1.？ Dongxiangqian

Appreciating the Lotus in the South Lake (Three Poems)

The wind wrinkles and waves lie on the water lily, but the stone bridge is hard to move.

Who is affectionate with the old man, swimming in the lake, cuckoo in the tree.

The question-and-answer style of the commentary is well used. The second sentence "difficult" is difficult to implement.

I heard that hibiscus was beautiful, so I came to see hibiscus on the lake.

Smile in front of the mirror, casually, but ignore Furong and follow Nong.

The comments are interesting, but the first couplet is not well organized.

In bloom in June in Spring City, the green umbrella covers the pink cheeks.

Who should be a flower lover and come back after the autumn wind?

The comment time is a bit rough, and I personally feel that I don't have to swing away.

Step 2 leave

Enjoy the lotus (three songs)

?

The water is beautiful, and the green skirt covers the waist.

Mud does not stain the soul like jade, and light flowers float secretly.

The use of personification is good, shaping the image, but the last sentence is not strong enough.

On the shore, the beautiful glow in the pool gently shakes the green leaves to the horizon.

On this trip, Mo Tao's poems are shallow and his flowers are miscellaneous.

The end of the commentary couplet is smooth and ideologically progressive. "Like flowers, it is a bit abrupt.

Have a graceful demeanour with pink cheeks and want to blossom fragrance.

Having a party with her friend Tang Qian, the fairy held her in her arms.

At the end of the couplet, the commentary wrote to express love through actions, but it seems that there is no connection with the first couplet.

3. Liu Shuqing

Appreciating the Lotus in the South Lake (Three Poems)

Teachers and students gather in four pavilions to find a sail and a leaf.

Blue waves rippled, and sharp buds landed on dragonflies.

Comment on two or four sentences, the close-up is vivid, and the final sentence is skillfully used.

The drizzle gently enters the water, and the fragrance bathes the hibiscus.

The reflection on the balcony is full of charm.

Comment on the third sentence is a bit unreasonable, and the fourth sentence and the second sentence are intertwined.

Enjoy the lotus pond in cool summer, with boundless clear water.

Lotus leaves hold the rain and dew, and the flowers are beautiful in the middle of the water.

The range of comments and descriptions is from large to small, orderly, and finally the sentence realm comes out, which is good.

Stroll by the pond and see the lotus beside the water.

Laugh in flowers and fill your heart with drunkenness.

Comment on this narrative is slightly dull and poetic.

4. Zhang Rongguang

Lotus (two)

In summer, lotus flowers are fragrant and colourful.

The soft silk rain is affectionate and charming.

Comments on sentient beings, landscapes and people are well matched. The second and fourth sentences are illegal, and then adjust.

Lotus is beautiful in various forms, full of beautiful things, including delicate and charming flowers.

Hold an umbrella without touching the mud and wander back and forth to praise everyone.

Comments on the first three sentences, writing lotus is good, flowers and leaves are very elegant. The "lingering" in the last sentence is inappropriate.

5. Kang

Nanhu shanghe

Lonely boat microwave pulp, playing summer lotus frequently.

Seagulls smell the fragrance and dance in the sky, while tourists stop singing poems.

At the end of the review, the couplet wrote the attraction of lotus flowers, and the sentence at the end was not tempered.

Ho Yin

The breeze shakes the green leaves and plays the lotus fairy. Swallows smell the fragrance and dance, dragonflies are fascinated by water lilies.

Pure dust is not stained, and there is silk. When did it rain in Mao Mao? The South Lake is very fresh.

There is content, a little comment. But neither confrontation nor transition has been done well.

Yong Lian

Red lotus produces green water, and the winding shore is cold and fragrant. Weeping willows know shyness, but butterflies hate decoration.

Because the dust is not touched, Fang. The old horse seeks longevity, but the drunken man's intention is not poetry.

Comment on this song is better than the last one. The first couplet is the main part, the parallel couplet is the foil, the neck couplet is talking, the tail couplet is self-explanatory, and the antithesis is still a little incomplete.

