[The first question in the senior high school entrance examination]

Title: Wish

Requirements: 1. Write a narrative of 600-800 words.

2. Mainly narrative and description, interspersed with comments and lyrical expressions.

3. Be clear about the center and have true feelings.

4. Writing should be formal and serious, otherwise points will be deducted.

5. No specific school name or person name should appear, but letters A and B should be used.

(200 1 Yantai Middle School Examination)

[The famous teacher shows the way]

This is a composition topic that can write "he". In conception, we can adopt "horizontal" and "vertical" conception modes. "Horizontal style" can write many wishes of "he", and it is best to spread out the layout. You can also write different wishes of different people. For example, the teacher's wish is that peaches and plums are everywhere, the student's wish is the best in the world, and the farmer's wish is Man Cang ... "Vertical body" can write the wish of "he" at different ages. For example, when I was a child, my wish was to defend my country and defend my country, and when I was a teenager, my wish was to become a student and a youth in a famous university.

[The second question of the senior high school entrance examination]

We boys and girls.

Requirements: 1. Sincere, strive for innovation and originality.

2. Except poetry, the style is not limited.

3. The number of words shall not exceed the grid number of manuscript paper.

4. Place names, school names and names are all replaced by "××".

(Examination questions of Heilongjiang Province in 2002)

[The famous teacher shows the way]

To write this topic, we can start from the following aspects: from the content, we can write wonderful stories between boys and girls, and we can write friendship frictions between boys and girls. From the conception, we can describe the experience, knowledge, personality, psychology and interests of this group in general, and we can also choose a series of "others" to combine them in the form of a lens to show the key points. From the theme, it can show their humorous interest, show their sentimental character and highlight their will to work hard.

[The third question of the senior high school entrance examination]

Love is a very precious and wonderful thing. Our life is full of love, which is accompanied by our growth and enriches our life. At the same time, we are all giving our love to make the world a better place. Yes, we are feeling the love of teachers, parents, elders and even strangers; Some, we look forward to, selfless, sincere, profound and even eternal love. ...

Please write a composition on the topic "Love is in _ _ _ _ _".

Requirements:

1. Please fill in a suitable word in the blank of the title to form a complete title;

2. No less than 600 words. In addition to poetry, the style is not limited, and all kinds of expressions can be used.

3. Real place names, school names and names cannot appear.

(Xuzhou City, Jiangsu Province, 2002)

[The famous teacher shows the way]

First of all, fill in the title, from the real proposition, such as "mother", "teacher" and "friend", from the imaginary place, such as "heavy" and "warm as the sun" Then straighten out the train of thought, for example, writing "heavy affection" can spread the love of a series of people, and writing "maternal love" can intercept a small matter to highlight the selflessness of love. Delicate description, sincere feelings.

Pay attention to the test site

1. Describe the characteristics of the natural environment.

2. Describe the form of natural scenery.

3. Describe the situation in a certain area.

4. Show the style of a season.

5. Record the experience of visiting places of interest.

6. Show the process of observing human landscape.

Knowledge accumulation

Landscape writing refers to articles that mainly describe representative natural phenomena and natural environment.

Natural phenomena and natural environment usually refer to seasons and seasonal changes, and the forms or conditions of the earth, mountains and rivers, the sun, moon and stars, rain and snow, flowers and trees, and regional features.

There are many ways to write scenes, and the common ones are as follows:

1. Comparative landscape method. The use of contrast expression can highlight the subtle differences of "scenery". For example, in the article Wisteria Waterfall, the author compares a small wisteria plant more than ten years ago with the Wisteria Waterfall in front of him, showing the completely different characteristics of the times between the Cultural Revolution and the reform and opening up period; In the article "Hometown", the author compares the beauty of hometown twenty years ago with the depression of hometown in reality, and reveals the reality that the rural economy has gone from bad to worse since the Revolution of 1911.

2. Anthropomorphic landscape method. Personifying "Jing" by personification can make "Jing" full of vitality. For example, in the article "Visiting friends in the mountains", the author walked into the mountains with "full good mood" and rich imagination, and walked to the edge of the mountain stream. "Friends in the mountains"-ancient bridges, forests, mountain springs, white clouds, waterfalls, cliffs, canyons, larks, stones, fallen leaves, florets, thunderstorms, coopers and ants.

