandpa, I'm leaving.

Grandpa nodded and closed his eyes. Then it suddenly opened. Remember to come here at night. Grandpa murmured.

Hmm. I nodded. I turned around and took the wooden door of grandpa's bedroom, and then took the kitchen door. The heavy wooden door creaked and slammed on the door frame.

It's raining outside, cool and sunny.

I met my brother when I went to Q in the evening. My brother asked, Is grandpa better?

No, it still hurts. When I get up, I need to stand up. I said.

Do you often take care of him? Brother asked again.

Well, three times a day. I just finished washing his clothes this afternoon, so I'll go later. It is estimated that he will be hungry at midnight. I answered.

If only I had a mobile phone or telephone. If you talk to him, his spirit will be better. He has been thinking about you these days. I said it again.

At ten o'clock, when my mother comes back, I will clean up and go there.

Mom waved her hand, and I just came over. He is asleep, and your father is not at home. It is not safe for girls to come and go on the road in the middle of the night.

Grandpa's porridge is not hot yet, I explained.

I didn't sleep well.

At half past six, I got up. In early April, the weather was cold and foggy, and a layer of mist covered houses, trees, roads and distant mountains. When I was near my old house, I met my neighbor's elder, Jenny. I got up early today. I smiled back, Mrs. Tai (great-grandparents with the same surname), and you got up early, too.

Grandpa's door has been opened, and everything in the room is clearly seen in the background of 40-watt incandescent lamp, with a little strangeness. I wonder, where did grandpa go?

On the dining table against the wall, there is still a beer cover left. I sighed and drank again. Yesterday, on the fifteenth day of the lunar calendar, according to rural customs, you can't scrub toilets, bedpans and other dirt. I went back to the back room, took out the bedpan and scrubbed at the door of the toilet. When I met my grandmother, I asked, where is your grandfather?

I said, I don't know. I think I went to the street to have breakfast. I just saw the beer lid on the table again.

When I met him the other day, I also told him that it's not that they won't let you drink, but that your health should be taken care of. Taifuren lowered her voice. She was born with stomach cancer, but we can't tell. ...

I nodded.

The fog has cleared, and the small villages in southern Zhejiang have a clear and bright outline in the early morning. I went out of the house and asked about grandpa's whereabouts along the street.

I just saw him walking to the breakfast table on the bridge. It's time for breakfast. An aunt told me so.

I followed her and others' guidance all the way to my home on the roadside.

I woke up my mom, mom, and grandpa had already left.

We finally found him in the stream in front of the town middle school. In the crowded eyes, his thin body was lying on the stream, and the water was very cold. His body floats on the water like a blade of grass, motionless, perhaps just a grass and a flower growing in the water.

This morning, my sky-blue coat fluttered on the asphalt road across town like a blue flower or Lan Huo.

People by the stream told me that the woman washing clothes by the stream in the morning heard an object plop into the water, and then an object climbed up, and then the sound of falling into the water rang again. The timid woman pulled up the clothes basket and turned and ran.

Does this woman know that at this moment, such a close old man in my life is separated from me by Yin and Yang? My body is so soft that it hangs down.

Yesterday, at the place where I washed clothes, the villagers helped lift his body from the water. Half a meter deep stream, I easily straightened up, but an old man has been planting here all his life.

My mother called my father, my younger brother who studied in Taizhou, and my uncle's house in the county. Everything after that seems to be in a fog. As if in the morning of April, I went to a strange place in a fog, and something beyond my life happened on that land, and smoke curled up on that land.

Grandma said Jenny's masterpiece was really beautiful. I read Amitabha in the south, Guanyin Bodhisattva in the south, and Bodhisattva in the south. I read and read. Occasionally, we will say something in front of grandpa's body covered with a golden scripture quilt, something related to him before or after his death. Sometimes, I seem to see his chest slightly ups and downs, open the quilt and bring out the cold breath.

The Taoist priest said when to call the spirit body to the stream, the mother said who to invite and who to help with the funeral, and the father was busy discussing with the helper when to let the funeral home people pick it up, how many red envelopes to give and what brand of cigarettes to bring. In the busy work of these things, we passively accept the fact that a person has left us.

On the morning when the car came to pick him up, I was asked to avoid by the well-dressed Taoist priest. My birthday is different from grandpa's closing time. I finally took the car away. Only then did I know that I have never been to the county town with my grandfather. I don't know at which intersection he waited for the bus when he went to his grandmother's house in the county. When he was surrounded and got on the bus, a kind girl gave him her seat. When he was running along this mountain road in southern Zhejiang with his car, what did he think of and what did he bring back to himself when he came back from his grandmother in the county?