Step 6 laugh in the jungle

Appreciate the lotus and collect the wind

Looking at the clear water of the lotus pond, bloom, a charming girl.

Yingying willows shake, and Pearl Chi Pan shakes.

Comment on the illegality of the second and fourth sentences, which can be changed to "red love green bloom" and "dewdrop round"

Between the wind and the lake, the willows are drunk. My road twists and turns through a sheltered depression, and Xiao He is a beauty.

The evaluation is very good. The four sentences perform their duties, and the last sentence is slightly harmonious. "Xiao He shows his face first."

7. Zhang Guoqing

Yonghao

Thousands of peanuts are fertile soil, and lotus loves mud in water. Pink and green, fragrant willow embankment.

Dignified and dignified, calmly and thoroughly converted. In ancient times, heaven and man respected each other and deserved to be teachers.

The second half of the praise captures the spirit and the words are very concise. The first half of the summary is slightly inferior, and the couplet is not good, and it "overlaps".

Visit the lake and enjoy the lotus.

Weeping willows, jade bridges, green ponds, fish and birds singing lotus roots and fragrant flowers.

Make-up, hold your head high and stand in the green.

West Mother Qiao Niang weaves new colors, and Huan Nv hangs spring and autumn clothes.

My heart is free to go to Yaochi, and I am fortunate to visit Xianzi Township.

If comments are beautiful, praise can expand associations. The third sentence is illegal, and the fourth sentence is hopeless.

8. Liu Caiming

Hehuazan

Green lotus leaves are always supreme. They live in a dirty place.

Elegant and noble ode to the ages is regarded as a breeze to educate the world.

The meaning of the last sentence is good and worth pondering. There are too many leveling disorders, please adjust.

9. Wang Xusheng

Visit Nanxi Park in summer.

The sun rises, the figure shrinks, and the path is in the Liu Yin. The breeze in the pool is wrinkled and the lotus is red.

Careful observation shows that the flavor is unique. The second sentence should be changed to "disappear in Liu Yin".

10. Song Shuang

Lotus (two)

The summer sun is red, and the flowers in the lotus field are endless.

The ponds in Kethleen are full of lotus fragrance and beautiful scenery.

The overall evaluation is good, but it is relatively general, and there should be concerns.

Lotus (new rhyme)

The summer sun is red, and the flowers in the lotus field are endless.

Jade fragrance in the mud, butterflies flying in the clear water, mixed feelings.

It's better to write it like this, butterfly. It should be changed to "Gull"

1 1. Wang Ruoxuan

Appreciate lotus flowers

Huang Rui blooms in summer, with purple petals hanging over her body. The green leaves spread and the fragrance overflowed.

Rhyme evaluation can be regarded as an ancient quatrain, which is not suitable for leveling, nor for saying purple petals.

Enjoy summer lotus

The water is full of lotus flowers, and the jade is graceful.

Don't fold the fragrance, layers of green leaves carry poems.

The last sentence of the comment is better, and the second sentence should be "Stand tall and stand slim". "Folding" is a bit crude.

12. Xu Yanhua

Teachers and students gather in South Lake to enjoy the lotus.

In June, the northern spring city, the pond is very beautiful.

Suddenly, the tourists looked at the bar, only to see fish and shrimp playing in the water.

The comments are a little comprehensive, the couplets are very dynamic, and the first four words of the third sentence are uneven. Adjust the tone again.

Yang Liucui is by the lake, and the plank road is near Tang Qian. Occasionally there are lotus flowers and dragonflies standing on them.

Enjoy the beauty of fairies and dance. When friends meet, Spring City is the first garden.

The division of labor is clear, the organization is clear, and the confrontation is poor, but it is also a "bee waist".

Liu Baohua 13

Guanhe

Clear water meets the sky, green lotus floats, and hibiscus is reflected in the pool wave.

There are two fantastic scenes and all kinds of songs.

The comments were good and harmonious, and the last sentence was wonderful.

Yu He

The drizzle fell on the lotus field, and ripples swirled on the pool surface.