3. The writing of the metaphor landscape. The use of metaphor makes the scenery in the painting more vivid and concrete. For example, in Zhu Ziqing's Spring, fire, chardonnay and snow are used to describe spring flowers, ox hair, needles and filaments are used to describe spring rain, and newborn dolls, little girls and strong young people are used to describe spring. A series of metaphors are used to describe the beautiful spring in Jiangnan.

4. The method of combining static and dynamic. Scenery description should be combined with dynamic and static. Some natural phenomena, natural environment and social environment are in a relatively static state, while others are in a constantly changing state. We should not only write down its static state, such as the position, shape, size and color of the scene, but also write down its dynamic state, as well as the changes of the instantaneous shape, position, sound and color of the scene. The scenery should be dynamic and static, dynamic and static, vivid and vivid, leaving a deep impression on readers. For example, Lu Xun's "Social Drama" describes a mountain scene when sailing on a spring night: "The dark rolling mountains, like the passionate iron beast ridges, all run far to the stern." In short, turning static into dynamic, writing static with dynamic, set off the eagerness to watch social drama.

5. Sketch method. Also known as "line drawing", it is a concise expression technique without any modification and rendering. This technique can keep the original flavor of life. For example, in the first part of "From Baicao Garden to San Tan Yin Yue", when the author wrote the winter scenery of Baicao Garden, he wrote the endless fun of Baicao Garden by line drawing.

6. Fine pen description. Also known as meticulous description, that is, attention to detail description, showing its unique characteristics. For example, in the article "Praise of Poplar", the author described the trunk, branches, leaves and bark of poplar in detail, showing the characteristics of poplar's integrity, unity, upward and simplicity.

7. Comprehensive expression. That is, all kinds of expression techniques are comprehensively mobilized to describe the characteristics of the scenery. To write a scene, we can use various rhetorical devices comprehensively, or mobilize various senses and describe it repeatedly in many ways and at many levels. For example, in Yan Lu's Listening to the Tide, the author mobilized many senses such as vision, taste, hearing and touch, and wrote the scene when the tide came. This pre-emptive force has firmly grasped the reader's desire to read. The article "From Baicao Garden to San Tan Yin Yue" also mobilizes vision, hearing and taste to describe the beautiful scenery of Baicao Garden, which is colorful and interesting. Sometimes it even transforms one feeling into another to describe the scenery. For example, Zong Pu wrote in the article "Wisteria Falls": "In addition to Guanghua, there is a faint fragrance, which seems to be lavender, and it covers me gently like a dream." The author uses vision to write the sense of smell and show the illusory fragrance to the readers.

Excellent thinking

How can I write a good scene?

1. Grasp the characteristics. That is to say, we should observe carefully and grasp the characteristics of the scenery. Pay attention to the observation method, generally in accordance with the "whole-part (key observation part)-whole" order. We should not only observe the static state of the scene, but also observe its dynamics and grasp its characteristics. The characteristics of scenery are objective. Due to the different structural factors, the structural characteristics of different scenery, such as shape, color, posture, luster, sound and so on, are very different, and their personalities are distinct. Geographically, mountains, plains and deserts are very different. Even if it's all wind, frost, rain and snow, Jiangnan is different from the north. As far as time is concerned, the scenery in spring, summer, autumn and winter is different within one year. Even in the same season, there are differences between southern Xinjiang and northern Xinjiang. Therefore, we must carefully observe and grasp the essential characteristics of the landscape when writing about it.

2. Write down the grade. The characteristics are determined, and they should be described in a certain order. The order of scenery writing should meet the needs of performance. Landscape articles are usually described in the observation order of the first person "I (the author)", or arranged according to the change of observation points and time order. If it is a fixed observation point, it can be written according to spatial order, in chronological order and according to the author's whereabouts clues. If it is a moving observation point, it is generally written in combination with the order of time and space. Especially when describing a scene, we should pay attention to the combination of static and dynamic, or static before moving, or static before moving, or turning static into dynamic, or writing static with moving; We should also pay attention to what we hear, see, smell, taste, touch and think in a certain order and at different levels, so as to give readers an all-round feeling.