My chanting sounded, along with the paper money scattered by my brother, spreading all the way.

I dream every night. In my dream, if grandpa always eats, goes back to the house and puts his feet on the bed, I wonder, Jenny, why is there no one in our village now?

Grandpa is not my own grandfather. Until now, some villagers are used to putting a dog in front of him when they mention him. Since my grandparents, my family has been poor until now, and even my grandfather's two brothers have not married a wife. Grandpa finally got a daughter-in-law, who left home in her thirties and married someone else. Others' address to grandpa was despised by the villagers only because of his poor family. When my father was two or three years old, he was finally adopted by my grandfather's sister and my own grandmother as an heir. My humble grandfather died humble. What he is most happy to hear is that you have a good granddaughter who takes good care of you. From time to time, grandpa always laughs like a chrysanthemum.

No one is completely ready to leave. I don't know what my grandfather left behind in his hurry. Perhaps, some grandfathers are gone, and some are still alive. I often think of this sentence, some people are dead and he is still alive.

Double ninth festival-mountain climbing

The annual Double Ninth Festival finally gave me expectations. For the first time, our school organized students of Grade 5 and Grade 6 to go hiking in the wild.

Early this morning, we went up the mountain with great excitement and walked for about half an hour before reaching our destination. After breakfast, several classmates and I went to watch the kite competition.

There are so many people in the kite competition! Around the whole stadium, it is really three floors inside and three floors outside. Suddenly a whistle sounded, kites flew into the sky one after another, and soon, all kinds of kites soared in the blue sky. There are dancing flowers, busy bees and eagles flying high ... The most attractive ones are lifelike dragons and centipedes. The dragon raised its head and its tail stuck high, posing as a proud figure. The centipede is not to be outdone, and will soon surpass the dragon! Everyone on the field cheered for it. I just rubbed my eyes, but somehow, the dragon and the centipede got entangled. Perhaps the dragon was afraid that it could not compare with the centipede and made a lose-lose approach. In a short time, both of them broke the line and fell into the valley. Everyone present felt sorry for it and complained that the dragon should not be so selfish. Their owners rushed down the valley like an arrow, looking for their own kites, and finally found them, but time was tight, but their owners were not discouraged at all, put the kites back on the line, and then released them ... Finally, the centipede won the first place and the dragon won the second place ... The kite competition ended with warm cheers and applause.

After lunch, it's time for our athletes to show their talents, and mountaineering activities began. I saw the athletes rubbing their hands and getting ready halfway up the mountain. There was another whistle, and the athletes scrambled to climb. Look, Xiaoling in our class is going to get the red flag. "Oh dear", that's too bad! She tripped over a stone and fell to her knees, which made everyone laugh. She got up and ran again, but it was too late. The red flag was taken away by the students in Class 5 [2].

At this time, the sun is gradually setting, and the golden sunshine shines on the smiling faces of the students, as if flowers are in full bloom.

The origin of Chongyang

Today is the Double Ninth Festival. what are you going to do？ For most people, the Double Ninth Festival may not be memorable. The answer is no, the Double Ninth Festival is not only memorable, but also meaningful. Next, let me talk about the origin of the Double Ninth Festival:

The Double Ninth Festival after Mid-Autumn Festival, which originated in the early Han Dynasty, has a long history. It is not easy to say the origin of the Double Ninth Festival!

The specific date of the Double Ninth Festival is the ninth day of the ninth lunar month. Because it is twenty-nine, it becomes a "double ninth"; At the same time, because in ancient China, six was the number of yin and nine was the number of yang, so Chongyang was called "Chongyang".

The origin of the Double Ninth Festival can be traced back to the early Han Dynasty. It is said that in the palace, on September 9th every year, you should wear Cornus officinalis, feed it with bait and drink chrysanthemum wine to live longer. After the love princess Qi of Emperor Gaozu Liu Bang was killed, the maid-in-waiting Jia was also expelled from the palace, and this custom spread to the people.

In ancient times, people had the custom of climbing mountains on this day, so the Double Ninth Festival was also called "Mountain Climbing Festival". According to legend, this custom began in the Eastern Han Dynasty. There are many climbing poems in the Tang Dynasty, most of which are the custom of writing the Double Ninth Festival. Du Fu's Seven Laws "Ascending the Mountain" is a famous article about climbing the mountain in Chongyang. There is no uniform rule for climbing mountains. Generally, we climb mountains and towers. There is also the custom of eating "Chongyang cake". Exquisite Chongyang cake should be made into nine layers, like a pagoda, with two lambs on it, which conforms to the meaning of Chongyang (sheep). Some people even put red paper flags on Chongyang cakes and light candles. This is probably replacing "crawling" with "lighting" and "eating cakes", and replacing Cornus officinalis with a little red paper flag.

