In fact, it is not difficult to write an article about scenery. Your composition must be true. Before you start writing, you must remember the scenery you want to write like a movie. Don't be afraid to write badly. Detailed descriptions and fluent and beautiful sentences will definitely impress you. Remember, write with your heart and feel with your heart. Wish you success! But how can we write the characteristics of the scenery? I think we should pay attention to the following points:
First, grasp the characteristics of the scenery and observe it carefully.
Observing and feeling the scenery requires mobilizing all kinds of sensory organs. We can write landscapes from different senses, moving and static, and let people read them themselves. For example, the mountains in Daxinganling described by Mr. Lao She are "horizontal, downward, high, short, long, short ...", which is gentle and amiable. He writes about Lin Hai and is good at color matching. On his palette, it is indescribable shallow, bright, dark and green. "Especially," in the sun, the silver skirt of the birch tree flashes on the edge of the big pine tree. Is it like a wave on the beach? "This sentence pattern, which includes three figures of speech: metaphor, personification and rhetorical question, simply depicts a three-dimensional and gorgeous picture for us, making people feel an unspeakable beauty. His flowers are more distinctive. You see: "pine is a shirt, birch is a skirt, and embroidered shoes are still there." "Appropriate contrast, keen observation and vivid description are beautiful and wonderful. How can it be?
Second, grasp the order of landscape writing and write down the levels.
We can describe a scene from high to low, from far to near, from whole to part, from things to people, from moving to static and so on. In short, only by grasping the order of writing scenes can the scenes be described clearly and naturally. There are usually two kinds of order to describe the scene: the first is time order, for example, writing a tree, we can write it according to the time order of spring, summer, autumn and winter. The other is the spatial order. For example, when we describe a mountain peak, we can write what it looks like from a distance, what it looks like from a close look, and what it looks like when we look down and look up.
Third, cultivate a reasonable imagination.
On the basis of careful observation of the scenery, spreading the wings of imagination, expanding reasonable imagination according to what you see and feel, and then describing the state, color, sound and smell of the scenery will leave a deep impression on people. For example, "an oriole stands on a branch and sings happily." It vividly depicts the liveliness and loveliness of orioles by anthropomorphic methods. Another example: Guilin landscape, the author develops association and imagination on the basis of observation. From the "wonder" of Guilin Mountain, the author imagines that there are many strange peaks such as old people, elephants and camels, which enriches the scenery and fully expresses the author's thoughts and feelings.
Fourth, pay attention to the blending of scenes.
The purpose of scenery writing is not to write scenery for the sake of scenery writing, but to reflect the author's thoughts and feelings. Only in this way can we inject vitality into the article and write vivid articles.
During the exam, you should pay attention to the following writing methods when describing the scenery.
L, careful observation, detailed description
To describe the scenery, we must first observe it carefully. Only by careful observation can we describe it in detail and write vivid and interesting content. For example, we can observe the characteristics of water from the aspects of color, flow, waves, reflection, ships in water and so on. When observing, pay attention to carefully observe the dynamic and static characteristics of water. Please look at the following paragraph:
The stream flows down from the mountain spring, clear and bright, like a transparent silk, trembling and spreading far away. It follows the mountain from high to low, "Ding Dong Ding Dong" pulls the strings, "Huahua" sings, and then bypasses the hillside and flows eastward. There are many small fish, shrimp and frogs in the water. ...
Here, I write about the characteristics of streams, such as shape, color, sound, static, dynamic, scenery and interest ... This young author could not have written such beautiful words without careful observation. This shows that the young author has carefully observed the shape, color, sound, static and dynamic of the stream.
2. Use metaphors and personification.
In the articles describing scenery, proper use of metaphor and personification can make the scenery more vivid. Personification refers to the use of imagination to write things into adults. Using personification to describe the scenery can make the scenery more vivid and vivid and increase the appeal of the article. When using personification, we must find the similarities between scenery and people. Metaphor is to compare one thing with another that is similar to it, also called beating. It can make the scenery described more beautiful and moving, leaving a deep and vivid impression on readers. To make the metaphor accurate, we must learn to associate while observing: think about what the scenery is similar to. Think again. Find out their similarities. The more accurate the similarity, the more accurate the metaphor. To find similarities, we can generally consider the following aspects: similar outline, similar color, similar sound and similar length.
In spring, she is like a fairy in a fairy tale. The bright green larch on the top of the mountain is like a fairy's scarf. The green trees in the mountains are like a fairy's green robe, and the blooming white pears are like flowers dotted on the green robe. The cherry blossoms at the foot of the mountain are like fairy dresses. Dandelion flowers at the foot of the mountain are like yellow embroidered shoes worn by fairies.
The metaphor here is easy to understand, and the combination of metaphor and personification increases the vividness and interest of the article, and also expresses the little author's love for spring.
3, three-dimensional description, color, shape, sound, potential.
The so-called three-dimensional description is to describe the scenery in an all-round, vivid and concrete way by grasping its shape, color, state, potential, sound and taste. Look, the tide is coming:
At about one o'clock in the afternoon, there was a rumbling noise in the distance, as if a muffled thunder was rolling. Suddenly, people familiar with the river tide told us that the tide was coming. We stood on tiptoe and looked eastward, but the river remained calm and unchanged. After a while, the noise became louder and louder, and a white line appeared in the east where water and sky meet.
The white line moves forward quickly, gradually elongating and thickening, and is used to cross the river surface to form a wall more than 6 meters high. The wave is getting closer and closer, like a thousand white horses going hand in hand, like a thousand tanks galloping, and the sound is like a landslide, as if the earth were shaking.
This passage describes the spectacular scene when the tide comes, and there is a sound-a rumbling sound from a distance, like a muffled thunder rolling; That sound is like thousands of tanks moving, making a sound of landslides, as if the earth was shaken by an earthquake; Tangible-the white line moves forward quickly, gradually elongates and thickens, and forms a white wall more than 6 meters high when crossing the river; Color-white line, white horse, white wall; Magnificent-the wave is getting closer and closer, like thousands of white war horses going hand in hand, galloping, sounding like thousands of tanks moving, making a landslide sound, as if the earth were shaking.
Writing about scenery should be like this, describing it from all angles. Describe in detail what you hear, see, think, feel and so on.
4, static and dynamic combination
Only by grasping the static and dynamic characteristics of the scene and describing it delicately and vividly can we write the interest of the scene and get high marks. For example, to describe a small pond, we should pay attention to the static and dynamic characteristics of the scenery. The combination of static and dynamic can make the written articles interesting. Look at the static description of the small pond below:
At dusk, I like to sit by the pond and watch. The fiery red sun fell into the water, lying flat and steady, like a red-faced baby, all red. Scattered green water, like a soft and smooth bed, gently supports it. The green pool holds the red sun, and the graceful weeping willows lean on the water. What a beautiful picture!
Here, "the green pond holds the red sun, and the willows lean on the water. What a beautiful picture! " Lovely quiet.
What about the dynamics of the small pond? Cuter:
In the morning, the breeze woke the sleeping reed pond, and the reeds rustled. Looking into the distance, reeds danced with the wind, as if green silk were swinging. Some birds are hovering over the reeds, and some are twittering among the reeds. From the depths of the reed pond, there is a crisp and melodious cuckoo song. Kingfishers with sharp mouths catch small fish in the water; A thrush landed on the reed tip and sang excitedly; White seagulls pass by here, adding vitality to this reed pond.