"A smile solves a thousand worries." Next, let's have a one-minute fitness activity. According to the teacher's instructions, let all the students laugh.
Under the guidance of the teacher, the students smile, laugh or laugh in different postures. ) teacher: when everyone laughed just now, their expressions were brilliant. In fact, the language about "laughter" is also rich and colorful. Do you know the word "laugh"? Health: fake smile, sneer, hide a knife in the smile, laugh at meat but not smile.
Teacher: These smiles are not good, so it's better not to use them at ordinary times. Student: Smile, laugh, clap your hands and laugh. Learn from pot calling the kettle black: Students are really knowledgeable and talented! The teacher also collected some words about "laughter", let's "walk into the kingdom of laughter" together.
(Projection shows more than 50 words about "laughter" for students to read aloud) Teacher: Do you know the meaning of so many "smiles"? When students ask questions, the teacher asks them to explain or ask them to perform. If it is really difficult to understand, the teacher will explain. (1) "Laughter" is used to evaluate the happiness after the practice activities that induce happiness.
The teacher guides the students into the process of writing fragments. Teacher: Please choose the part that impresses you the most according to the plot you have observed, such as "Acting out laughter" and "Persuading laughter", write a specific and well-imagined segment to make it unique, and write a famous saying about your life and study in eight minutes.
(After about 6 minutes, the students finish the fragment writing one after another and give the exercise paper to the teacher. ) teacher: let's exchange our study results together.
(Showing the students' exercise papers with a physical projector) S: The best part is that the students laughed. When Teacher Fang gave the order, he clapped his hands and laughed.
Not only clapping your hands is harmful, but kicking your feet is also harmful. Teacher: This classmate writes quickly. Who will comment on the fragment she wrote? Health: She wrote a typo, that is, the terrible word "Li".
Teacher: The students who are performing are very good. I think this student's language is also very powerful, but not the most powerful. If you can change these two "awesome" into other sentences, but you can express "awesome" without the word "awesome", it will be really awesome. Please, change it yourself. Health: Not only did the hand clap loudly, but even the floor was slapped heavily, as if it were an earthquake.
Teacher: This implicit writing is much better than what I just wrote! Great progress! Health: I saw my classmate rubbing his eyes with his hands, his eyebrows hanging upside down, his mouth pulled down and he began to cry, as if he had been greatly wronged. Just as we were wondering, she strangely pointed her finger at the classmates under the stage and burst into laughter.
The original sadness was swept away. My face looks like a flower.
She smiled so happily, so crisp and so brilliantly that she infected the audience, and everyone couldn't help laughing, as if watching a super humorous blockbuster. This is really "this smile should only exist in the sky, how many times can people meet each other"! Teacher: Oh, this classmate's smile is really a "god" in your pen! Mr. Ye Shengtao, an educator in China, once said: "Correction is not picky, we should encourage more and point out more advantages."
Especially for students' exercises, teachers should try their best to care for this tender "seedling". Judging from the above clip.
We can easily find that teacher Fang's comments on students' homework also make them feel happy. On the basis of guidance, teachers guide students to inspire and correct each other, ponder and correct themselves, and seize the opportunity to praise and encourage, so as to promote students' higher-level verbal expression with positive emotional evaluation.
In this process, students not only feel the charm of language, but also experience the happiness of success. Moreover, from the poetic and spiritual language of students, we can also deeply feel the great charm of happy composition.
At the end of class, Mr. Fang presented a happy composition package, which was divided into compulsory and extra points: you must do an activity entitled "Remember 1000 Smiles", or you can do your own composition topic, freely arrange composition materials and choose your own composition form. The bonus title is: 1. Write a proposal: "Let's live with a smile every day" (or a self-made topic); Write a life motto (about learning to smile happily in the face of complicated life); 3. Write a true story: after class, convince others to lack confidence in life, or be suspected, misunderstood, wronged, encounter difficulties and setbacks, write a specific story, or write a composition on the topic of "frustration" and "pressure", and write how you overcome difficulties and pressures through a specific incident.
Appreciating Mr. Fang's composition class not only fills the class with laughter, but also gives students a new feeling, and even the homework is arranged with affection and interest. Compulsory practice actually enriches and perfects the practice fragments written in class, and does not pose learning pressure to students.