The Double Ninth Festival also enjoys chrysanthemums and drinks chrysanthemum wine, which originated from Tao Yuanming. Tao Yuanming is famous for his seclusion, his poems, his wine and his love for chrysanthemums. Later generations have followed suit, so Chongyang has the custom of enjoying chrysanthemums. In the old days, in order to get close to Tao Yuanming, scholar-officials often combined chrysanthemum appreciation with feasting. In the Northern Song Dynasty, Kaifeng was the capital, and chrysanthemum appreciation on Chongyang was very popular. At that time, there were many kinds of chrysanthemums. After the Qing dynasty, the custom of enjoying chrysanthemums was particularly prosperous, and it was not limited to September 9, but it was the most prosperous around the Double Ninth Festival.

The custom of inserting Evodia rutaecarpa in the Double Ninth Festival was very common in the Tang Dynasty. The ancients thought that inserting Evodia rutaecarpa on the Double Ninth Festival could take refuge and eliminate disasters. Or wear it on your arm, or make a sachet and put it in it, or wear it on your head. Most of them are worn by women and children, and in some places, men also wear them. Ge Hong's Miscellanies of the Western Classics in the Jin Dynasty recorded that Kaunus participated in the Double Ninth Festival.

In addition to wearing dogwood, chrysanthemum is also inserted in the Double Ninth Festival. This happened in the Tang Dynasty and has been popular since ancient times. In the Qing Dynasty, the custom of Beijing Double Ninth Festival was to stick chrysanthemum branches and leaves on the doors and windows, "to eliminate evil and filth, and to make money and treasure." This is the vulgarization of the chrysanthemum on the head. In the Song Dynasty, some people cut ribbons into dogwood and chrysanthemum and gave them to each other.

Up to now, the Double Ninth Festival has evolved into a rich and interesting festival. People all over the world celebrate this historic festival by climbing mountains, enjoying chrysanthemums, drinking chrysanthemum wine, eating Chongyang cake and inserting dogwood.

Unforgettable Double Ninth Festival

The ninth day of September-the Double Ninth Festival is here!

After a quick dinner, I took out a pair of exquisite scissors from my pocket and ran to my grandparents. I said, "Grandparents, do you want me to cut your nails?" Grandpa listened, paused and said with suspicious eyes, "Good granddaughter, can you cut your nails, too?" "Yes!" Speaking of which, I feel guilty. After all, I have never cut my nails! But I believe: as long as I use my sincerity, I will be able to complete the task. Isn't there an old saying? Nothing is difficult in the world, if you put your mind to it!

Do it. I took grandpa's hand and started to act. Wow! Grandpa's nails are so hard! The hardest part is actually in the beginning It took a lot of effort to finally cut the first knife. "Grandpa, does it hurt?" "No pain, no pain!" Grandpa sat on the sofa with satisfaction and said, "Grandpa is enjoying my granddaughter's blessing!" " "

Suddenly I found that Grandpa had no nails on one finger. I was anxious and asked, "Grandpa, where is the nail on your finger?" Grandpa saw that I was in a hurry and quickly said, "Xiaoping, don't worry!" I dropped this when I was a soldier. That's a military exercise. We're training to clean guns. Because I wanted to make a quick decision and listen to my grandfather, I quickly touched it. The meat was really hard. Yes, it's been decades. Can you not work hard? Grandpa is really a strong man! I touched his finger and thought so.

Grandpa's fingernails were cut, and it's grandma's turn to cut them. I squeezed grandma's hand and found that although grandma is a woman, her hands are thick and thick. My heart is full of surprises. Grandma saw it and guessed my mind: "Do you want to hear grandma's story, too?" I looked up at grandma's kind eyes and nodded. Grandma's chatterbox suddenly opened: "We didn't have such good conditions when we were children. Because your grandfather is a soldier outside, I take care of everything at home and in the fields. I worked by hand for three days and nights, but I couldn't finish it. It has made a great contribution ... "After listening to my grandmother, I forgot to cut her. ...

I learned so much after a manicure. Thanks for this Double Ninth Festival! I hope every day is the double ninth festival in people's hearts!

Jiujiu Chongyang

In the golden autumn of October, the annual Double Ninth Festival with the fragrance of Dangui arrived as scheduled, and finally arrived!

On the way after school, I walked and thought about what I should do for my grandparents. I sat quietly on the bench with my chin in my hands, thinking and thinking, scratching and scratching, but I still couldn't figure it out.

When I walked to the door, I patted my forehead and thought of this. Making greeting cards is not a good idea, but it can also represent my filial piety.