3. integrate into feelings. "All landscape words are emotional words". In nature, "landscape" itself has no emotional color, but once it is written by the author, it will carry the author's feelings and is no longer a purely natural thing. It is often the author who directly or indirectly expresses his feelings about the scenery with lyrical style while describing the scenery. When writing a scene, you should mobilize your imagination and show your unique and true feelings about the scene. You can express your feelings directly, such as Zhu Ziqing's Spring. Through the description and rendering of the scenery in early spring, the article expresses the sincere feelings of loving spring, life, confidence in the future and beautiful vision; Can also be combined with narrative, description, etc. Indirect lyricism permeating between the lines, such as Lao Shan Street by Lu, describes the scene of soldiers sleeping on the edge of a cliff in the middle of the night: "... besides, it is silence. There are unpredictable sounds in my ears, which are far away and close, loud and finely cut, like spring silkworms chewing mulberry leaves, like wild horses galloping on the plains, like mountain springs sobbing, like surging waves, the tranquility of "spring silkworms chewing mulberry leaves", the freedom of "wild horses galloping on the plains", the quietness of "mountain springs sobbing" and the vastness of "surging waves"

4. temper the language. Any article needs to hone its own language, especially when writing landscape articles. Generally, it can be tempered from the following aspects: 1 the diversity of words (whether each verb, adjective, quantifier, etc. Accurate or not); 2. Interlaced use of long and short sentences (solemn long sentences and lively short sentences); Whether the phonology of the three sentences is harmonious (harmonious phonology is conducive to reading aloud); Proper use of figures of speech (such as quoting allusions and poems) can increase the legendary color of the article, add poetry to the scenery and enhance the cultural connotation of the article; The application of parallelism and duality. Can enhance the momentum of the article language

Interpretation of knowledge and ability

[The first question in the senior high school entrance examination]

Topic: Rainy days, I remember. ...

Requirements: 1 Pay attention to environmental description and integrate scenes; You can write people's narratives or associate them with imagination; No less than 600 words.

(2000 Zibo Senior High School Entrance Examination Composition)

[The famous teacher shows the way]

The title "Requirements" points out that to describe the environment, we must grasp this key information and describe the rainy environment. It can be described as romantic in rainy days, quiet in rainy days and bad in rainy days. You can write down your thoughts on rainy days, or you can write down the changes of your thoughts on different rainy days ... In any case, you should combine your own psychology to express your feelings in the face of this scene.

[The second question of the senior high school entrance examination]

Read the following materials (sketches), and then write an article based on narrative description as required.

During the summer vacation, Mr. Wang led our class to visit Chihu Mountain.

In the morning, we began to climb the mountain. We came to the zoo on the hillside (1).

Go through the Woods and grass (2) and come to the small bridge (3). The river under the bridge is very clear.

After crossing the bridge, there is a huge stone with a Tang poem engraved on it.

Opposite the boulder is a deep pool. The sound of falling into the water was loud and loud, and water droplets danced, forming a foggy Chen Hong.

Suddenly it began to rain. We watched the waterfall (8) in the waterfall pavilion (7). Someone is telling a legend about Chihu Mountain.

On a sunny day, we climbed the stairs to the top of the mountain and saw a lake (9) like the sea.

Looking at the distant mountains, white clouds and sunset (10), we are all very happy.

Requirements and tips:

1 Please write down the three scenes in 10 (that is, write the scenes you are familiar with or like) in detail in the first person, taking the tour led by Teacher Wang as a clue (the rest can be omitted).

2 imagine that associations should be rich and descriptions should be specific.

3 The topic is self-made, no less than 600 words, and there is no limit to writing more.

4. Writing should be standardized (including punctuation), neat and clean.

(Composition of Liaoning Senior High School Entrance Examination in 2000)

[The famous teacher shows the way]

As can be seen from the "requirements and tips" of the topic, candidates must write a travel note. For students who have no experience in visiting Chihu Mountain, they must rely on their usual accumulation and use their rich imagination to complete the topic. When writing, you can graft the scenery you usually see and hear in other places into your composition reasonably. When describing in detail, we should properly organize and adjust the materials according to the restrictions on the scenery in the topic, so as to be reasonable.