And get extra points. It is to let students "jump up and pick peaches" and let those students who have spare time to study do their best in challenging and tempting exercises.
In this way, from the beginning of class to the end of class, it extends to extracurricular activities, so that students can study, write and be happy in a relaxed, harmonious and fulfilling atmosphere from beginning to end. This is the true meaning of happy composition.
2. Describe the actions of the characters when they laugh. This expression is implicit.
Looking back, smile, smile, smile, smile, smile, smile, smile, smile, smile, smile, smile, smile, smile.
Sound effect products
Hehe, hehe, hehe, hehe, hehe, hehe, hehe, hehe, hehe, hehe, hehe, hehe, hehe.
Action article
Laughing, screaming, hitting, clapping, falling, chin falling off, rice spraying, leaning back and forth, cuttlefish trembling, crown tassel broken, crown tassel broken.
Emotional article
Music, coke, happy, happy, happy, happy, happy, happy, happy, overjoyed, overjoyed, beaming, smiling, laughing secretly, laughing.
Substitution clause
Cold teeth, embarrassment, embarrassment, sneer, sneer, ridicule, teasing, grinning.
3. Composition describing mother's smiling expression and language. My mother often wears colorful clothes, long hair, round eyes, a flat nose and a smile on her mouth. She looks very gentle.
Mom is busy from morning till night. She gets up early every day. How can I get bread and powder when I get up? How tired she is! My mother is very enthusiastic.
Every time I bring my classmates home, she will treat me warmly. My classmates all say that my mother is good, saying that my mother is not only enthusiastic, but also the food is particularly delicious. So my good friend comes to our house whenever he has time. I am jealous of my mother, but I am more happy and proud to have such a mother! My mother is very cheerful, not like an elder at all, but more like a friend, so that my friends have no pressure or restraint at all. My mother's personality is very different from others. My mother has a bad habit of not saving face when she speaks. I remember one time, I failed the math exam, and my mother was very angry. Instead of hitting me, she sarcastically said I was a big fool. Maybe some people have the same personal experience as me. Do you know how much damage this has done to our door? My mother is also a nag. My mother always tells me to go to school slowly in the morning, watch the car and don't be naughty at school.
Mom, mom, I am 1 1 year old. Do you need to tell me about these things? Mom, the advantage of my mother is that she is very original. She even knitted me several sweaters! My mother is very honest and often teaches me to be an honest child.
My mother's only shortcoming is that she is talkative. I have to say one thing several times, and my ears are getting calluses. But my mother is really good to me and my father, and she is also a competent and good mother. Mom! Thank you for your love and concern for me and for giving me a warm home! In a word, a thousand words boil down to five words: thank you, mom.
4. The excellent composition "The teacher smiled" should describe the teacher's expression, movements and language, and the teacher smiled.
The teacher smiled? Zhuozhou City, Hebei Province? Class 6 (4) of Children's School of Geophysical Exploration Bureau, email address 1 1? Duo Xuemei has rarely seen the teacher smile since the third year of high school. How much we want our teacher to smile, even if it's just a little! To this end, we wrote in our diaries many times: "Teacher, please smile", but the teacher didn't let us satisfy this small wish.
At a class meeting, the teacher told this story: the teacher is not unable to laugh, nor does he want to laugh. However, what is the standard to measure whether students are good students and teachers are good teachers? It's grades, not grades. In other words, as long as the grades don't improve, the teacher won't laugh for a day.
Since then, I have never seen my classmates go out to play. The excitement in the classroom has become a form, from playing to learning. At that time, some students saw a smile on the teacher's mouth, which made us feel like eating honey. So, we work harder.
That day, the teacher finally smiled. That day, the students came to get their grades. "Chinese 36 people on 90, math 28 people on 90, English. .. ""First in the whole grade! " A burst of laughter came. Those brave students shouted: "teacher, you have to laugh!" " "At this time, everyone clearly saw the teacher's bright smile.
That bright smile is really beautiful.
5. Composition 1 Description of characters' movements, demeanor and language. A group of Dai girls came with little spinning wheels on their shoulders and little lanterns in their hands. The tight skirt swayed in the wind. Their figure is so slim, their steps are so light and their manners are so generous, as if a group of beautiful fairies descended from the sky.