After the rain, the hibiscus is more elegant, and its smiling face is as beautiful as a fairy.

Comments, close to the topic, write a beautiful state, and use personification.

harmonious

As the sun sets, South Lake is a water cloud sword.

Graceful and beautiful shadows are swaying gently, splashing ink and painting.

Comments, generalizations and generalizations are very accurate, and you will have an ornamental experience at a glance.

14. Bai Jie

Appreciating the Lotus in South Lake (four)

Liuying Lake embankment is charming and fragrant, sending jade for guests.

Pay attention to the quality when the silt is not dyed, and let the wind and rain play.

The second sentence of the comment is illegal, and the third sentence should be changed to "Gao"

The leaves of the green lotus pond are scattered, and the charming mother is powdered.

The bees and butterflies like to smell around, and the lotus flowers are pregnant.

The comment uses personification, but its meaning is not clear. For example, the word "powder" in the second sentence has an uncertain meaning. "Butterfly", enter the sound.

Lotus leaf guests came and set up the stage face to face. Laugh with hibiscus to make the audience happy.

It seems that it is of little significance to write a single comment on the lotus leaf, and the ending sentence is also out of order.

A pole holds up the pink flowers, the green leaves are staggered, and the hands are pulled.

Trembling innocent people see drunkenness, enjoy lotus and love stone bridge.

Comment on this song is the best, with scenes and a foothold. Purity, it is necessary to change to purity to conform to the law.

15. Yu Shuqing

Zanbailian

?

Mud doesn't pollute the inside, but it smells clean. Handsome and proud, it is peerless from generation to generation.

The attitude of praise is clear, the second sentence is illegal, and it is "clean". The ending sentence is lonely and flat, with true rhyme and non-offensive rhyme.

Appreciate lotus flowers

When you first arrive, you are like a jade pool, and you are fascinated by elegance.

The jade-covered red pavilion stands tall, and poetry and painting are the best time.

Accurate evaluation and description, the last sentence is brilliant. Keep trying. Wei should be Jia.

16. Zhang Guofu

Nanhu shanghe

A light boat swings on the lotus pond, and two herons fly on the lake.

Teachers and students take photos and love Leng Xiang.

Comments have a sense of picture, but the first three sentences are illegal. "Whip"? What do you mean?

Shuilianqu

Pearls with round leaves are slippery, and beautiful water raises lotus flowers. The breeze sends the lotus, and the blue waves sing salsa.

The second comment: the imagination is novel and clever. It is good to write the ending from the perspective of sound, but unfortunately the ending sentence does not conform to the law.

17, Ji Xiaoyan

The feeling of watching lotus flowers

Walking through the South Lake to see the lotus flowers, the companions are different from year to year.

I don't think youth is fading. I can teach children to recognize flowers.

Comment on the mentality of the elderly, written really. The last sentence may be even.

18, Tian Berlin

1, Yong Lian

At the end of summer, in bloom, Nanhu Lake, the wind blows gently and smells fragrant.

A clean body is not afraid of mud stains, and a slim and graceful figure sets off her pink cheeks.

Comments from big to small, layer by layer, highlighting the picture and image of the last sentence, passed.

2. Thanks to Mr. He

Teachers and students appreciate the lotus pond in dusk and summer, and their poems are different.

Beautiful girls look at flowers and leave beautiful pictures, while handsome guys enjoy lotus fragrance.

Commenting on couplets is interesting, but the ending sentence is illegal. Just change "lotus" into "lotus root".

19 Chen Xuezhi

1、? Appreciate the heart of lotus flowers

The green willows on the bank are light and the wind is light, so you can walk by the lake and meet them.

Listening to the teacher's Chinese teaching, I only want to turn poetry into poetry.

The evaluation is frank and sincere, and the situation is relatively harmonious. Keep trying.

Step 2 reward the lotus

Dew drops drop into the heart of a quiet night, and the lake embankment is swaying.

Where can I find the rhythm of my backpack? Expelling the sky was inspired.

