Close? Keys? Words: 550 words in the sixth grade of Qiuyou Park Primary School.
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This article applies to: the sixth grade of primary school.
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This composition is a 550-word composition about the sixth grade of primary school. The title is Autumn Tour in Changhong Park. Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. On a sunny day, I went to Changhong Park. Wow. Changhong Park is really big. When I walked into the gate, I saw many things. Next, I will tell you what Changhong Park is like!
I walked into the pavilion. Wow, what a big pavilion!
I also had a cup of tea in it!
Going to the fitness equipment again, working out. Really comfortable!
I went to the lotus pond again, where there are many kinds of lotus flowers. The two sisters were dressed in white, a breeze blew, and lotus flowers danced in the pond. Some of their dishes are spread out in two or three pieces, some are all spread out, and some are blossoming ... Walking along the lotus pond, they come to the ancient and spectacular Changhong Bridge. Wow, a sea of people, some girls are playing by the bridge.
When I walked home, I was still slowly remembering the beautiful scenery in the park on the way. It's so beautiful that I can't leave it. I will definitely go to Changhong Park next time. Teacher's comment: This article of the little author mainly tells the story of his visit to Changhong Park. The full text describes the activities of the young author in the pavilion, fitness equipment, lotus pond and Changhong Bridge in the park in the order of visiting. Among them, the description of the lotus pond is the highlight of this paper. "Sister Lian is dressed in white, a gust of wind blows, and the lotus dances in the pool", which shows the scene of the lotus swaying with the wind. The "two or three dishes spread out" in the article should be "only two or three dishes spread out", and "I am still slowly remembering the beautiful scenery in the park on the road" should be changed to "I am still slowly remembering the beautiful scenery in the park on the road". In addition, some languages in the article are too colloquial, so the author should pay attention to this problem. (Xue Le China famous teacher: Teacher Zou Zi) 2009-10-921:19: 00.