[Magic teacher's touch]

Writing travel notes generally follows the principle of "grasping characteristics, highlighting key points, layering and melting emotions". Materials can be organized according to the time and route of the tour; It is necessary to closely follow the characteristics of the scenery, focus on description, and avoid using pen and ink to average; Pay attention to your feelings when describing.

[The third question of the senior high school entrance examination]

Choose one of the following two questions and write a paragraph of about 200 words.

1 Draw your favorite color through a scene or scene.

Comment on your favorite color.

(Composition of Jiangxi Senior High School Entrance Examination in 2002)

[The famous teacher shows the way]

The requirements of the title 1 are obvious. Write a clip describing the color. The most direct way to describe color is to express the color you see by vision, metaphor and contrast. When writing this kind of essay, if we also mobilize the sense of taste, smell, illusion and other senses, we can express the beauty of color in an all-round and multi-level way and enhance the touching power. Topic 2 is not only about scenery, but also requires candidates to write down the reasons why they like a certain color.

[The fourth question of the senior high school entrance examination]

Seeing beautiful scenery is to feel life; Listening to good music is to feel life; To enjoy deep affection is to feel life; Having pure friendship is to feel life; Pursuing lofty goals is to feel life; To experience the ups and downs of struggle is to feel life; Suffering from painful setbacks is to feel life. ...

Please write an article around the topic of "feeling life", whether it is narrative, descriptive, argumentative or lyrical.

Requirements: 1 around the topic, self-defined; 2 topic self-made; 3. Style selection; 4 Articles should be no less than 600 words and poems should be no less than 16 lines; No real place name, school name or person name may appear in the article.

(Composition of Shaanxi Senior High School Entrance Examination in 2002)

[The famous teacher shows the way]

At first glance, the composition entitled "Feeling Life" is easier to write. The scope of "life" is very large, and there are many materials for candidates to choose from. However, it is not easy to write the true meaning of life in about 600 words, which requires candidates to be good at making it big and small, and choose bits and pieces of life to reflect real life. If you choose to watch the beautiful scenery, you can use a vertical conception to describe the process of watching a scenery, describe the beauty of the scenery delicately, and express the theme of "beauty is by my side"; We can also use a horizontal concept to describe several scenic experiences, portray a beautiful life from multiple angles, and reveal the theme of "Life is not short of beauty".

[Five questions in senior high school entrance examination]

Trees can be seen everywhere: there are deep-rooted pine trees in the mountains, Metasequoia glyptostroboides towering into the sky on the plains, phoenix trees covering the sky on the streets, osmanthus trees overflowing with fragrance on campus, and graceful weeping willows by the river. ...

Please take "Tree" as the topic, expand rich association and imagination, and write an article of no less than 600 words.

Requirements:

1 Except poetry, the style is not limited, and the topic is self-made.

The font is correct and the volume is neat.

No real place name, school name or person name may appear (or imply) in the text.

(2000 Jiangsu Zhenjiang Senior High School Entrance Examination Composition)

[The famous teacher shows the way]

"Tree" is no stranger to every examinee, and there are trees everywhere in life. In fact, you can write, that is, write a tree that you are familiar with or like, and describe it from multiple angles and in all directions; You can also write in vain, that is, give the tree a certain character, express its ambition by borrowing things, and express its feelings by borrowing things; You can also use your imagination and look forward to a magical tree in the future ... No matter how you conceive it, you should focus on the topic of "tree".

Simulation exercise

[one of the topics]

In spring, birds in southern Xinjiang whisper, West Lake in Hangzhou goes into battle lightly, Guilin has beautiful scenery, and the sea of clouds in Huangshan is mysterious ... Indeed, our motherland has a long history and a vast territory, leaving behind many splendid cultures. Have you seen the famous mountains and rivers in China? Please write a narrative of more than 600 words with the topic "I saw it".

[conception]

This is an article that requires a description of the natural landscape.