I chose a piece of paper with bright colors, which also represents youthful vitality and sunshine. I wrote five big characters on the paper: "Happy Double Ninth Festival!" "

I also wrote a blessing to the elderly. After I finished writing, I quietly stuffed the paper into the gap in the middle of grandpa's desk. Although there is no happy expression on my face, I am so happy and comfortable!

I went into my little study and listened quietly to the voice in grandpa's room.

Time passed slowly, and grandpa found this card and called me over. My heart was pounding, and my grandfather said, "Did you make this card?" I said, "Yeah." He added: "I know your good intentions, but if you want to thank or bless, you'd better be practical and help me sweep the floor or something!" " "I nodded my head.

Double Ninth Festival, let me know that I should care more about the elderly and share some relaxing things with them. At the same time, I wish the elderly everywhere: May you always be young, healthy and happy!

Reflections on the Double Ninth Festival

It's the annual Double Ninth Festival again. What can I do for my parents? "Oh, it's really nerve-racking." I can't help sighing.

When I get home, I just want to discuss with my mother about the Double Ninth Festival. Suddenly, I found my mother's face ugly. I asked what was going on. My mother said that she had a headache and had no strength. I helped my mother do something that I could, such as dust removal and sweeping the floor. I find it difficult to do these things at the same time. I feel tired after only doing it for a while, thinking that if I do it every day, wouldn't it be boring? If that mother does this every day ... I can't help but feel ashamed when I think about it. Why didn't I think of helping my mother once in peacetime?

In the evening, my mother finally couldn't support it and lay in bed for a while. I thought of my mother's hard work, so I brought her tea and water and a newspaper. Although it was a trivial matter, I choked up when I saw my mother's moved eyes. I can't help being upset at the thought of talking back to my mother and caring about her. Why didn't I think of caring about my parents at ordinary times? Why didn't I help my parents in peacetime? In fact, this is the common problem of our only child now: self-centered, selfish and never considering the feelings of our elders! So we can't just celebrate the Double Ninth Festival.

Morning of Double Ninth Festival (composition)

Double Ninth Festival is a traditional festival in China, also known as "Old People's Day". On this day, we can climb high and look far, enjoy chrysanthemums, and respect the elderly. I thought to myself, "What should I do for my parents on this special day?"

In the morning, I got up early and saw my parents sleeping soundly. I thought to myself, "I'm going to prepare breakfast for my parents!" " "Just do it. I tied my hair at random and quietly came to the kitchen. What should I do? I looked around and saw a big bowl of rice left on the table last night. By the way, let's make simple porridge! I learned my mother's usual cooking style, carefully turned on the gas stove and put the pot on. After a while, the water boiled and made a "beep, beep" sound. I lifted the lid and a hot air came out. I can't help taking a step back. When the temperature dropped a little, I "jumped" and poured the whole bowl of rice into the water, spilling it all over the floor, but I persisted and quickly brought it to the lid. After a while, the lid was closed. I opened the lid, yeah! The porridge is ready! I looked at my masterpiece and smiled with satisfaction! Thinking of mom and dad's praise, I excitedly woke them up.

I ran to their door and stopped at the end. I walked softly to the bathroom again, helped my parents squeeze toothpaste and pour face wash water. Make sure everything is ready before I wake them up.

Dad said, "You are really capable!" The mother said in surprise, "Our daughter has grown up!" "

I will always try my best to help my parents do some housework, so that they can have more rest time, not just on the happy Double Ninth Festival.

Today, because the composition has no subject matter to write, my father asked me to do one thing-wash socks, and then use them to write a composition.

No sooner had I mentioned the washbasin than I shuddered: "Ah! It's so cold Not to mention washing. " I put my hand into the water to wash my socks. I feel cold water as painful as ten thousand steel needles stuck in bones. I quickly drew back my hand, but I had to bite the bullet and wash it again in order to write my composition. I rubbed the soap, rubbed it a few times, and then beat it. I put it in water for a while and then dry it.

I thought, "Dad washes clothes and dishes every day ... isn't he cold?" Only then did I feel my father's hard work. Although my hands are as cold as carrots, I feel indescribable joy when I look at clean socks.

Verb (abbreviation for verb) assigns homework.

Please write an article on the topic of Double Ninth Festival with a self-made title.

Description: This teaching plan is to write through the topic of Double Ninth Festival, which not only helps students to accumulate some materials about Double Ninth Festival and enrich writing materials, but also aims to carry forward traditional culture and cultivate students' traditional virtues of respecting the elderly through this traditional festival.

Therefore, when conceiving the lesson plan, we should design the link closely around this topic. Students' exercises aim to broaden their reading horizons and help them accumulate effectively.