The comment wrote a thoughtful modality, which is very true. The last sentence "dissolution" is not well used, so it can be changed to "prayer".

20? Lu

1 "reward"

The lake reflects the green lotus, and the beautiful state sends a happy song.

Tea is gently rotated, and there are not many jade photos.

The evaluation is very good, the last sentence is brilliant, and the first four words of two or three sentences are vivid and mature.

2 "Watching the Lotus"

Out of the water, hibiscus blooms in the sun, and the style is unique.

The south wind doesn't understand aromatic language, and the jade face is ashamed to invite guests.

The evaluation image is outstanding and personification is well used. But the second sentence "ingenuity" is not accurate, think again.

3 "anthomaniac"

In June, hibiscus came out of Bichi, graceful and seductive.

Beautiful and elegant, a poet, was moved and wrote a poem.

The comments highlight the theme of the event, which is very good. The third sentence can be changed to "the poet is elegant and talented."

2 1. Huang Xiandong

Look at the lotus (two songs)

one

The water is clear in Ye Ming, and the mud roots are clean and the lotus roots are fresh.

A glimpse of the summer scenery in Yaochi makes people feel relaxed and happy.

Comment on the arrangement and antithesis of the first couplet short sentences, which is not easy to construct. Turbidity and noise can be changed to "pollution", "blindness" can be changed to "attention" and "violet" should be changed to "red lotus"

Secondly,

There are stars floating on the lake, and people are very stuffy. Leaves are sparse, lotus is red and slender.

Eyes fascinated by the beautiful scenery, heart full of poetry. Don't get all the dust, be proud of yourself.

Comment on the novel metaphor of the first couplet is a vision. The antithesis is basically passed, and the couplets can be adjusted:

"The lotus root is deep in the leaves, and the red flower is lined with a thin waist."

22. Enjoy the lotus and collect the wind (two songs)? Li Zhou

?

Layers of green umbrellas are purples, and pink faces are dragging in the water.

How many people are as pure as pollution and as eternal praise?

Comment on the first couplet to describe the image, and the last couplet to discuss praise, with natural structure. Chew the last sentence.

There are clear waves, birds singing and fish singing on the Liuan of the lotus pond, and laughter is repeated.

The crane is young and the heart is not old, and the poems are inspired.

Comment on the changes and difficulties of the first set of short sentences in the Contract; The end of the sentence is not allowed to be "stacked" and rhymes, so it can be changed to "carried" and loaded and checked.

23. homework? Zhou liansheng

1. Summer night lotus pond

On a summer night, the moonlight in the lotus pond is like a hook, and the lotus leaves are romantic.

The bottom of the fish is rippling, and the water ripples.

The commentary is an imaginary scene, but the tail couplet is beautiful, which sets off the panorama of the first couplet as a close-up.

2. Lotus pond in the rain

Xia Feng in the green lotus pond is in bud in the blue waves.

Dragonflies stop dancing like jade, and the rain hits the lotus flower.

Comments have opinions, processes and novel ending sentences. The first word in the third sentence should be "dragonfly", and the word "station" behind it itself means stop.

24.？ Yu shuxuan

1.？ Guanhe

The lotus pond after the rain is bright in color and full of green leaves.

Xianzi jade bone is elegant and spotless.

The review went smoothly, but the main body-Lotus was missing!

2. The lotus pond is a scene

A piece of clear red lotus, couples are ashamed to smile and hold hands.

Green grass and green lotus accompanied by moonlight, Yuanyang spent thousands of years drunk.

Comment on Lotus as "Yuanyang Flower", a novel! If the second sentence is illegal, change "item" to "* * *".

25. Li Yuedong

Hetangbian

A hundred years ago, willows guarded the lake, and tourists tasted lotus trees.

Birds sing cicadas, frogs jump, and a red sun hangs in the sky.

The panoramic description is very good, especially the third sentence is full of the rhythm of life, and the last sentence implies the root of life, which is not quite in line with the real scene, but it is also understandable. "Taste" should be changed to "view".