This semi-propositional composition question. The title requires the names of famous mountains and rivers. So you have to search for the experiences you have seen and felt to complete the topic. When planning the layout of the article, you can first determine the theme of "praising the great rivers and mountains of the motherland", and then show the characteristics of the scenery according to the time of the tour or the materials organized by spatial order. In the process of writing the scenery, I incorporated my love for my motherland and life in time.

[Read sample text]

I saw the Yellow River.

Everyone knows the Yellow River. Because she is the pride of Chinese people. The cradle of the Chinese nation. But not many people really have a chance to meet her. I went to Zhengzhou with my father this summer vacation, and I was lucky enough to feast my eyes on it.

After nearly eight hours of travel, in the evening, the train passed by Zhan's shop. Then my father told me, "The Yellow River is coming." Somehow, my heart is beating fast. How mysterious the Yellow River is in my heart! She is really like the song "The waves are rough, causing great waves;": Turbid flow turns around and forms a zigzag chain "?

I was thinking about it when someone suddenly shouted, "Look, the Yellow River!" "Through the window, I saw a yellow belt in front of me. At first, it became blurred with the dusk, and then it suddenly appeared in front of me. At this time, the Yellow River, like a mother, unfolded the giant's arm and prepared to hold her child in her arms enthusiastically. Ah, the Yellow River, the mother of the Chinese nation.

The train washed up on the Yellow River Railway Bridge. At the foot, the surging waves hit the pier, and my eyes suddenly widened. The breeze blew away the summer heat. The Yellow River, with the coolness of the snowy water on the Wan Ren ice peak in Bayan Kara, is golden all the way, which makes people feel that it is not water that flows in the Yellow River, but golden juice melted by the sun. The torrent of golden juice rolling eastward reminds me of the famous sentence of Li Bai, a great poet in the Tang Dynasty:

How the water of the Yellow River flows out of heaven,

Into the ocean, never to return!

On the other hand, the green hills in the Yellow River tourist area were shrouded in dense fog at first, and the cars gradually approached, showing their true colors and appearing higher. After that, the majestic Yellow River levee was also clearly visible. The levee firmly locked the Yellow River water, and the once unruly Huanglong was conquered. However, in history, the Yellow River changed its course dozens of times and burst its banks 1500 times. In the past, Woye, Henan and Shandong were all bare land and flooded areas. ...

Just when I was full of thoughts and emotions, the train roared and left the Yellow River behind. Outside the window, there is still an endless field. In the afterglow of the setting sun, farmers applied fertilizers to crops in twos and threes. Numerous pipelines extend from the Yellow River to factories and rural areas, conveying vibrant blood.

The Yellow River seems to be a kind mother, nursing her beloved child.

The sun gradually disappeared from the horizon, leaving only a touch of golden sunset, and the farmers in the field were still working nervously. They are building their home with hard-working hands and making it more beautiful. In fact, only in this way can we be worthy of our great mother river-the Yellow River.

(Selected from Peng Tao's "New Writing Method of Peiyou Composition")

[Example Notes]

The Yellow River is the cradle of the Chinese nation. Through the magnificent scenery described, this paper expresses the author's feelings of loving the Yellow River and the motherland. The description of the scenery in the article is very hierarchical. Look at it from a distance: "There is only one gold belt ahead", and then write the car: "Surging Tao Jin", "Rolling eastward" and "The levee firmly locks the Yellow River water"; Write about the scenery behind the car. In this way, the Yellow River I saw was clearly displayed in front of people. In addition, the scenery description captures the characteristics of the Yellow River. For example, the Yellow River is "a golden belt" from a distance, and the author of the turbid Yellow River jokingly calls it "a torrent like golden juice". Here, the Yellow River is written in color, full of love for mother Yellow River.

[Read sample text]

I saw the sea.

During the summer vacation, I spent my holiday at the seaside. Every day, I go for a walk by the sea. I like to let the sea kiss my feet gently, and I prefer to run barefoot on the soft beach against the slightly fishy sea breeze. At that time, I would feel that the world is so vast and everything is so beautiful.

