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Word count: 1000 word composition

This article is suitable for: senior one and senior three.

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This composition is about 1000 words in Grade Three. The topic is "school playground". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. We have a beautiful school with a big playground in the northeast corner. As soon as you walk into the playground, you can see a green lawn. After a spring rain, the grass can't wait to get out of the ground and look at this beautiful world curiously. A spring breeze blew, and the grass danced like a beautiful girl. If you are tired. You can lie on the lawn, and the grass will gently massage you and make you feel comfortable. If you walk barefoot on the lawn, the grass will tickle you, make you laugh and drive away all your troubles. Surrounding the lawn is a standard red plastic runway, about 400 meters long. When I go to physical education class, my classmates will have a running race here. The sound of "click, click" constitutes a wonderful piece of music. When class is over, the students jump rope, play basketball and fight on horseback on the runway ... There is an octagonal stone pavilion next to the runway called Range Rover Pavilion. During the sports meeting, athletes are tired in the playground, so they have a drink in the pavilion and have a rest. A breeze will make you feel relaxed and happy. There is a row of tall boxwood on the left side of the exhibition hall, just like the green environmental protection guards standing there, reminding us not to litter at all times. In autumn, boxwood gives off bursts of fragrance, which can be smelled everywhere on campus, as if the whole campus is immersed in this fragrance. The fragrance attracted some lovely birds, who were twittering and singing beautiful songs on the branches. The bamboo forest in front of the playground is also beautiful. In summer, the scorching sun scorches the earth and makes people sweat. At this time, you can go to the bamboo forest to enjoy the cool. Some students often play hide-and-seek in the bamboo forest. In winter, after a heavy snow, students rushed to the bamboo forest, shaking this tree and that tree, and the snow on the bamboo fell one after another, as if entering a white fairy tale world. Next to the bamboo forest, there is a place that everyone likes to go, and that is the children's paradise. During extracurricular cultural and sports activities, students go to Children's playing tag. Watch him climb up and down later, as smart as a monkey. There are many kinds of fitness equipment in the children's playground, such as parallel bars, horizontal bars, seesaws, etc ... There are two colored steps next to the children's playground, which are called colored steps because they have seven colors of red, orange, yellow, green, blue, cyan and purple, like a rainbow. During the sports meeting, the students sat here and shouted desperately for their classmates. The scenery around our school playground is really beautiful!

Welcome everyone to have a chance to watch it carefully. Teacher's comment: Wow, in the author's pen, we can clearly "see" the whole playground and the beautiful scenery around it, as if we were there. It can be seen that the writing skills of the young author are quite profound, and the framework and text of the full text are in place. The little author showed readers the school playground from all directions and angles. He started from the entrance of the playground and constantly changed the angle of introduction, but the reader can still clearly understand his position, which shows that the little author's quotation is very accurate. It can be seen that he has made great efforts, and he must have described it with a well-planned plan. In addition, it is worthy of recognition that the young author has strong language application ability, rigorous thinking and clear organization. His description of the playground and the surrounding scenery is very detailed, and his written expression is also very wonderful. For example, this paper describes the lawn on the playground from many angles by anthropomorphic writing techniques, which makes readers eager to see the lawn with their own eyes. Through the introduction of the children's paradise and the play of the students in the paradise, the playful nature of their childhood is shown. You can see a green lawn. It is rare for a fourth-grade student to write such a high-level article! Keep moving! (Xue Le China famous teacher: Teacher Gao Dandan) 2009-4-1321:47: 00