Seeing people sliding around on the skating rink, my heart moved and I quickly put on my skates. The first few steps, some cold and cheerless, turned a few laps and returned to normal. I slide forward again, turn left, turn right, suddenly stop, slide back ... a child about my age, like the first time I entered the skating rink, stumbled and stumbled; Staggering, a squat.
There is an old woman at the crossroads, with a slight hunchback and a fat figure, struggling to walk on the empty road with an umbrella. The wind came at me with heavy rain. She bent forward hard, grabbed the umbrella, stepped back half a step and staggered forward.
Her smile is fixed in the dull morning light, and there is a touch of sadness in her pale and sweet smile ~
She looked up at him with difficulty and smiled quietly, with ninety-nine percent tenderness and one percent resentment in her eyes. But that kind of resentment, like the candy lost in childhood, is still sweet in the end.
Her smile finally got rid of the pain and became pure and transparent, as if she had returned to the cardamom years when she first saw it.
She likes to sit on a high place, with her slender feet hanging in the air, and let the soft wind blow over her feet and feel the coolness of that blow.
There are sadness, anger, regret and deep disappointment in these eyes. But in the end, my eyes turned cold, facing the indifference of strangers.
The sunset in September rose, and she did not move until the night wind blew away the tears on her face and the last temperature on her body, and finally fell into the cold lake.
10 He often looks at it like this for a day, motionless until the stars in the sky rise and light up his eyes. When the stars disappeared and the sun relaxed its dazzling light and shadow for the first time, he remained motionless, but at this time, his eyes would reveal an unspeakable pain and vicissitudes.
1 1 He looked up and saw a very beautiful face smiling at him in the depths of golden light.
12 There was a flash of anger and horror on that beautiful face, and the kind eyes suddenly became biting.
13 Tweety is a beautiful girl in the mountains who is well-known here. She spends every day in the wind, rain and sunshine, but she won't wither in the rain or turn black in the sun. Her face is very white and her eyebrows are clear and bright. When you smile, your mouth flaps like a calm meniscus, and when you speak, your voice sounds like an oriole's hoof.
14 He seems to be completely polite, but when he wakes up, he secretly pricks up his ears and listens carefully to the sound carried by the sea breeze blowing from a distance, because recently his increasingly keen spirit tells himself that something very unusual is likely to happen tonight-
15 Their long silver hair hangs freely in the wind, just like a fluffy jade lotus, which has no roots and opens in the depths of the mountains. Handfuls of peach blossoms fall from their hands, like scattered flowers and rain.
6. Description of the language expression of the characters' movements: about 100 words. The opponent she described the action was her current classmate Q. She lifted the table tennis board without weakness, shrugged her shoulders habitually, twisted her neck, squatted professionally, raised her head slightly, showed her frightening eyes, and smiled and said softly, "Serve!" The yellow ball shot at her quickly, and she bent down without hesitation, waved her arm and hit it back with a bang.
Who knows, the opponent is not to be outdone, and it is a direct shot. She frowned warily, stepped back with her left foot and gave the ball a hard push with her right hand, never leaving the ball for a moment.
The opponent directly "killed the ball", which made her hard to prevent and lost a goal! I got 98 points on expression in the Chinese exam the other day. How is he? 97 points. He was very unhappy, pursed his lips and took my test paper and looked at it carefully ... I was wondering, when he suddenly burst out laughing like discovering a new continent, blinked at me, ran to the front of the squadron leader, dragged the squadron leader to "please", ordered a word on the test paper with his hand and shouted proudly.
The guy who described the characters' language put on a mean expression and said, "Oh, really? I certainly hope you won't bring any change. I think a rich man like you will only bring big bills. "
This made me very angry, so I said, "Friend, don't judge a book by its cover." I can afford this suit completely, but I don't want to embarrass you, for fear that you can't change a large bill. "
After hearing these words, his attitude changed a little, but he still replied with some airs: "I don't mean any harm, but if you want to teach someone a lesson, I will tell you that it is foolish to think that we can't change any big bills you may carry with you. On the contrary, we can!" .