I like getting up early. In the morning, mist floats on the sea, just like a veil over the sea. A red sun is rising from Ran Ran, Ran Ran, and the golden light shines like a golden layer on the sea. When it was a little brighter, the rough sound of conch resounded through the sky, awakened a large group of seabirds, and the sound of seabirds sounded on the sea. After a while, the number of people gradually increased. Fishermen are ready to go out to sea, tourists are taking a walk and doing aerobic exercise ... At this time, the milky gauze on the sea has disappeared, replaced by golden light and flying seabirds.

In the afternoon, the sun is strong, the sea is sparkling, and some shallow-sea animals appear and disappear in the sea. The waves beat against the rocks, just like a mother stroking a child in her arms. When the sea breeze blows, the waves make a "rushing" sound, like a lullaby, coaxing the children in their arms to sleep.

At dusk, the blue-purple sunset dyed the sea purple. Later that day, when the sun went down, the masthead was hung on the night boat at sea. Standing by the sea, from a distance, the sea is full of stars, but it is dark. The sea set off the masthead lights dotted with the sea. The waves of the sea gently beat the rocks, making the whole sea look more beautiful. When you sit on the rocks by the sea and meditate quietly, you will feel that the sea is so peaceful and quiet. If you encounter anything unpleasant, you can talk to the sea gently. The sound of the sea seems to be a comfort to you. Especially when you are sitting on the rock, playing the guitar and singing, you will feel that the sea is listening quietly. Occasionally, a seabird or two glides across the sea, and everything seems so quiet.

I think the most beautiful scenery is watching the sea. At that time, the sea was rough and washed over the rocks, but it was not enough, and finally retreated from the coastline. At this time, many people were barefoot, carrying buckets, scrambling to pick up gifts from Mother Ocean, leaving a string of footprints and a string of cheerful laughter on the beach. I looked up at the blue sky, then at the blue sea, and then at the junction of the sky and the sea. It seems that I can climb to the sky from there. Everything is blue and everything in the sea is beautiful!

The summer vacation will soon be over, but my heart is tied by the sea. I don't think I can live without the sea. When I left, I finally took a nostalgic look at the seaside and said silently, "The sea, the sea, I will come here again next year, when I will see your majestic posture."

(Selected from "Instruction Manual for Middle School Students" Author: Du Xuehu)

[Example Notes]

The author describes the characteristics of the sea in chronological order, with distinct levels; Carefully observe the performance of the sea in different periods, describe the process of dynamic and static combination, the theme is very clear; Comprehensive use of rhetorical methods such as metaphor and personification to increase the aesthetic feeling of the article; The smooth and beautiful writing enhances the appeal of the full text, especially the sincere and natural expression of feelings.

[Magic teacher's touch]

To describe a natural landscape, you must first search your brain and think about what your greatest feeling is about the landscape. What do you miss most? Think about how you feel about it. Then sort out the materials, plan the layout of the article and complete the title.

[Title II]

The sun, moon and stars are so beautiful in the morning and evening. Have you noticed the unique beauty of the morning? Have you ever felt the quiet atmosphere on a moonlit night? Please choose one of the following topics and write an article of more than 600 words.

1 in the morning

A quiet night in the moonlight.

[conception]

This is a topic that needs to describe a natural phenomenon.

This essay topic gives candidates a choice. The topic 1 is a semi-propositional composition topic. Its center is on the word "morning", and there is no restriction on "morning", so the space for composition is relatively broad. Nevertheless, before writing, we should pay attention to the information in the title "Unique Beauty in the Morning" to describe it. Topic 2 is a propositional composition topic, which defines the scope of the composition-the silence of the moonlit night. Only by grasping this key can we write an article that meets the meaning of the question. No matter which theme you choose, you should grasp the characteristics of the scenery, or express your feelings through the scenery, or melt your feelings into the scenery.

[Example Notes]

The morning in the mountains brings people a pure beauty, and life is full of holiness and beauty in the integration with nature, which is enough to make people excited, just like life has a new beginning. The article injects new vitality into people through this refreshing mountain morning. In this paper, rain and fog are chosen as the background, so that mountains, flowers and dew are covered by fresh air, giving people a fresh and quiet feeling; The language is quiet and beautiful, gentle and delicate, and metaphor, personification and parallelism are used in the description, which makes the scenery full of true feelings and harmony.